XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Willseph - Dire Dire Docks]

This was pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
This is actually a pleasent song here, it flows nicley, as for it being from mario, i suppose it could, it has some of that same beat and rythim, I did however think you could have had more mix and variaty in there for a more game like experience, now dont get me wrong it does have that game feel, just thought you could have pushed it more to the mario theme and game aspect of things, Now i could see this in a sprite action flash easy, as to improve, as suggested above add some more {VARIATY} and more mixture of other sounds and even some backround effects wouldnt hurt, nice music though, i like it, its very pleasent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So some more variaty and more mixture of some new sounds but still on the same level as the mario theme would put this over the edge for me, hope it helps though

[Never Forget (Remastered)]

Sadness in this one

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was something else, i like how you really gave it a good feel with some good {EMOTION} to it you can feel it and hear it with the track as it plays out right from the start all the way to the end, so awsome job on that aspect of things, This had a very {SAD} feel which was not bad thing but you really went far and beyond, i did however think you could have pushed that emotion just a tad more to really bring that sadness out, now these types of audio tracks tend to be harder to review but you really showed me some good vibes with this one, so nice job. hope to hear more of your work soon.indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not much you can maybe more quality in the sounds of it and all, but for the mostpart it was right on, the emotion part was perfect so if anything i would want more pushing of the emotion to make that sad feel come out even more.

[Necromancy (drum n' bass)]

Great starting

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was an interesting one and i guess it has that {ZOMBIE} theme going and i can hear that right away, the starting was awsome and had a great impact but throught the rest you didnt bring that power like you did when it started, maybe thats an improvment change you could bring into it at a later time, now there was alot to hear and alot of differant changes and such but i think you should stick with how it started and really roll with it, its an awsome piece just with it had that power edge like in the start. but still anyways i found this to be one hell of a pice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the starting was the best part, if you could stretch the rest out like the starting maybe it would have more of an impact as the rest seemed to dwell down from the opening start.

[[AD] Bleed For Me]

Awsome druns, inro was too long

~~REVIEW~~
This had a sorta {SLOW} start but i thought that was not a bad nor was it great, but not bad at all, it was kinda soothing if you think about it so for improvment you could probably shorten it by about 10-15 seconds after we get past the whole long intro it really takes off into some awsome sounds so awsome job there, the {DRUMS} were very intense and thats what i mostly liked about it, it was abit hard to hear some of the {GUITAR} though maybe lower the volume on the drums abit, and some {VOCALS} really would {INTICE} this track, but anyways great stuff i did suggest a few things to make it even better, but for now it was pretty awsome.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try shortening the {INTRO }by about 10-15 seconds, just seemed abit long before the actual song started, you could possibly lower the drums volum just a tad so that the guitars have some {FOCUS} that and the long intro it was decent work.

[New Born (Piano)]

Wow Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Awsome this is an awsome track you have here, the {GUITAR} was fantastic somewhere at the start i dont remember because i was amazed at the whole track, as you really have put your all, into this so nicejob all around on this, The {DRUMS} were pretty fantastic aswell, and finally the {PIANO} more of the focus of things here in this track, but was your masterpiece if you ask me, you will for sure get a ten from me on this one, i am becoming a fan of yours from this piece alone so awsome job here and really hope to hear more stuff like this, Now how can i suggest anything to improve on when this is perfect, all i can really say is keep rolling out these awsome yet unque pieces.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I looked to find something to suggest for improving, onlything i came up with, would be to make it longer and keep up with what you are doing, so awsome job, ill look for more of your work soon.

[Path Of Sorrows]

Love the intro

~~REVIEW~~
This was a pretty neat start the {INTRO} in my opinion was the best part and really set the tone for the rest of the track so props on creating something really awsome and something that really sparks the interest to get things going, more audio makers should do that, but anyways props on that, I really like the touches you put on this like the {VARIATY} and how the tune actually progresses to a deep sorrow to something very flavorful, so again mad props for you on those little things that really made this something special, now i cant wait to hear some more of your works, but anyways great stuff on this one, so dont stop now, keep on rocking.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now this one was hard to decide on as everything really did come together very well, but if anything is suggested i would say more depth in the intro as that set the tone for everything else, maybe abit longer? and slightly deeper at the end, just a suggestion though.

[Old Strings]

Neat and nifty

~~REVIEW~~
Well this had a great feel to it and all, its very nice feeling, with almost some sorta hidden message, it had a strange sound to it aswell, but also had a unique feel, i like the differant sounds this gave off, and was very well presented, now how can this be even better presented, sofar its pretty high quality style, and if i were to suggest anything at all, it would just ad another mix of sounds, it already has a mix of good sounds, but more of that could give it that much more, of the strangness that it already is, its awsome though, cause it does sound differant and thats what i like the most of it, so i say keep up with it,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was awsome and differant but i think it could be improved with more mixes of the stranger sounds and such, just a thought though.

margarine responds:

Thanks for commenting. Most of the weird noises were created from bashing the piano in various ways, rapping on the wood, zinging the strings inside it. I recorded this a loooong time ago, had almost forgotten about it!

[Dynamite Snake Demo]

Awsome and differant

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was something differant, i was kinda sadnened because it was not a full version or anything like that or anything, but this has a nice "BEAT" a really good beat infact and i had wished it had abit more and finished ofcourse, the "SOUND-EFFECTS" in the backround really put this on my faves list as the sound/effects made it differant and really just added to the track here, but again wish it was finished as i really enjoyed this one, Now with that all said, i hope you do or did make the full version cause thats something i would like to hear, but for what it is, is pretty good track.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The one thing that could be improved is for there to be a full and or completed version this was just a bit of it and a full version would show off the full presentation of the good track that it should be.

[Metal Rave]

Differant

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was pretty awsome if you ask me, i like the combonation of differant tunes in here and you can hear it change off, so that was a really nice touch, i wouldnt mind hearing more combonation such as you did here, so nice job on being "CREATIVE" on the combination of two totally differant tunes, but you made it work and thats what impressed me, But anyways as mentioned before this could be better if you added even more variaty so why not ad another mix even a fourth one, it could really give variaty, of style and introduce new styles in the track, it would be something really differant but just a thought.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding more variaty would be my first bet to improve on this, you already have a good mix but by adding even more will bring it out even more.

[Messy Marmalade]

Interesting i like it though

~~REVIEW~~
Nice track here, good style, i think the best part was the guitar you really put that part together well, and not just because i love "GUITAR" themes, but because you really presented some nice guitar playing, so props to you on that awsome piece of guitar, Now the "VOICES" were pretty good too but might have been if they were more real sounds, and such, But this sounds so-so, but anyways it was a pretty good piece, i just feel it needs more effort especially on the voices, , but for the mostpart, it was a pretty good track and wouldnt mind listening more, but anyways keep up the good audio music.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all i suggest adding more guitar in this piece, also the "VOICES" seemed odd, maybe more real sounding ones would be better and have an overall better effect,