XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Krowe - Juggernaut]

I like this one

~~REVIEW~~
Great stuff first off, you really start off with something that pushes over the edge has abit of that sci-fi and reallt gets to the point then you also change it up somewhat wich is pretty good, the "BUILD-UP" is awsome and i like how you have alot of the build up then change it up, a very good mixture of sounds and effects in the backround, so awsome job on this piece, i look forward to hearing more of your work, this was fantastic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would like to see this abit longer so that build up can really work through.

[Shadowgate Nightmare -Extended]

Nice tune here

~~REVIEW~~
hmmm now i like the softness of it but i do think you had too much of the soft sounding at the start, maybe give it a somewhat bigger build up and comming in faster, now you do present a dark touch here with this track wich is pretty impressive, so good job on the darkness of it all, but it needs a faster build up, but other then that it was pretty decent, maybe abit long but again its alright and i liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
shorten it somewhat, and give it a faster build up at the starting.

Jonah-B responds:

Thanks!

[Game Over - Ben Oros]

Pretty decent

~~REVIEW~~
Nice build up on this one, and when i think its gonna get too much you just settle it there so awsome build up but i think that was the best part, you should probably add more to it after the build up go into this big climax and variaty of sounds and instraments, as its too dry and soft after the build up, just my opinion though, but anyways this is still good for what it is, so nice job on that end, untill next time good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could use more sounds and instraments, after the build up.

DjOros responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated - and I will definitely look into fitting more into the drop. Glad you like the build up!

Thanks again!
~Ben Oros

[NGF11-WirelessMoonwalker: Kirb]

Another decent voice track

~~REVIEW~~
This was another amusing, another track that shows, more good emotion even in a hip way from some character, but its pretty amusing and funny at times, so with voice you can really, add the emotion here, so nice job there, as i mentioned in the other voice track you could add some mad, sad, angry, hurt emotions, anyways decent voice here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as mentioned in other voice tracks add some mad, sad, angry, hurt emotions.

[NGF11 - Riley]

Cute voice

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was pretty good you really do put your emotion into it, and its actually very good and reminds of of watching an anime cartoon so if that was the idea great job, could be somewhat longer maybe even changing up things like if your mad, silly and really happy even some sad moments but thats just me, but anyways great piece here i enjoyed it, it was a great test for people to see and use your voices, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested some other moments you could put out there just an idea.

Hnilmik responds:

Thanks for taking the time to write up a review~

This entry was for a contest, with rules being to interpret and stay in character based on the images provided, so I'm actually glad that this made you think of an anime! Riley's character image featured an anime character and though I could've used a more obnoxiously anime voice, I chose to be more creative with my entry. Looks like it still got perceived as an anime either way though!

Trust me, I would've done WAAAYYY more, but entries had to be 45 seconds to 2 minutes, so this was all I could fit in within the time limit. Had to cut out a lot of extra gags and emotional shifts. Maybe an extended version someday~?