XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[My only 12 inch]

norbad

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this one, its actually a pretty good drawing / sketch, this might look nicer if it had some color maybe the "S" would be a red or something kinda makes it standout abit more but i believe this may be your best drawing yet i do like it so hope you make more for us soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color like the s, anyways keep up the good work

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Fro responds:

I was thinking about adding a background, color, and a leg to it in the future. I'll update it sometime. Thanks!

[Capture the Moment]

I like it

~~REVIEW~~
this does look like it took some time, but also shows some good effort on your part, i like the design on the desk and the camera is pretty neat itself i like the light effect you have there, the wall seemed abit bland seems like there should be more stuff on there, anyways good stuff here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more stuff on the wall, and maybe give the desk a more roundish design style kinda thing

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Fro responds:

Ok, it should be busier. I agree.

[Dark Entry]

could be darker

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty good for what it was, it could be abit more on the darker side, with some sunlight or lighting effects it will give it that i think, maybe even make it look like there was some stains on the walls and dorrs for the creepy feel, but anyways its a good piece you have here i liked it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well more darkness around the door and some blood stains wouldnt hurt either

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Fro responds:

Great ideas! Maybe I'll update this soon!

[Nigal The British Pirate]

hehe nice

~~REVIEW~~
aww this was great, has some awsome use of color not too heavy on the color either but just right i thought it might have been neater if ya showed the head just abit outa the water, and maybe abit more shine on the sword

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above abit more shine on the sword and have the head showing just abit

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TheSpicanator responds:

sweet thanks man!!!

and yeah, i agree with you on both.

[Mr. Bacon]

Kevin bacon

~~REVIEW~~
The drawing is superb, colors shades textures is all top notich, in my opinion it looks more like john travolta though but still has some simularities to Kevin bacon, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i thought the hair was abit iffy, maybe more fine hair might work in this case, well just an idea anyways

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thies responds:

Yup he doesn't look very much like Kevin Bacon on some points, espacially the eyes. He looks a bit like a mix of Kevin Bacon, John Travolta, and Ben Afflack. (like the guy below said.)

I actually tried to make the hair look more fine, but it didn't really look great, so I let it be like this..

Thanks for reviewing again :)

[Elf Comic]

nice comic

~~REVIEW~~
Well now here is a differant kinda comic, i love that its not "UNIFORM" as just "BOXES" but yet its in other odd shapes and really just looks differant and unique if you ask me you should keep that style, the comic is actually pretty good nice drawings and good dialog

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have more close ups like the eye shot

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Sangasan responds:

As I do with all art that's not mine, I have to refer you to ActionSquid, he drew it and I colored it, I personally find the dialog lame, but thanks. I think I colored it to the best of my abilities, and I agree, the eye-shot was my favorite to color.

[Red Baron]

Very impressive i like

~~REVIEW~~
Very impressive with the main character i even like what you did with another guy in the backround, this shows a good battle about to take place, and the main character has shown alot of effort on your part, so i really do look forward to more of your work, keep making great stuff for us

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Show some blood on the main guys weapon,

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beastkid7 responds:

Thanx a lot for the review! Will do sir!

[Berserker Rage]

love this sketch

~~REVIEW~~
Pretty nifty sketch you have here its very detailed in the sketchness hehe, but really good stuff now all you need is some colors shades aswell as some backdrop, good luck on your next stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some shades of color and a backdrop

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TheManofSteal13 responds:

Thanks, I never thought of doing color shading before. I'll have to get photoshop to do one since I really need one anyrate. :-/

I plan to..wait. You just reminded me of a painting I did with this guy. I'll put that one up next. Thanks alot there, man! Hopefully I'll get the time to do more of these in color.

[The Hunt]

nice work here

~~REVIEW~~
Nice robot thingie here looks like he is on the hunt as the title says, the actualy image looks abit blurry though, i like how you made this in an action scenes, the ray he is shooting could have more of a glow to it though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the beam have more of a glow effect

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Walkingpalmtree responds:

Will do!