This was notbad
~~REVIEW~~
Now this was decent it was hard to understand at times but its still an ok piece, you need more backround sounds and effects to reflect better with the rapping so that it all works better you have a good {TEMPO} going but more effects related would really work also try not to be so repetitive as it just seems abit too much in that area, so all and all its a decent piece but still could be worked on for better improvment, but anyways nice track here and would love to hear some more of it soon maybe even a new verion untill then good luck on your next piece.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs less reppetitivness, more effects and sounds in the backround that match along with the rapping