Very nice
So this was cool a nice melody here for a first full song but as I said the melody is pretty good and this was not short by any means not real long either it is a good sound quality so nice job here I like the flavor you braught on this one so the energy and talent is here and hope you keep up the flavor on this and future pieces here
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I think you did pretty awesome with this piece so no changes needed
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