XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Eternal Pain (Jeffaro)]

It was interesting

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was pretty decent, i thought maybe as a helpfull tip maybe make the {GUITARS} somewhat louder and a more focus sound, the drums were ok atleast i think that was some drums i thought i heard in there, the best parts of this track were the guitars and almost seems if you get some guitar solos in there, so nice job on that stuff, i just feel this was abit on the soft side with the guitars and would like a deeper and louder feel, other then that this was pretty good, good luck on anything new comming up, ill keep my eyes/ears open

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs a louder base or volume sound something though

~X~

[Tetris Remix (Collab)]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
And like i love tetris so i saved this one for future use, and because its pretty awsome, i like how its tetris but does sound somewhat differant so props to you on that, This has a unique sound so i really like this, hell i might even play this while playing the tetris from facebook haha, anyways ways this could be better or improved to be honest i thing you did it justice as is so i would leave this one be, its perfect in my opinion, so awsome job glad i had a chance to hear it and save it,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Perfect

~X~

Step responds:

Haha thanks. This was a collaboration I did with my cousin. We were quite proud of it when we made it, although right now if I had to make a Tetris Remix I'd make a much better one, haha xP.

Thanks a lot for the review!

[All Hail Windows!]

Its differant

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok this was notbad, it was differant, and out of the sounds from windows xp thats interesting guess i never really noticed before, this was an ok tune but i have to say there was not much too it, its ok but would have been nice to see more {POP} in there, i do like the ending thats the sound i do know haha, but really other then that i cant think of anything else for this, the onlything i could muck up would probably be its cute, anyways nice job, im getting there lol

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It needs more pop more something but for what it is was pretty interesting.

~X~

Step responds:

That's because it's an old song :P. I agree that there really isn't much to it. A pretty simple beat and just some windows sounds layered on top of it.

But thanks for the helpful advice!

[Hill Top Cruise]

Nice piano

~~REVIEW~~
This was a good tune here starts off really good and fast paced, props to you on the {PIANO} very good quality, very sharp and clear and i was really enjoying this ones, not much of a gap at the end so you know where it starts and ends, its very good stuff, as for improving i honestly would leave this as is, its a good piece, so hope to hear more from you soon, untill next time good luck on anything new you got comming up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was good as is i wouldnt touch a thing.

~X~

Short-Factor responds:

Thank you, that was a nice review. Although you suggested it was perfect and yet gave it a 7..?

[Saturday Afternoon]

It was decent

~~REVIEW~~
This was nice, has a very great day type of feel, meaning not too hard allthough you do give it a nice almost intense build up wich then changes up quite abit from what it started with, theres alot of differant chchanges in this alot of {MIXTURE} wich is ok with me, just seems like there alot of stuff going everywhere, but really other then that i thought it was alright and liked it very much, anyways good tune here, i look forward to more from you soon,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe not as intense of a build up but other then that it was alright.

~X~

ElectroHarbour responds:

Thanks very much for explaining what was wrong with the song. Yeah it does have a kind of intense build up, especially flattening the chill atmosphere.

[Hero Of The Machines]

Pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this had an interesting {SOUND} starts off very good kinda reminds me of some {BATTLE-SCENE} thats about to start and such, like on distant field or something its very soothing aswell and has a small build up wich was ok with this one, i just found it to be very nice and pleasent. so if i could offer any tips of improving i think i would add some more deeper sounds towards the end, but other then that i thought it was alright with some nice effort on your end, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some deeper sounds in the tail end of the song would be nice.

~X~

XenonMB responds:

will keep that in mind, thanks for the review :)

[-Distant Seas-]

Prety decent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this was great i love the guitar and differant sounds in this one, there was a good amount of mixture in this piece, kinda reminded me of {ZELDA} somewhat, i do however wish you built it up more it had a more straight forward tempo, and needed a push there somewhere, so if anything you could improve on this it would probably be more build up and pushing it over the top, but besides that i liked the mixture of sounds and liked the guitar in there, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more push, more build up

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Step responds:

That guitar is one of the most overused preset sounds that came with FL Studio ;D.

Again, I agree with you that this lacks any 'oomph' or a buildup. These songs are very old and I really didn't know what I was doing at the time. In fact, in this song I desperately wanted to add some drums but I didn't know how xD.

Thanks for the review. Going back to all these old songs sure is giving me nostalgia, haha.

[Im Your Dj]

Could use abit more

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well this was interesting the no sond moment was interesting then the {VOICE} of no dj was pretty interesting i thought at times it seemed too repetitive though, maybe you could lesson it or maybe as another helpfull tip you could have eaco one sound differant just an idea thought, the backround music was notbad either so all and all this was pretty decent and i thought it was pretty good while it could still use some improving other then that keep up the good work, so untill next time good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I meantioned above some repetitiveness, and some extra tidbits that could help on this

~X~

[AB - Up To The Sky]

I love it

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this starts off pretty good i like the {PIANO} and especially like how it {PICKS-UP} nice touch there, the piano playing is very clear and sharp, very welldone on this part, also great title as it has that feeling and the piano just gets better as it plays on, the tune is actually abit long but it kinda works well that way, you start mixing it up towards the middle, this is a really nice piece im adding this to my fave, but anyways great piece, i look forward to hearing more from you real soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
nothing i thought it was perfect.

~X~

AsteroidBlues responds:

Thanks for rev, man ) I really appreciate that )
While i`m writing new stuff, u can hear some of my old stuff which is uploaded here already and some that i will upload in a matter of days )