XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

["Mercy" The Final Cut.]

Very nice.

~~REVIEW~~
ok so after seeing your other piece i thought i would checkout some more of your work, and this one i must say is pretty awsome if you ask me, now while its mostly in black and white thats an ok option but as you say nothing more can be done but i think a colored version, maybe not all collered but some, just even a tad, and i know her weapon is somewhat coloered but still goes with the black and white style, i would even go as far as have more glow and shine on the bacround so there is more glare comming from it, but other then that this was pretty good i thought.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few ideas above, some lighting effects for the moon, some color options and such.

johngoldenwolf responds:

Thank you very much, and glad to hear your a bit of a follower.
I'll take your advice into consideration if I decide to do a redux of this concept.
In truth this is the forth rendition of this concept over the years.
THe other tghree have either been lost or sold.

[Pantoran Jedi]

Pretty nifty

~~REVIEW~~
ok very impressive with this one, now it has a mixture of starwars and avatar in the mix, the backround was too simular in color though with the skin tone maybe a differant backround tone, so that it doesnt mix in somehow, she needs abit more detail on the boots maybe more black type, and some shiny stuff on legs wouldnt hurt either, other then that it was pretty good. maybe also give more focus on the moon aswell more brighter somehow, anyways this was pretty good if you ask me but could be better, anyways untill next time, good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
change the backround somehow as the skintone and backround were just too simular,

johngoldenwolf responds:

THank you. :) Most appreciative of the critique.

[Na]

Nice use of color

~~REVIEW~~
I just love the use of color in this one and you presented some good "SHADING" also like the color with hair eyes and eyebrows, that was kind of a nifty idea, also great job on using the whole canvas allthough some of the backround you could have used, and one last point that may or may not help but ill throw it in there anyways maybe some extra shading on the skin tone for the extra detail but doesnt seem like it needs it, anyhow its a great portrait. anyways keep up the decent art works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some extra shading on the skin tone and maybe a touch of backround in the bland backround spots.

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Grigoro responds:

Now I know what's wrong with this picture.
Big thanks to you :)

[Love in the Air]

Pretty good stuff.

~~REVIEW~~
this was very cute, the color the hearts the detail and the character with some backround effects cameout pretty good i thought, as i look at your art piece i cant really see anything to improve on so i would leave it as is, so i was pretty impressed with the outcome, and look forward to more, so as a last note great art great use of color awsome character and yes theres lots of love, good art piece here i look forward to seeing more, anyways nice job. anyways good luck on your next piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So great piece, nice color awsome detail, its perfect as is.

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KeiKuzco responds:

thanks dude

[Kelly Killing Necromorphs]

Nice use of color

~~REVIEW~~
nice piece here it shows lots of "ACTION" and i love the color "TONES" changing from one to the next that was actually a pretty good idea and makes it much more neat that way, the drawings them self of the battle and characters are pretty awsome show lots of detail and great designs on them so very good on this piece i really liked this one, if any suggestions are made in this review to improve on, maybe you could use more lighting effects like the gun "SHOOTING" brighten them up abit, anyways great piece you have here.

~~OVERALL~~
could use more lighting effects, on the gun ray for example.

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DarkVisionComics responds:

Its fine how it is for the most part, I do agree,I could of did the lighting effects on her face from the glow of the gun and glow onto the necromorph she's fighting, but the gun isn't shooting, she's just aiming at a limb . Thank you though! :} She loves it, I love it, I got paid for it. Good stuff. Thank you again!

[Drunk Russian Guy]

notbad bad at all

~~REVIEW~~
So this was ok, i kinda liked it if you ask me though, it was a good {SKETCH} nothing too fancy but still had it moments you did show us effort with some details and emotion in the character with eyes and such, now some {COLOR} would really spice this up though, so i wouldnt mind seeing some color presented, so for a better outcome maybe a larger scale and some added color.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some color maybe even a larger {SCALE} drawing

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thies responds:

Thanks for the review :)

[Self Portrait]

This was decent

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was pretty interesting i thought the holding up of the actaual pictures was a nifty and creative idea, the {BACKROUNDS} looked very realistic or could have been a {3d-RENDER} of some type?? anyways glad to see this got an honorble mention for frontpaged very nice job there, now this was pretty neat with the odd but neat looking eyes, you gave it that unique and odd style that i love so i was glad to have seen this, as for improvments i would suggest throw in a little puppy or rabbit in the backround just for extra measure haha, anyways nice job here hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As an extra idea throw in a little puppy or rabbit in the backround. other then that i thought it was ok.

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NeonMonster responds:

duly noted.

[Poisson Apple]

Creative and nifty

~~REVIEW~~
I love this one, i actually have a simular tattoo, i think the painting cameout well, more blood could be there like one idea might be the blood dripping out the table like thing but this was a pretty good piece and ill add this one as my faves, another thing would be to bring out more shine like on the apple, the backround was interesting maybe a more darker feel in the backround, i guess that wouldnt work too well with the dark table just an idea though, but anyways great painting and i look forward to seeing and reviewing more of your stuff. anyways good luck

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few shines and darker issues

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afiboy69 responds:

First i just want to thank u for adding the painting to ur favorites and leaving a very nice helpful review =) i find it interesting that u have a tattoo that has a similar depiction or atmosphere, sounds badass =D so im glad this had given u some sort of meaningful connection, which I think is very important when it comes to art. Anyways once again thank u for the feed back =)

[Earth Dragon]

Nice mix dragon

~~REVIEW~~
Wow i love dragons and this was pretty impressive, i think the tittle should have ran something like this {SNAKE-DRAGON} Seems more fitting to what the drawing and your comments go with, i love the mixture of the snake and dragon allthough would have been nice to show more of the body so i could see how it all forms out, but great backround very fitting and great color and texture with the snake its all perfect in element, so awsome job on this one, but like i said a more body shot would have been even better, anyways nice job i look forward to more of your fantastic designs.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned a full body shot would have been great.

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Louise-Goalby responds:

The commission was only of a headshot.

[Woods]

Nifty

~~REVIEW~~
Oh wow this was very neat i thought and i am really loving the {BLACK-WHITE} style with this one, love all the great line-work with the trees and how this goes off into the {DISTANCS} very nice detail and great effort on your side there, very impressive indeed, now as a possible tip, maybe you should have a sorta {FOCUS-POINT} or something and to go over the edge, have it some {COLOR} but only that one focus point would be color, but other then that this was very good i thought and i rather liked it, so keep up the awsome drawings and paintings.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe as mentioned ad a focus point or prop

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itsKris responds:

Thanks for the advice :)