XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clueless]

Nice tune

A good piece here, it was a nifty track with a little extra added and that went along way in making this a pretty good piece of quality. there are some possble changes that I will explain later, but I like what you have done sofar, sokeep that energy going. anyways nice work sofar. I really like what you have done here, this started out with a nice tune and it continues to flow on like that, a nice piece if you ask me. You presented a decent track here with some unique sounds, and some decent quality In it all, making for a decent track and I really came to enjoy it right from the start. So keep on doing what you got cause you have something good going, keep up the interesting sounds.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So You do have some good tune here so ill do my est to suggest some ideas or ideas and hope it helps but in the end you have something pretty good here and might not need much at all. But I have a few things I would like to mention here so if you do have a minute take a look. Not sure where to improve on things, because I do like what I hear, but maybe mixing it up with some slow then rough changes would be a start.

~X~

Spurta responds:

Thank you for the in-depth review, it's been so long since I've had one of those, and these are the ones I enjoy reading the most.

Thank you for the compliments on the track, and I will definitely look into getting transitions in my upcoming tracks.

Keep rockin',
Spurta

[Rush Wing]

I remember you

I remember you from years ago, and this is just as good as your other stuff, I am really digging that grove, you sure do know how to mix it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmm I think its perfect as is.

~X~

RyeGuyHead responds:

Oh yeaaa, totally forgot about this one. Love when that happens!

Definitely a different flow than what I am accustomed to...

Perfect you say? :D

[Hardstyle 13]

Notbad

Well this was notbad, has an interesting sound here and I like how this starts out aswell, a good piece overall, I wouldnt mind more of this style in the portal.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmm with this one I thought you did alright so no changes at this time.

~X~

usaku responds:

Thanks! :) It's a hardstyle music

[Mrbipolar Commercial demo]

Crisp sounds here

This has a clean start to things and really gets started off well, I like what was set up here and from the start it was decent. You have really shown some quality in this one, very crisp and too a T. And the end here with this one but before I go I would like to say this was different but the sounds had me going, so nice effort there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure how I can help but I will try my best, you have some good effort here but lets see what we can ad to this clip for any improvements. And to be honest I cant think of anything as this was already a plus on my books but maybe adding a tad bit more content of audio.

~X~

mrbipolar responds:

Thanks for the review and feedback!

[-Ab0ve the cl0uds-]

Nice and classy

So this was a nice and classypiece here, not perfect but has some nice feel to it and itjust runs through with some good sounds here, so not perfect but not bad either. Alright this was a classy tune here the oiano playing is pretty smooth and it all seems to come together very well here, there was some slight static in the backround but very little, the drums and piano really work well together here, a good piece if you ask me, And to end it here ill leave it at that a decent piece not much at all needed for some improvments but still a classy piece if you ask me, so i will say keep up the good work, and hope to hear more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure how to improve on this piece as its a pretty solid piece, but i will do my best here to add some insight on somethng but regardless this was notbad. Alright so here is what i came up with, it could be a tad longer, there was some slight static that doesnt really bother anyone but something to look into, other then that this was notbad at all.

1zin1 responds:

I don't know how your comment slipped by me for so long, and i apologize for that.
But i REALLY appreciate the comments and well constructed critique.
Granted this song is a couple years old now, i admire your attention to helping me improve.
Thanks again for the comment. :D

-Zin-

[The Noble Cause (song)]

Its stuff like this that really take me back on these types because they show the quality and time, and really give off a nice feeling to them, so keep up this kind of tune as its very pleasent This was an interesting tune like a song and it really shows the effort and time that must have gone into this, it sounds decenthas a soft feel and touch on this, i wouldnt mind more of a edge and such but it was pretty good regardless. And to end things here, keep up the style, keep up the effort, and keep making these types, let inspiration take a hold of it and let it shine like no other, sorry if i got corny there but let it flow as you do.

