XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ravey Loop Thing]

Too short

~~REVIEW~~
Ok i guess this could be a "LOOP" more then a track, but still it seems way too short even for nineteen kb, so maybe you want to add abit more to it, more longer sounds just give it abit more depth and such so its not so bland of a loop, well good luck in improving on this, it would be nice to see an update of this. I do understand this one is abit older of a loop, but still with all that said it needs more depth.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
way too short could be longer with abit of depth

[You Do It To Yourself]

Feels sad

~~REVIEW~~
This was nice has a good steady feel and keeps going that way for abit, which is nice, thats what kept me interested, Now it was somewhat hard with what was sang and all but maybe that was the music and lyirics not being matched up exactly, You gave this a good beat and it has a sorta {SAD} feel to it all and such, but i suppose thats the sort of emotion you wanted, but in anycase its a pretty decent piece and i really enjoyed it, maybe you can add more of that but this is an older audio track anyways i like it, keep up the good music.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I had suggested some more sad emotion in there you already have some of that more of it wouldnt hurt either.

[Flawed]

Vampire like

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually notbad at all, it has a very phantom of the opera, which i love, i like the piano feel and tunes you have in there, its a very slow tune but thats a good thing about it, now as to improve on something like this i would try and change up the tune abit not just with the piano, but add some other and new instraments, maybe mix in some lighter piano with some deeper and darker ones so theres abit of {MIX} in there, just an idea or two though, but regardless hope it helps to improve on this one, good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try mixing in sounds from differant instraments, and such, even some lighter and deeper piano would work as well

[eat your rabbit]

Needs more stuff in it.

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually a really good audio track, almost perfect has a good rythem of beats and it was pleasent a good mix if i say so myself, thought you could have stretched it out abit better with more of the differant stuff but for the mostpart it was pretty good, so keep up the good track making, i wouldnt mind hearing more stuff like this, just wish you made it abit longer, maybe thats somethng to work on the next one, anyways good luck on the next entry. I did enjoy this, so keep making some good stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated could have used more stuff in there and a longer feel of it all

[Modern Japan]

Nice and unique

~~REVIEW~~
Oh here is something differant, i know its japanese style but i must admit this has grown on me, and i like it alot, all the little gaps inbetween was odd but the rest was very unique sounding, and seemed to flow along with the unique sounds you gave it, so nice job on this one, really good tune here, and i like the variaty aswell, lots of good mixture in this, about 2.30 secondns ito it, it does get abit distorted, so maybe it was too much for the speakers at that point, but other then that this was notbad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
2 min and 30 seconds into the track it gets distorted might want to improve on that maybe due to it too lod at that one point.

[Paper Mario 2 TTYD : Smorg]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
This was differant from the last one i just heard, it doesnt have that circus touch but is still pretty good, has some good drum base going though, and even abit of the pahantom of the opera in there then you change it up, so that was a nice touch and i thought it was pretty decent if you ask me, so as for improving maybe throw in some harder drum base something deeper so that it changes up with variaty, also longer on the phantom tones.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
throw in some harder drum base something deeper

[Paper Mario 2 Doopliss Rocked!]

Unique

~~REVIEW~~
Ohmy this was really good and has that awsome unique sound i like, but this was "UNIQUE" unique sounding, i love all the bells, and love how you had some fast and slow tones on this one, im adding this one too my faves list, its pretty good and unique, almost sounds like a circus sound, very good piece here though, i liked it regardless, keep up the good work ima look for more of your stuff soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Its really unique and i would leave it as is.

[Paper Mario TTYD : Rawk Hawk 2]

This was decent

~~REVIEW~~
So this was a lil differant you do present some good sounds with this one, and there is some variaty i think it could use more variaty and you could possibly speed up the guitar abit, but its actually a pretty decent tune, it flows along well no reall major wuality issues as it has a good quality sound to it, so all and all i think some speeding up faster tune and maybe abit more in variaty there, anyways great sounds.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As i just wrote you can speed it up a tad, and add more variaty of sounds aswell.