XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pig Skin Classic]

another odd one from you

But this was pretty good its a start in the right direction so that was a plus, the pig skin was the right color and texture, and the backround accented it well, the whole canvus should be larger and you should think about adding some "BORDERS" it would really improve on this piece, adding some more time and effort to the texture aswell would be nice, and the font you chose was notbad but could be slightly better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so as mentioned some borders would be nice, some more textuture and even some better font looking, but overall this was notbad at all.

Clown-Catcher responds:

Thank you

[Man of the wo]

Odd

Well this is an odd piece, it does need more effort and seems more like you were just testing stuff, but its ok and i like the molding and blending of the colors in this one, you should have took more time, and put more effort and used more colors and such. the green is overwelming you should mix it up with differant colors and such. anyways this was ok but could be better as mentioned.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some advice would be adding a mix of colors taking your time and really putting more effort fourth

Clown-Catcher responds:

Thank you

[Apple]

Nifty

Ok so this was nifty kinda differant it almost has a sort of abstract kind of art style, I love how the colors blend into eachother, i can see you using some filters in the program while thats ok you want to try and use more natural styles and not crowd it with the art program filters, but its decent and as for improvments i suppose you can add more of a realistic feel to the apple like maybe some aged color tones and much more texture within it, as an idea you can even throw in a worm or something.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you can add more of a realistic feel to the apple like maybe some aged color tones and much more texture

Clown-Catcher responds:

Thank you.

[The Cupboard]

Fantastic

So i looked at what the art portal had to offer today and this one is the one stood out to me, maybe it was thepurple or thesefunny looking characters just jumping out of the page but regardless it was cute, i like all the little shines and details and you really gace this art piece some character and brought it to life almost like outside of the box so nice efforts there, the balls at top with shine could use more of a shine maybe even some glow to it, but besides all that this was pretty cute and i found it to be a pretty fantastic piece.always looking forward to see what new artists bring to the table, this reviewer enjoyed this piece today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned maybe abit more shine and even some glow on the "BALLS" at top, butother then that this was apretty cute piece.

SplendidDevil responds:

thanks for the review, it is an awesome review and i appreciate the criticism :3

it's like my first photoshop piece, im still getting used to photoshop and it's mindfuckery :)

[Happy Halloween]

Wow Awsome indeed

So here i find myself loving this every detail and every ounce of color, i added this as my fave, so awsome job, here, now im one all for color and you really splashed this one with some great color, the drawing itself was amazing and there are not words for this one all i know is that this was fantastic i also like some of the sparkles and shines allthough this could use some more "SHINE" and more sparkles in other areas, the idea of this was great aswell, allthough its not halloween it was still pretty amazing so for this one you get my vote, brilliant job here, keep up the awsome work i love it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
What can i say this was already a fantastic piece, amazing from color to idea to the initial drawing, awsome stuff here, i love it.

xxanemia responds:

Thank you! I'm always told off for doing too much shine and sparkles haha...

[Cathulhu Fhtagn!]

~~REVIEW~~
Haha so this one was really good there so much to see and you added lots of personality especially with all the differant cats and such and some humor aswell like the dog that has a cat face sign lol that gave me a chuckle, I think it could be improved maybe with some sorta backround or even solid base color but something would be nice back there, might even be cool if you added some more cats in the distance maybe even some more dogs or something but again does need something more, but anyways this was pretty fantastic, you should make more like this, for now keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as stated above > some sorta backround or even solid base color but something would be nice back there, might even be cool if you added some more cats in the distance maybe even some more dogs or something, anyways good luck.

Zolah responds:

Thank you for your reply!

Yeah the dog was a 'spy' reference, Thougth it would be funny :) I seldom get a chance to do something like this. I shall defenetivly go to more Cons in the future xD my geekbar gets raised to the maximum and bad jokes just falls from the sky!

I made it like this so i could print it on t-shirts and such later on, so think of it as a 'invisible area' xD But sure, I will think about what youve said for my next picture, I could just change so I have two different ones if I want to use it as a print. One more detailed and one with less wich would be better suited as a print :) I also noticed that the colouring was way off, on the laptop they werent this colour and I think i will from now on only paint on my stationairy :/ wasnt meant that some of them would get an odd colour tint :/

Thanks once again!

[Poultry]

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was pretty cute, it was very simple i like the simple-ness of it, it would be nice tp see more in the backround but in a way it was also ok with what you had alsoso nice job there, maybe adding more texture in the skin tone and even the x you had in the backround, but some more color blending would be nice, The quote text at top of his head was pretty funny and amusing, as for the whole creation and design, so i stated some improvment ideas, hope it helps, good luck on anything else you have planned aswell, i look forward to seeing more from you, anyways for now keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more texture with in the skin tone and such, also could use something more in the backround as that was abit bland,

Leigh responds:

Yeah sure thanks.

[Heart squashed into pieces]

~~REVIEW~~
OK so this was abit differant from alot of stuff, so my take on it was i really liked it and like all the use of color, you really have it splash out in a very good way here so that was possitve, Thispiece also has some meaning with the words and the whole feeling it gives off of being crished by someone maybe, not sure but it does tell a lil story and that just makes it even better, now to make things better maybe you could darken up the heart more redish and more dripping below, but thats just me, for the most part of this this was pretty good, anyways keep up the awsome work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More redish color could be used, and more dripping below.

Flashmovieboy responds:

Thanks a lot for such a detailed and constructive review ! I appreciate this :)

Before having a girlfriend, I thought that loneliness is the worst pain ever to exist in the world. But after a relationship with her, I learned that while loneliness is a pain comparable with being hit by a wooden plank. It hurts, but doesn't leave a scar. The pain of a break-up, however, is like getting spear of steel impaled through your heart. Not only does it hurt, but for a while, makes me unable to love anybody the way I loved my ex.
Thanks for the advice, although I wanted to avoid using too much red, I'll keep this on mind.