XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Introspectiv Odissy]

Pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm some nice sounds going on in this one, it starts off soft and picks up with some differant sounds in there wich is nice, but i would love to hear more of an impact sound in the middle, The whole tune is very quiet, and the ending has somewhat of a large gap these are things that could be improved though, say like if you thru in some {DRUMS} some soft drums so it still reflects the other soft instraments, but other then that it was notbad at all. anyways good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some deeper sounds, maybe some drums, and also shorten the {GAP} at the end

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Kosmiker responds:

This track is from my first works, if it was today i would most likely make it different with more layers and sligtly different composition.

Your input is very important and I appreciate any kind of tips that can help me make a more enjoyable and well composed music so thank you for the review. ;)

[[P] - Plankton (Dubstep)]

Nice effects

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty impressive, i especially like how you had some echo effect at the start, at first i wasent sure what to expect, but as the music plays on it has some really good sounds especially the voices i hear from it they really fit well with this tune, and everything cameout very sharp sounding, so a well put together tune here and props to you for that, how can this be improved on? well probably more of the voices echoing would really get this even more, anyways nice job i enjoyed it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more of the voice echoing that really made it more unique.

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Pezmobile responds:

Thanks alot for the honest review. I think i might fix/add a few things on this song now that ive gotten better

[P]

[madness?]

Too short

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was something differant and interesting, its way too {SHORT} and could use some other sounds in there but again its too short so i suppose it could be used in some sorta sound/fx, so as to improve on this you need more sounds, it should be abit longer, not much to review on this one but still as i said needs abit more work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs to be longer more content.

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Christopher78 responds:

Thanks, my newer songs r much more {LONGER} :P

[Broken Rollercoaster]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was abit differant, now it doesnt sound much like the name for say, but you did have some {CARNIVAL} sounding tunes in there which was pretty ok with me and made up for how it started, so maybe reworking the start of it somehow would really push it more that rout, but really for the mostpart this was very good and i like the sounds used so nice job indeed on this one, Now how can you improve on this? well like above rework the start so its more carnival sounding like the middle, anyways keep up the awsome sounds.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding my carnival sounds would be a nice touch, and improve on it overall, maybe even slowing it down at times would also help.

~X~

[- LD - Toy Ranger]

Toystory cool

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute sounding, there seems to be alot of variaty in this, and i like the whole {TOYSTORY} theme going on with this one, which are also some of my fave movies i liked your starwars but this was also a nice touch, i think you need more sound/fx from the movie though you have some in there but could use some more, the backround music is ok but i think you need a more toystory feel to it, anyways good job on this one, i enjoyed it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned could use more of the theme sound/fx and the music itself could be more theme sounding.

~X~

[- LD - Blast War]

Awsome sounds

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was actually pretty neat to hear, im a big fan of starwars and such and this was like right up there all the differant sounds really did sound like what you wanted it to be, and your backround tones really was a nice touch and worked very well together with the sound/effects and music, so all and all it was pleasent and i loved it not just because i am a fan either anyways awsome job, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now i would go even farther and add even more sound/FX to really give it the starwars feel, especially the light sabres

~X~

[Trancotic Symphony Remast]

Very pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually pretty nice tune here it really flowed well and i like how you added some variaty and change it up nice, It doesnt have any gaps that are really noticble, it flowed well right from the start, Its a very pleasent tune, and really. now as to improve on this im not sure but if anything maybe have some louder tones in there for the more intense parts of it, but mostly very good flowing tune you have here so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some louder and softer tones at the propper times such as a deeper tone for more intense feelings.

~X~

Semaphore responds:

thank you very much XwaynecoltX

[The 10½ Heroes ~Remixed~]

Fresh sounding

~~REVIEW~~
and another nice beat you guys got going here, its abit more fast paced to some of the stuff i like, but i do like it, i like the fresh feel it gives, and great work on the {PIANO} nice finish there aswell, but i did think it was somewhat short ended??? maybe its just me wanting more of the style you guys got going here, but i like all the instraments in this one, they all seem to work well together and really make for a chippy fun and fresh tune here, oh and i do hear some of that flute in there but mostly the piano work was my fave so again really nice work on this, make more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It seemed abit shortended as explained above, maybe you can add abit more to it, seems like it would fit perfectly with a game or something, anyways nice job.

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Step responds:

Aw man, why do you keep reviewing my old songs. I feel so embarrassed when you review them lol. Thanks for the review nonetheless :3.

The instrumentation in this is a guitar, flute, piano and percussion, which is quite a weird combination, eh? :P. Glad you like it.

As for the problem with the ending, now that I hear it again, I think you're right about it. It sounds very abrupt and as if it ended too suddenly. So yeah, you're right about the ending xP.

Thanks for the review!
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Supersteph54

[-Distant Seas Remix-]

Love it

~~REVIEW~~
Thought i would get back to some of your older stuff, and i forgot how {CUTE} this was, its so neat and light and fresh and really love what you did with the {FLUTE} in here well i think its a flute hehe, if i am wrong i am sorry but anyways, good tune here i think i will ad this one to my faveourites, very nifty tune here, now if i can find anything wrong or something to improve on, you got me there, but anyways i love how the flute is part of the main focus on this, i would totally use this in a flash, i can see something on an small beach or even forrest, but anyways great tune, i am in love with it already, so very nice job on this even if its older, anyways for now keep up on the awsome tunes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Bring in other backround stuff maybe some very distant chimes or even violin something very soft though so it doesnt take away feom the flute, but to be honest i really like this tune.

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Step responds:

Wow, a 9 from you on a song as old as this? O.o

Haha I didn't think it was possible, thanks! I wouldn't call it cute though, more like horrible, but to each his own xD.

Yeah, there's a flute in here, along with some other stuff which I'm not sure about since this song is in MIDI (horrible quality) and my friend added the instruments (I did the melody).

Regarding your suggestions, you have some very good ideas, it will definitely sound more 'distant'.

Thanks for the review, if you like songs like this then you might like my song Morning Horizon, although that's a bit more epic. Thanks again!