XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Death Slumber]

I like it

A good piece here, it was a nifty track with a little extra added and that went along way in making this a pretty good piece of quality. there are some possble changes that i will explain later, but i like what you have done sofar, sokeep that energy going. This was notbad i did notice there was some static to it though, maybe that could be cleared up it could be on purpose thouse but it didint sound right for some reason, but regardless i still thought the tune was pretty decent, but regardless its notbad work,hope to hear more of your work soon, And nowto end this, but not before i coment on your piece, there is some slight work to be done but you still know what you want and like and thats all that really matters so keep up the good sound work its looking good sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And now for some changes that will make things work and sound slightly better with this one it was already pretty good, So here is what i came up with wich is probably not the greatest but its something to work with and you have the go ahead to make any changes you see fit. So with some changes like with the static and all this might have more clear and sharp sounds unless that was your whole idea from the start.

ZLEAP responds:

Man I got to this one SUPER late. Sorry about that.

Glad you enjoyed this one. But this is one of those things that will remain what it is. I've since lost the dream and would feel a great amount of guilt proceeding with production without it.

[Less Than Zero]

Decent track here

Something of a unique taste here with this one, it was a good tune and could use some extra tid bits here and there but maybe something just a tad more differant even random. Now as soon as i started this it was really fast and deep, i like the fastness of it and there was some good variaty this is a real kicking beat, it could use some slowing down here and there but not much, maybe add some odd and random sounds a swell. like some random instrament or something. And to close this out i must say you have a good tune here not the most perfectest one but it was still interesting, So with that keep making the awsome pieces.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so i am not any expert of any music at all but there are some points you could focus on more maybe with some more effort, so here are some possible improvment tips. So you have some nice sounds here but it could use some slowing down in some parts then you could build it back up and such, there was some static aswell maybe that can also be cleared up somewhat.

Aethertigris responds:

Can't argue with any of this! Thanks :)

Yeah, the static--I tend to overdo it with the distortion in post.

You're suggesting to shake it up with some random sounds. My excuse is that I originally intended for this to have vocals throughout. I'll either do that or take your advice with some guitar, I think.

[Rigorous]

Nice guitar sounds with this one.

There was some good sounds in this one, there could be some areas to make it sound better but overall this was pretty solid and decent sound, i will look more into your work because you have some interesting vibes. I love the guitar in this, it is pretty solid and for about three minutes this was apretty good amount of time, so nice job there, i thought the quality could be higher maybe adding some deeper sounds would be a plus, But a good piece of guitar playing indeed, So now ill leave you with just a few more words, your sound is cool and nifty, you have a nice mix and you gave it a uniqe touch, so my ending to this is keep doing what brings you entertainment and the quality will shine.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i would like to take a moment here to suggest some possible points of interest and points that could use some sort of improvment but in the end you have the final decision since its your piece but try and atleast consider some of thes possible ideas. As mentioned maybe some deeper guitar sounds maybe more sharper sounds aswell, that might bring the quality up aswell.

[Night Shade]

And here we are with another good piece here, it was a good entry and glad i had a chance to check this one out, its a fan fave for me as soon as i started it, i enjoyed it right away so nice job on this one. Now here was something of some really good quality. it was pretty good and really can get into it as soon as it starts the music you bring forward really connects well, and while it is called a "LOOP" you seem to really bring it out of a loop and more into a song, so nice tune here i thought it was pretty amazing. And so that brings us to the end here, i enjoyed your work it was interesting and unique and somewhat differant but most of all pretty decent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improvments on something that is already pretty good, is always hard but im sure we can find up a few ideas and some advice , so ill add that in just a tad. I think you did everything great with this one, solid buildup, nice quality, maybe adding a few more sounds of unique sounding in there even some random variaty of sounds aswell.

