Very pleasent with this tune
I found this one to be "RELAXING" and smooth flowing, and is always nice to hear stuff just played for the fun and if not its just pretty nifty as its not too intense, but just sorta plays out and thats what you have here, very nice effort on this one, Now this did "LACK" some variaty, and you may want to mix some new and differant sounds even some backround effects, to add some of that mixture, Now you did have some backround music especially at the start but i think you should add abit more, anyways a good piece here very pleasent.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
mix some new and differant sounds even some backround effects, to add some of that mixture, you dont need much, and if you dont add any its fine as is aswell. Could be a tad longer, just under 2 min was ok, but a tad short.