Notbad
Well this was notbad, the "VOICE" was not good, you should think about maybe changing it up a lil like deeper softer different accents and such, anyways nice job here.
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Change up the voice now and then.
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Notbad
Well this was notbad, the "VOICE" was not good, you should think about maybe changing it up a lil like deeper softer different accents and such, anyways nice job here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Change up the voice now and then.
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Felt the same way after i finish it however still turned out alright, lol. Thanks for the feedback have fun on Newgrounds, cheers.
Kind regards,
Wondermeow
Interesting
So its always nice to hear different things here on the audio portal, even stuff like this your accent really makes this work in a number of ways, theres just some quality stuff you need to get a handle on a bit more.
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Good accent good voice here there was some static that could be cleaned up.
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hi dude, thanks for your feedback its good and ill keep it in mind for future stuff
Could be louder
Well this was actually notbad at all, the "SOUND" volume could be a tad louder though it was not soft or anything but could be somewhat louder, but other then that this was notbad.
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Sound could be louder.
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Actually iv been focusing on working on that if you listen to some of my newer stuff, i think i managed to fix it if not ill work harder next time :)
Whooa
This is kind of like a story its a long ten minute one too, the "VOICE" is good but you need to ad much more "EMOTION" and have some pauses here and there.
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More emotion, more passion and paus once in awhile.
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Dude I recorded this when I was 15 and had an awful microphone. I had a ton to improve on back then.
This was literally four years ago, and I hate this recording so much. One of the worst things I've ever recorded. I listen back on it and cringe. Worst recording I've ever done next to the old creepypasta readings I made before then. I've gotten so much better over the years, so no need to add a "things to improve on" section, lol.
I was awful back then. A whole lot worse than I am now.
Another good one
You have a good voice here and you use it very well, nice style good quality, keep up the fantastic style and work, I like what you have done here.
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Awsome stuff here.
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Thanks dude
Good stuff
I really like the "QUALITY" you have here the sound was great the voices were decent and it all seems to come around very well, so I say ad more and keep up the good work.
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Add more choices.
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Thanks bro
Ha
Well this here was a good "LAUGH" and really brings out a "SCARY" feel to it all and such kinda short but still a good use for a laugh.
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Scary laugh could use more scary ones for added quality.
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Haha that old thing. Thanks. Im in a mic transition right now. A lot of my stuff will start to sound a bit more pro.
Notbad
Well this one was a bit different I like all the "SOUND/FX" but overall the "VOICES" are pretty good and welldone, so nice work, and I like how you have added a story here with this one, so nice job.
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Good stuff no changes needed.
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Thanks, this was improvised, the story just came in naturally.
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