Nice loop
I'm not too fond of loops but I do have to say that this was a nice little loop but seems with all the quality you could really push this for a more long version of a song because you do have something here and as you said some more focus of the drums would really push this over the edge maybe even some intense build up as well these are just suggested ideas for this lil loop but could be even better
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer and more focus on some intense build up and drums
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