XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[/BBQ\ -- Once]

Nice piano

Ok so first off good piece here, it was a pleasure checking this out especially this kind of entry and had some nice sounds and element about it. I love how this startsoff and theres some good direction and has some decent quality about it, it kinda jumps out at ya with its fast paced atfirst but then thats what really makes it work, so nice job on this one, and great piano stuff. Now before i end this i would like to say that this was a pleasure and loved how this started and ended there was some good quality and it was unique in its own way, so nice touch here from start to finish.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alright so you already had something decent here i will try and suggest some possible ideas but you have done well already but in anycase try some of these things out. Now it was a good tune here, no real issues i suppose i wouldnt mind seeing some more clean up in the backround some slight static but not too much.

[-Ab0ve the cl0uds-]

Nice and classy

So this was a nice and classypiece here, not perfect but has some nice feel to it and itjust runs through with some good sounds here, so not perfect but not bad either. Alright this was a classy tune here the oiano playing is pretty smooth and it all seems to come together very well here, there was some slight static in the backround but very little, the drums and piano really work well together here, a good piece if you ask me, And to end it here ill leave it at that a decent piece not much at all needed for some improvments but still a classy piece if you ask me, so i will say keep up the good work, and hope to hear more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure how to improve on this piece as its a pretty solid piece, but i will do my best here to add some insight on somethng but regardless this was notbad. Alright so here is what i came up with, it could be a tad longer, there was some slight static that doesnt really bother anyone but something to look into, other then that this was notbad at all.

1zin1 responds:

I don't know how your comment slipped by me for so long, and i apologize for that.
But i REALLY appreciate the comments and well constructed critique.
Granted this song is a couple years old now, i admire your attention to helping me improve.
Thanks again for the comment. :D

-Zin-

[(FMC) -=Lost in a Trance=-]

Nice piece

So a random choice for me on this one in the portal but it was a good find and you showed some interesting sounds with a good mix of things i really liked what you have brought to the table, now onto more of the review in detail. Nice and kicking tune here, it starts off right away with thekicking sound and you give it some good quality, i think its missing some better build up and even an ending with a big end piece but anyways this was still pretty good and of some good quality. And so that was a nice piece a nice sound a nice piece all together, some things could be improved or added but i will get to it, in just a tad. but sofar good stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alrigh so that was a pleasent track and a nice find i found today, there is some room for some change though, i thought these ideas could work so do look into them and if not its all good. A few things could make this better like more build up and a grand finale at the end, but even if you dont change anything you still have a great piece, look into some of these ideas if you like.

[The Noble Cause (song)]

Its stuff like this that really take me back on these types because they show the quality and time, and really give off a nice feeling to them, so keep up this kind of tune as its very pleasent This was an interesting tune like a song and it really shows the effort and time that must have gone into this, it sounds decenthas a soft feel and touch on this, i wouldnt mind more of a edge and such but it was pretty good regardless. And to end things here, keep up the style, keep up the effort, and keep making these types, let inspiration take a hold of it and let it shine like no other, sorry if i got corny there but let it flow as you do.

~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~
And so i may have some possble ideas here, but honestly you have a good piece already and you could leave it as is and it would still be fine, but here are some ideas kinda basic but they should still work if you are still updating and if not good luck with future stuff. Well like i said there is not much at all that needs changing but maybe throw in some more edge more beats to a darker feel just so that there is more build up.

samulis responds:

Thanks for the review. It's a bit too late to go back and change anything on this piece, it's from a rather long time ago! But thank you for the ideas. :)

[Eternal]

Nice sounds

These kind of tracks always have a good touch and feel to them, they are decent, and in some cases kind of differant but thats what i like about them, so what i have to say is that i was pleased with what you came up with, keep that kind of style up. Nice flowing andpleasent theme here it was nothing too crazy but it was a soothing tune, i think you could spice this up with some edge to it some build up to it and even more deeptunes to it, just a few things to think about in the progression of making this better. so keep up the decent work as this one. Now to end this, you have a decent piece there is some open discussion for some improvment just a tad here or there, but other then that this was actually notbad at all,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So like i said there are some options for some improvments just here or there, and i have gone and suggested a few here and hope they can help and hope you have the time to improve on this, because it will be well worth the effort, regardless of what you do good stuff indeed. So this one seemed like it needed more of a build up, more of adeep sounds and overall more of an edge to it as i have mentioned.

