Nice variety
I like the mixture and various sounds in this one it's pretty good in quality and the drum sound is nice wish there was more of that and more focus of that as well but I do like what you did here with a different kind of mix not too long or too short but just right in my opinion you have some good skill and talent and it shows anyways more focus on the drums would be a nice idea
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More focus on drums
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