Interesting
So i found thi one to be kind of interesting it has a steady flow of tune here and some small variaty, i think this could use more variaty and more mixture of some more random sounds just to give it that touch of something more, you do have a good tune here just that whole random feel can make it even better, but anyways you have a good tune here and i look forward to more from you.
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Soi thought this was sort of short, so maybe you could extend it somehow, also adding more random sounds would give it a certain touch aswell.