BillBonham responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Super Adventure]

Alright so you have something good here, the sounds was differant, and i like the unique-ness of it, allthough there seemed to be something missing it was still a good start here. This was kinda nifty, i like the unique sound you got going on with this one, and you seem to have alot of that same sound going throughout so that brings-out some other things that could make this better, maybe have some other types of sounds in there then you could add more of a build up and such. And now that we come to the end here i would like toclose offby saying it was a pleasure with this tune, it was pretty interesting and entertaining at the sametime, hope to see more soon so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so i wanted to try and suggest some options, and some small advice that could benefit you and your work, maybe you will like some of the options or maybe you wont but here you go anyways but do hope it helps with some better resluts on your work here. This has some decent sounds, but there was too much of the same soundsin tis it could be better with other sounds along with it including some better build up.

[Android Techno RMX LOOP]

Could be longer

I like this track, allthough this could use abit more too it, for the mostpart i thoght it was pretty good but could use that one extra touch if you know what i mean, so you could look into some things with this one. Hmm well this was kind of interesting, allthough you had it as a loop, it was not that short but more like an acual beat wich was pretty good, seems like you could really add more to this one though. you have a good quality piece here and i really like your style and the way you attak it so nice job. And with all that said i hope that this could become even better then it already is, i found it interesting and entertaining, could use that tad bit more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as i have just explained this could have some extra touched here and there, i will get into more detail if i havent already, but ill throw out some possible idea or ideas. Could be longer with more longer-ness too it and such more like a long beat. cause you already have the vibe it just runs short.

TastyTeo responds:

This is something i did in ... minutes... i know what's missing here but thanks for your suggestions :D i know i just ignored most of the basic shit sorry ^_^

[Orgonomy]

A good quality tune

A good find today in the audio portal, i am actually glad ipicked this one because it has a unique and quality sound, so thanks for the effort there you really showed me there is still some great stuff around. I love how this gets started, and really takes off and you really have this like a song and thats what caught my attention right up first, so nice job on this one, the "QUALITY" is very good too and you basicly have a well directed tune here with some awsome quality to it, maybe change it up with some mixes and variaty but other then that this was pretty fantastic. So i will end this review in abit but nice job here some good quality, and overall great style with this tune, doesnt need much improvment but i will get into that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So You do have some good tune here so ill do my est to suggest some ideas or ideas and hope it helps but in the end you have something pretty good here and might not need much at all. So as mentioned above, i thought that there could be some slight more variaty, and more mixing of stuff in there.

spot1techno responds:

Hi! Thank you very much. (=

[Byte Or Be]

Something interesting

Another good sound i have come across here on the Audio portal, and its always a pleasure to have some new and nifty sounds such as this one you have presented here. This had a very dark touch to it, i believe that was your intent, but you had some nice sounds and a nice mixture of sounds aswell, it was not too long nore was it too short either, but you generally have a decent piece here and i like what you have here, so nice job indeed, keep upthe decent sound work. As all things come to an end so does this review, but not before i have to say that it was a pleasure, to hear your sound workon this one, so notbad with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Here are some ideas that may work or may not work but you should try and work with some or if just one of the ideas, and if not then you are good to go, but anyways here is a possible idea. Maybe have some sort of bells and chimes in the backround might give for a dark feel aswell.

[Escape the Scape]

I love this sound

Very nice sounds you have here, and some decent quality, allthough maybe some extras could be added, but besides that i thought this was a pretty good entry of a tune. So you have a nice and unique sound i like how you even mix it up as it progresses, you really change it up here and there and thats pretty impressive, the "QUALITY" is pretty good aswell, so the variaty and diverity is great and some good sounds so nice job there. What else can i say that i have not already, but you do have something interesting here, its kinda neat the way this all cameout, and wouldnt mind some more into this but i will get into that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So with some slight improvments here allthough you may not need it, but besides that ill suggest a few ideas and options and maybe you can roll with it, and if not then it is all good since you do have something decent here. Maybe adding some more variaty like some deeper sounds mixed in with what you have, might add to the variaty.

frizzyo responds:

Thanks for the well thought out critique. I'm always looking for opinions so I can improve. I've actually been working on honing my skill with effects and harder styles. I'm just making sure I've got it really down before I attempt making an actual song with them. I'll be uploading more songs in the future, and MUCH more often than I have been. And thank you!