Dark and interesting sounds
You have something pretty good here, it keeps you guessing what is comming next and thats kinda the best part of it, Now i must say this does have a dark and light side especially with the "CHILDREN" in the backround. atleast i thought so. but you presented a good feel to this with alot of effort on your part really making this come forward to something dark and the dark side seemed creepy, so on those notes i must say awsome job as you turned something very simple to something very differant yet the same, Anyways great job on this i was very pleased with the outcome.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improving on this is kinda hard you did give it a dark feel, i think more backround stuff like with the children is a start to make it even better.