Decent track here
This was interesting almost seems like it jumps from theme to them, now while thats ok and offers a wide variaty of sounds and mixes, it also lses focus of what the main them might be, you could still keep the variaty with some backround themes, but with everything everywhere it gets odd, but again maybe thats the idea you were going for and if so cool beans, it was kind of "LONG" so maybe you could shorten it just a tad, anyways nice work here.
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So some helpful tips could be as suggested, a shorter version, and focus more on one theme aswell, or as said focus on one them keeping some variaty with sounds in the backround with a faint feel, just a few ideas, hope it helps.