[Death Slumber]

I like it

A good piece here, it was a nifty track with a little extra added and that went along way in making this a pretty good piece of quality. there are some possble changes that i will explain later, but i like what you have done sofar, sokeep that energy going. This was notbad i did notice there was some static to it though, maybe that could be cleared up it could be on purpose thouse but it didint sound right for some reason, but regardless i still thought the tune was pretty decent, but regardless its notbad work,hope to hear more of your work soon, And nowto end this, but not before i coment on your piece, there is some slight work to be done but you still know what you want and like and thats all that really matters so keep up the good sound work its looking good sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And now for some changes that will make things work and sound slightly better with this one it was already pretty good, So here is what i came up with wich is probably not the greatest but its something to work with and you have the go ahead to make any changes you see fit. So with some changes like with the static and all this might have more clear and sharp sounds unless that was your whole idea from the start.

ZLEAP responds:

Man I got to this one SUPER late. Sorry about that.

Glad you enjoyed this one. But this is one of those things that will remain what it is. I've since lost the dream and would feel a great amount of guilt proceeding with production without it.

[Less Than Zero]

Decent track here

Something of a unique taste here with this one, it was a good tune and could use some extra tid bits here and there but maybe something just a tad more differant even random. Now as soon as i started this it was really fast and deep, i like the fastness of it and there was some good variaty this is a real kicking beat, it could use some slowing down here and there but not much, maybe add some odd and random sounds a swell. like some random instrament or something. And to close this out i must say you have a good tune here not the most perfectest one but it was still interesting, So with that keep making the awsome pieces.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so i am not any expert of any music at all but there are some points you could focus on more maybe with some more effort, so here are some possible improvment tips. So you have some nice sounds here but it could use some slowing down in some parts then you could build it back up and such, there was some static aswell maybe that can also be cleared up somewhat.

Aethertigris responds:

Can't argue with any of this! Thanks :)

Yeah, the static--I tend to overdo it with the distortion in post.

You're suggesting to shake it up with some random sounds. My excuse is that I originally intended for this to have vocals throughout. I'll either do that or take your advice with some guitar, I think.

[Rigorous]

Nice guitar sounds with this one.

There was some good sounds in this one, there could be some areas to make it sound better but overall this was pretty solid and decent sound, i will look more into your work because you have some interesting vibes. I love the guitar in this, it is pretty solid and for about three minutes this was apretty good amount of time, so nice job there, i thought the quality could be higher maybe adding some deeper sounds would be a plus, But a good piece of guitar playing indeed, So now ill leave you with just a few more words, your sound is cool and nifty, you have a nice mix and you gave it a uniqe touch, so my ending to this is keep doing what brings you entertainment and the quality will shine.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i would like to take a moment here to suggest some possible points of interest and points that could use some sort of improvment but in the end you have the final decision since its your piece but try and atleast consider some of thes possible ideas. As mentioned maybe some deeper guitar sounds maybe more sharper sounds aswell, that might bring the quality up aswell.

[Night Shade]

And here we are with another good piece here, it was a good entry and glad i had a chance to check this one out, its a fan fave for me as soon as i started it, i enjoyed it right away so nice job on this one. Now here was something of some really good quality. it was pretty good and really can get into it as soon as it starts the music you bring forward really connects well, and while it is called a "LOOP" you seem to really bring it out of a loop and more into a song, so nice tune here i thought it was pretty amazing. And so that brings us to the end here, i enjoyed your work it was interesting and unique and somewhat differant but most of all pretty decent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improvments on something that is already pretty good, is always hard but im sure we can find up a few ideas and some advice , so ill add that in just a tad. I think you did everything great with this one, solid buildup, nice quality, maybe adding a few more sounds of unique sounding in there even some random variaty of sounds aswell.

BillBonham responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Super Adventure]

Alright so you have something good here, the sounds was differant, and i like the unique-ness of it, allthough there seemed to be something missing it was still a good start here. This was kinda nifty, i like the unique sound you got going on with this one, and you seem to have alot of that same sound going throughout so that brings-out some other things that could make this better, maybe have some other types of sounds in there then you could add more of a build up and such. And now that we come to the end here i would like toclose offby saying it was a pleasure with this tune, it was pretty interesting and entertaining at the sametime, hope to see more soon so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so i wanted to try and suggest some options, and some small advice that could benefit you and your work, maybe you will like some of the options or maybe you wont but here you go anyways but do hope it helps with some better resluts on your work here. This has some decent sounds, but there was too much of the same soundsin tis it could be better with other sounds along with it including some better build up.