XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Game Over - Ben Oros]

Pretty decent

~~REVIEW~~
Nice build up on this one, and when i think its gonna get too much you just settle it there so awsome build up but i think that was the best part, you should probably add more to it after the build up go into this big climax and variaty of sounds and instraments, as its too dry and soft after the build up, just my opinion though, but anyways this is still good for what it is, so nice job on that end, untill next time good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could use more sounds and instraments, after the build up.

DjOros responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated - and I will definitely look into fitting more into the drop. Glad you like the build up!

Thanks again!
~Ben Oros

[NGF11-WirelessMoonwalker: Kirb]

Another decent voice track

~~REVIEW~~
This was another amusing, another track that shows, more good emotion even in a hip way from some character, but its pretty amusing and funny at times, so with voice you can really, add the emotion here, so nice job there, as i mentioned in the other voice track you could add some mad, sad, angry, hurt emotions, anyways decent voice here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as mentioned in other voice tracks add some mad, sad, angry, hurt emotions.

[NGF11 - Riley]

Cute voice

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was pretty good you really do put your emotion into it, and its actually very good and reminds of of watching an anime cartoon so if that was the idea great job, could be somewhat longer maybe even changing up things like if your mad, silly and really happy even some sad moments but thats just me, but anyways great piece here i enjoyed it, it was a great test for people to see and use your voices, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested some other moments you could put out there just an idea.

Hnilmik responds:

Thanks for taking the time to write up a review~

This entry was for a contest, with rules being to interpret and stay in character based on the images provided, so I'm actually glad that this made you think of an anime! Riley's character image featured an anime character and though I could've used a more obnoxiously anime voice, I chose to be more creative with my entry. Looks like it still got perceived as an anime either way though!

Trust me, I would've done WAAAYYY more, but entries had to be 45 seconds to 2 minutes, so this was all I could fit in within the time limit. Had to cut out a lot of extra gags and emotional shifts. Maybe an extended version someday~?

[RS- Forever]

Notbad at all

~~REVIEW~~
So notbad with this it starts off fast and keeps going with all the differant sounds and such, and has some nice differant sounds in there making for a good piece and the chimes i think they were chimes, were a great piece i loved it and made the track perfect so if i were to add or change anything on this its probably adding more chimes and making the tune longer in the end, so other then that, this was notbad at all and i enjoyed it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
change some of the more reppetitive points with some more chimes and mix it up abit.

KSBeats responds:

Ty very much, I will take this into account on future projects.

[Transformers - Rising Prime]

Fantastioc relation to movies

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was really brilliant, it has the whole feel of the movies and prime, it was abit on the soft side, i can understand it being soft at the start but you should have had a build-up alot sooner and come in abit harder and faster towards the end, it was good for the flowing quality of the music you are presenting, there was just no ump or edge that really grabbed me, but some more power sounds would do that, now i understand that might not be your path for this either way it was brilliant sounding.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fantastic piece and relates to the movies well but wouldnt mind abit more ump to this one. i suggested above.

Sheodon responds:

Hey,

Thank you for the review, it is really appreciated and useable. I will tell you first that I'm not satisfied with the song itself, I don't like it, I'd totally re-do it now if I had enough time for it. Maybe I'll re-do it, but I've been already working on 4 totally different projects at the same time.

Yeah, I understand what you mean. It's slow at the beginning and has its own atmosphere, but could be stronger in the end, with some drums and percussion to make the feel that the Prime risen to defeat the Decepticons.

[Lasting Hope]

I love it

~~REVIEW~~
oh wow this is nice, you may just be my new fave audio artist, ill have to checkout the rest of your stuff, but i got that idea from just the first few seconds of this piece, very pleasent and soothing, so i cant wait for a full version, and if its like this it will be a fantastic piece so i will look forward to it and look for it, again this was pleasent and peacful, very welldone, anyways good luck on your next version.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The onlything this could use is some nice vocals.

AshleyAlyse responds:

That is exactly what I would love in to have in this song, some amazing vocals. It's a little hard with the program I use since Reason doesn't have very good vocal refills. :( But I will try to finish this soon when I'm in the mood! Thank you so much for your review! I appreciate it! :)

[A Merry Little Christmas]

Pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
hmmm nice and pleasent with this little track and love the christmas feel or holiday feel for that matter, it starts off really soft, and while that is ok it was just too soft sounding at the start, so it has a nice build-up wich is very pleasent, and gets better as you play, in the end its very delightfull and again pleaent to hear, so you did a fantastic job on bringing this together.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would like to hear a faster build up, and maybe not as soft sounding in the opening seconds, just a thought though.