~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~
And so i may have some possble ideas here, but honestly you have a good piece already and you could leave it as is and it would still be fine, but here are some ideas kinda basic but they should still work if you are still updating and if not good luck with future stuff. Well like i said there is not much at all that needs changing but maybe throw in some more edge more beats to a darker feel just so that there is more build up.

samulis responds:

Thanks for the review. It's a bit too late to go back and change anything on this piece, it's from a rather long time ago! But thank you for the ideas. :)

[Death Slumber]

I like it

A good piece here, it was a nifty track with a little extra added and that went along way in making this a pretty good piece of quality. there are some possble changes that i will explain later, but i like what you have done sofar, sokeep that energy going. This was notbad i did notice there was some static to it though, maybe that could be cleared up it could be on purpose thouse but it didint sound right for some reason, but regardless i still thought the tune was pretty decent, but regardless its notbad work,hope to hear more of your work soon, And nowto end this, but not before i coment on your piece, there is some slight work to be done but you still know what you want and like and thats all that really matters so keep up the good sound work its looking good sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And now for some changes that will make things work and sound slightly better with this one it was already pretty good, So here is what i came up with wich is probably not the greatest but its something to work with and you have the go ahead to make any changes you see fit. So with some changes like with the static and all this might have more clear and sharp sounds unless that was your whole idea from the start.

ZLEAP responds:

Man I got to this one SUPER late. Sorry about that.

Glad you enjoyed this one. But this is one of those things that will remain what it is. I've since lost the dream and would feel a great amount of guilt proceeding with production without it.

[Less Than Zero]

Decent track here

Something of a unique taste here with this one, it was a good tune and could use some extra tid bits here and there but maybe something just a tad more differant even random. Now as soon as i started this it was really fast and deep, i like the fastness of it and there was some good variaty this is a real kicking beat, it could use some slowing down here and there but not much, maybe add some odd and random sounds a swell. like some random instrament or something. And to close this out i must say you have a good tune here not the most perfectest one but it was still interesting, So with that keep making the awsome pieces.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so i am not any expert of any music at all but there are some points you could focus on more maybe with some more effort, so here are some possible improvment tips. So you have some nice sounds here but it could use some slowing down in some parts then you could build it back up and such, there was some static aswell maybe that can also be cleared up somewhat.

Aethertigris responds:

Can't argue with any of this! Thanks :)

Yeah, the static--I tend to overdo it with the distortion in post.

You're suggesting to shake it up with some random sounds. My excuse is that I originally intended for this to have vocals throughout. I'll either do that or take your advice with some guitar, I think.

[Night Shade]

And here we are with another good piece here, it was a good entry and glad i had a chance to check this one out, its a fan fave for me as soon as i started it, i enjoyed it right away so nice job on this one. Now here was something of some really good quality. it was pretty good and really can get into it as soon as it starts the music you bring forward really connects well, and while it is called a "LOOP" you seem to really bring it out of a loop and more into a song, so nice tune here i thought it was pretty amazing. And so that brings us to the end here, i enjoyed your work it was interesting and unique and somewhat differant but most of all pretty decent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improvments on something that is already pretty good, is always hard but im sure we can find up a few ideas and some advice , so ill add that in just a tad. I think you did everything great with this one, solid buildup, nice quality, maybe adding a few more sounds of unique sounding in there even some random variaty of sounds aswell.

BillBonham responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Android Techno RMX LOOP]

Could be longer

I like this track, allthough this could use abit more too it, for the mostpart i thoght it was pretty good but could use that one extra touch if you know what i mean, so you could look into some things with this one. Hmm well this was kind of interesting, allthough you had it as a loop, it was not that short but more like an acual beat wich was pretty good, seems like you could really add more to this one though. you have a good quality piece here and i really like your style and the way you attak it so nice job. And with all that said i hope that this could become even better then it already is, i found it interesting and entertaining, could use that tad bit more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as i have just explained this could have some extra touched here and there, i will get into more detail if i havent already, but ill throw out some possible idea or ideas. Could be longer with more longer-ness too it and such more like a long beat. cause you already have the vibe it just runs short.

TastyTeo responds:

This is something i did in ... minutes... i know what's missing here but thanks for your suggestions :D i know i just ignored most of the basic shit sorry ^_^