XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Through Space And Time]

I thought it was cool

~~REVIEW~~
So this was pretty fast paced as it starts into it, i like some of the tempo changes, that was a nice beat, and when it gets really slow you really push it forward so nice job there on the tempo change, was a nice option, as for improving maybe more of that tempo chnge even a build up of some sort would help aswell, so you can try a few things to improve but overall its pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested some tempo changes, even some build up changes wouldnt hurt, give it a try and lets see what happens anyways good stuff here.

TheRealSam responds:

Well this song is damn old, I don't think I'll modify it as I don't have any of the original files left, and the only way to do that would be to record it again (and speaking frankly, it's not one of my favorite old songs :) ). But anyway, thanks a lot for your review! :)

[DeafMetalz-Metaljonus]

Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
OK so your first piece of 2012 cool, was wondering when you were gonna submit something new, and here we have, and thats some awsome guitar playing very solid playing and kicking, this was pretty good and could go very well with some vocals. so maybe thats something to throw in there at some point, for the mostpart of it, it was awsome glad i popped onto your profile randomly this morning, anyways keep up the awsome work, im hoping to hear more of your great guitar playing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To be honest this is great as it is, it stands on its own just fine, onlything suggestion for any kind of improving might be, adding some vocals, even getting a female vocal on this would be pretty tight.

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks dude! It is my first post of 2012, I did'nt even realize that. Can't go wrong with some brutal shit to start off the year. I plan on doing vocals probably with my vocalist from my band just to do a test run with mixing vocals and other stuff. I'll post it when it is done. Thanks for the review mang!

-Jon

[Into The Darkness-Metaljo]

Pretty decent

~~REVIEW~~
ohmy this is a pleasent tune, now this was the type of style i was probably wanting to hear from you atleast once or twice, this is a more softer feel of your style and thats ok, i even like some of the backround effects and that was a nice touch making this abit more, then we go into some of the hard stuff, really neat stuff here on this piece, other then that it was alright, pretty good if you ask me, as for some improving, not so sure it was decent all the way around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more focus on the softer touch here, the hard stuff is pretty good, but i did enjoy what you did with the softer touch, also thowing in more backround effects would be nice aswell.

Metaljonus responds:

thanks dude!

[ChaozFantasy-Metaljonus]

Very impressed with this one

~~REVIEW~~
Oh very nice with this one, now here you really push the build up, and the first few seconds of this track it has a unique sound, not sure what that was but would have been nice to have more focus on that aswell, but anyways the quality on this is top notch i can see and understand why this one got front paged so awsome job on that part of stuff, the sad part for me was that this was just a tad short, would have liked a longer version, cause you got some good quality playing with this one, love the guitar on this one, gonna add this one as a fave.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So great quality here, great guitar great jamming music with this one, only issue i found lacking was that it was too short, if anything else i loved the build up and would even suggest doing something more with the opening sounds that were kind of unique.

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks dude! This is the actual of the length of the song I was paying tribute too I could have went off and made it my own but I wanted to stay true to all of the fanboys on this site so I did hehe. you rock!

[Nana's Song-Metaljonus]

Pretty decent once again

~~REVIEW~~
ok cool another cool track this almost sounds like some of the megaman ones you have, i must admitt though its nice to see your work front pages and congrats on that, and you should be proud of the score its pretty good for the track you released here, in myhonest oppinion this is not your best and you still won so thats one reason to be proud, so nice job there, i like this track but like the other one i reviewed its need some of that harder tunes you can bring in, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all congrats on the front page, well worth it with this piece, this was pretty smoothall the way through, onlything on this i thought could be somewhat better would possibly be to add some of the harder tones just a tad here and there, anyways nice job once again.

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks dude! but this track is for my grandma who passed away when I wrote it. you may not think its my best but I put alot of emotion into it and think it is pretty good. I will probably go back and remix it to make it sound fuller but I got to find the session first haha. Thanks for the review.

[FuckingGroove!-Metaljonus]

I love it

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice on this one, starts off very good fast and hard, and you mention no vocals but would be nice to get that going in on this, i have yet to hear a vocal version on one of your pieces, so ill wait on that, as for this one, i love you adding in some drums, takes time i know, but more of that type of variaty just makes these guitar pieces much better, dont get me wrong i love your guitar solos aswell, just the variaty brings it all together, anyways great track here with the drums and guitar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now that we have the guitar and drums lets have some slow and fast tempos, other then that this was pretty good if you ask me.

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks dude! Your reviews are mostly about variety and all that which is funny but its cool. When it comes to metal sometimes variety is out the window and its just straight brutalness! As far as vocals go I don't do vocals maybe with my band but not with my own music since I suck lol. thanks again.

[Megaman-Dr.Wily's Castle Stage]

Guitar rocks

~~REVIEW~~
Another great piece with some nice guitar playing and as for mega man this one was pretty good, kinda sounds more like something to do with sonic, but was still fitting to the mega man style allthough i have not seen a mega man games in ages, but like i said still good and i really love the vibe you keep going with thsi, its keeps going right from the start, very nice indeed, so as in the other reviews awsome job once again on the awsome guitar playing, ill look for more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Great guitar playing, wouldnt mind some more variaty though but thats just me, its great as it is now.

Metaljonus responds:

Thakns dude! I am a guitarist dude that's what I do and play and practice everyday so variety is hard for me lol cause I love to play my instrument. So that is what I do! thanks for the reviews! keep em coming!

[Skyrim METAL!]

Very awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so i wanted to hear some of your new stuff and i really love the guitar and i guess you are right these newer pieces sound alot better, and you can hear alot more quality in these, i love the guitar but it was also nice to hear some "DRUMS" in there, so awsome job there, but i have to say you still can kick a good guitar with this one, now as improving, i dont know i honestly think this is perfect, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There really was not anything, i could suggest as this was pretty good if you ask me.

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks dude! i'm glad you dig it! It takes forever to do these drums but i'm still learning in everything and working on getting better at it. Thanks again for the awesome review be sure to check out my other stuff too! I got all kinds of cool stuff so check it!

-Jon

[Super Mario 64 - Boss]

I thought it was nifty sounding

~~REVIEW~~
Now this this was actually pretty good, and reflected off the game at hand very good and was just pleasent and just was very good sounding, kinda reminds me of all them games i played, the drum sounds you have in here was pretty impressive and really seemed to come alive, you seem to push the drums alot wich is ok but needs some other elements in there, i really liked it all though, and you have a decent build-up so that was pleaseing, can be improved with some deeper drum bass i thought, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some deeper bass as mentioned, but also needs some change up in the tune as more of a build up then you had. anyways good tune i liked it.

PaulyBFromDa303 responds:

Back then, getting the bass powerful without distortion was without a doubt, quite a chore. But it wasn't bad. Thanks for the review

[Old Strings]

Neat and nifty

~~REVIEW~~
Well this had a great feel to it and all, its very nice feeling, with almost some sorta hidden message, it had a strange sound to it aswell, but also had a unique feel, i like the differant sounds this gave off, and was very well presented, now how can this be even better presented, sofar its pretty high quality style, and if i were to suggest anything at all, it would just ad another mix of sounds, it already has a mix of good sounds, but more of that could give it that much more, of the strangness that it already is, its awsome though, cause it does sound differant and thats what i like the most of it, so i say keep up with it,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was awsome and differant but i think it could be improved with more mixes of the stranger sounds and such, just a thought though.

margarine responds:

Thanks for commenting. Most of the weird noises were created from bashing the piano in various ways, rapping on the wood, zinging the strings inside it. I recorded this a loooong time ago, had almost forgotten about it!