XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Strykjärn - Svälj Din Stolthet]

Great guitar

~~REVIEW~~
ok so i love the guitar on this, and it plays right away very fast and intense, i dont think i have heard you before but, this track was pretty good and seems well put together as each part seems to flow into eachother the guitar is very nicley done so props to you on that aspect of things, even some of the backround feel was pretty cool, now as any suggestion of making it better, well vocals ofcourse but i understasnd you had a time issue, anyways great stuff here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
adding some vocals would be great with this one.

[Punishment Fits]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this was interesting and it does show some good effort on your part the "VOCALS" could use some fine tunning but thats just with time, but for the most part you have it down, and you did bring it together, i love the music part of it aswell especially at the start allthough seemed abit slow maybe speed up the begenning of it just a bit, so with all that and suggested its was notbad, but could use more effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the beginning was a bit slow speed it up abit, also vocals are great here on this but could be fine tuned

[Eternal Memories at Midnight]

Too low sounding

~~REVIEW~~
Now i did like the soft feel of this but like another one i think this was just too low sounding, now if thats the intent i understand but i think you should have mixed up the volume sounds, so that it comes and goes or even have build up in it, But regardless of all that this was still a nice and nifty piece you made, just too low but like i said could mix things up, but anyways untill next time good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
About low sounding i think you should have mixed up the volume sounds, so that it comes and goes or even have build up in it,

~X~

ObsidianSnow responds:

In terms of volume, it's too low because of an export problem I had back when I was using Reason 2.0. I've since upgraded, and no longer have this issue.

In terms of the flow, I agree. It could use a little more diversity. I'm not thinking I'll go back and mess with this one any more, though - this was written years ago. I might still use the theme somewhere in a different piece somewhere down the road, but we'll see.

In any case, I appreciate your constructive criticism, so thank you!

[The Dark-Haired Girl]

Pretty nifty

~~REVIEW~~
OK so notbad at all with this one, i was very pleased with this except with the "LOW" sounding feel of it, maybe thats what you wanted, but sometimes it just got too low and really couldnt hear your sounds, but other parts were fine and love the "PIANO" was great and was my fave part of all, maybe more of that in the future, but anyways i enjoyed this piece, very welldone, untill next time good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So my only issue with this that could be improved would be the really low sounding parts it was too low in my oppinion.

~X~

[Kane Theme]

Dark

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was pretty good kinda reminded me a cross from phantom of the opera to castlevania so it does have that dark and vampire feel, so perfect for the ghosts and goblin type of flashes, i loved it actually has a very dark nature, so im impressed with what you came up with, now some spots of improving you could probably add a dark laugh in the backround for extra measure, but besides that it was awsome.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you could probably add a dark laugh in the backround

~X~

[Dor mirage]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
oh here is something nice and i love how this starts out very neat, and the quality is pretty good with the sounds and instraments, very good sounds here, now this almost sounds japanese, but anyways almost seems like you could add some vocals to this and it would be that much perfect, now as improving onto this, not too sure its already great and i would leave it as is, anyways great track here make more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
hard to change anything on this as it was perfect.

~X~

Calamaistr responds:

its a little jewel :)

[Music Box Waltz]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was very nice, infact i think ill save this one as a fave, but besides that i love the soft feel and you really allowed the music to live upto the name, i love the pleasent feel soft tones but some harder tones could help in this mainly towards the end, but most of this was pretty brilliant, and i enjoyed it mostly for its pleasent tones, so props to you on a nice piece i really liked what you presented here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some small build up would be nice but it was fine besides that

~X~

Rampant responds:

Thanks :)

I'll be writing a different/new version of the track, based on the same theme, this coming January. I'll definitely keep your feedback in mind when making the new one.

- James

[Annihilation: Overture]

Pretty decent

~~REVIEW~~
wow this was pretty good, i love how you start this off with drums and other sounds of instraments realy cameout well and flowed through the rest very well, so for starters this was awsome, there is a small build-up notbad but maybe it needs more faster there, with louder and more powerfull sounding stuff comming in, but for what it is its pretty impressive, nice work, i look forward for more stuff from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some improved buildup about halfway wouldnt hurt.

~X~

[Cream Cheese (feat. Tom Fulp)]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad at all the vocals were ok, but i thought the vocals could have been abit more sharper there was some points were the sound gets "DISTORTED" but that was more or less the backround music sounds, but i did think this was amusing and it could sound better with some other sounds and instraments but the whole cream cheese was pretty interesting, so nice job there, good luck on anything else you got comming up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as suggested the guitar sometimes was getting in the way of the vocals, maybe some cleaning up and even more variaty of differant sounds.

~X~

Evil-Dog responds:

hmhmmMMMMmmmm...cream cheese

[etK-NightFlowers]

Pretty decent stuff

~~REVIEW~~
hmm this is interesting i really do like how you start this off with a slow buildup and the piano keyes are really nice has a nice feel and the build-up is pretty impressive, it really starts kicking in with some good vibes after the build up changing from soft to more over the edge thats a nice piece if you ask me, very welldone on this piece i enjoyed it and awsome job on the start buildup and climax ending brilliant stuff if you ask me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the track was great i however thought it was somewhat on the "SHORT-SIDe" could have been longer in the end.

~X~

etK responds:

Thank you very much for the review, I like interesting reviews like this one.
I'll remember what you said.
thanks =)