Nice work
I nice tune you have here, it was intersting and had a kind of unique sound and such, I thought that there could be some extra effort on some clean up but other then that this was alright. Hmm this was interesting, the "VOCALS" are notbad at all, there was some "STATIC" in the backround though so thats something to work on. but you have everything else just right, good sounds nice vocals and good lyrics so nice job all around on this one, it was pretty good if you ask me. And to end things off here, again a decent tune with some little work needed as you have pushed some good effort though and such, i was pretty impressed.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so that brings me to some help options i may post one or two items of suggestion that may improve on things and such, so hope it helps and hope you go with it. As mentioned there was some static and that could be anything just something to look into if you have time.