Wow very nice with this one.
Very soothing and soft sounding, the "VOICE" and even "VOCALS" were a really nice adittion to the backround music and it all seems to work together very well, and the effort does show on this one so you have outdone yourself with such a beatifull piece, and i will for sure look for more of your work, Now as for any kind of improvments maybe some extra effects in the backround, maybe something that can accent the vocals aswell.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here we are once again with some adjustments and improvments, now i may not have any but i may have something possitive, but like i said you may not need it but maybe adding some small extra backround effects something that will not take away focus from the vocals and voice.