XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Falling apart.]

Interesting

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat i like all the blocks and even the uplifting msg you are sending across and such, now this could be much better i think, first off i think that thoe whole canvas should be larger so you can also show much more blocks and maybe even other people with uplifting mesges and such, just an idea but it should be on a much larger canvas, gives you more room to show off much more, now i also think this could be even better with other colored blocks and such, so i do hope them small tips help, but as this art piece is, its pretty good looking and a pretty good idea i thought. anyways nice art piece , keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a few things would be first make a larger view screen with more blocks and more mesges and such, more mesges and such, maybe even adding some differant colored blocks aswell

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BobtehLog responds:

Thanks for the review, it could of be alot bigger (I do agree) but this result I have no is nothing to what I had first planned so it pretty much just all got recreated on the spot. Thanks for the review :)

[Neytiri]

Wow pretty good

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this is pretty good, the quality is really top notch, this is kinda crazy because i just saw the movielastnight so this is still fresh on my mind and you have a very good likeness here the backround is notbad either, i do wish you made it much larger though. as for hte backround is seemed out of focus allthough that may have been what you were going for, but i think having some other related stuff from the movie like more forrest backround would also work, maybe even some other navi in the backround or even go as far as having one of those flying creatures to go the extra detail there, well just an idea or two there and i think it would give the image much more life and such. anyways nice work here keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More backround characters and or creature could help to liven up the image

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JoshSummana responds:

Yeah the background was supposed to be blurred cos in the reference there isnt a lot of forestry either, its a rock face with a bit of growth and then a waterfall on the right. But I wanted Neytiri to stand out as the focal point, so thats why there are no additional Navi or creatures - and plus thats not a review - thats just you saying what you want in the picture..."having one of those flying creatures to go the extra detail there"...its not in the reference/promotional movie poster so I didnt add it.

I just had a look at your work, and not being a dick, but I thought you would be totally amazing if you are willing to easily judge other peoples work...?

[Cold Symbol]

This was interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well this was notbad, kinda bland in some points but you are right about "BLUE" working well for this, you may want to try a "RED" version or even have the letters Red and the backround blue or even vice versa, i find red has a great feel to it especially if its the deep reds and such, And as for the lettering, it had some nice detail but i think you need to give it much more shine then what you have there, maybe if it was red you might beable to implement that abit more, so regardless its a pretty neat art piece, but with a few fixes as i suggested here it could be even better, so good luck. and hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some differant colors either for the letters and backrounds i suggested a deeper red, and amore shine effect aswell

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HeavyTank responds:

Hm, okay, and thanks for leaving a review (although you have thousands :D).

[Supernova]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well i must say you really like this "LIGHTING" style of art, and dont get me wrong so do i, this was another good one, i dont know if its your best of works but its still pretty impressive, this one kinda reminds me of what the star ship enterprise goes thru in warp mode, but anyways, i like all the stars all around, but im thinking the "STARS" themself should be somewhat smaller and have more warp to them as this is like a warp and everything should be in super warp speed, just a thought on my end though, I also think the "CENTER" area should be more brighter to reflect something special in the center, give it that super bright feel like some of your other works have, but with all that said i like what you have here, keep up the decent work, i look forward to reviewing more of your work soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested make the stars smaller and with more warp speed feel to them, also make the center more brighter

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Shikhs responds:

thanks

[ABSRACT Crture-Under the Ocean]

Nice

~~REVIEW~~
Now here is another nice bright one from you thanks for making the request, and glad you listened to me, now this one you have here is pretty differant but i still like it, and i do see what you mean about the eyes and mouth, the "EYES" have a really neat look to them, might have been nice if you put a little star in the middle of the eyes or something to give it that more eye look, but overall it does look pretty neat, and as for the mouth maybe give it some stars or shapes that make it look like teeth some sharp ones, heh just an idea anyways, but all and all its another neat pic with the neat brightness and awsome colors i liked from the last one, feel free to request a review anytime and ill be glad to review any of your work, so i look forward to more of your stuff soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well like explained, the eyes could use a more center points, and the mouth could use a teeth type of thing.

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Shikhs responds:

thanks man thanks for the review

[Abstract Creature]

Awsome use of color

wow and awsome on the use of colors here, you really gave it a glowing effect that cameout well, and i like how you gave it some sorta brightness or some glow effect along it, i really wish you had a larger "VIEW" of it, and as for the design itself its abit on the plainside but its notbad, i do however like how it almost looks like you have your signature but its probably not unless im wrong, but still you have a nice design here though and the colors really shine through the brightness so really awsome job.

How to improve well the onlything i could see on this one would be to make a much larger design more waves and shapes and also a much much larger viewing area "CANVAS SIZE"

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Shikhs responds:

thank you :)

[Fractal Freakout]

Amazing

Wow this was pretty amazing, i liked it i reall love all the assortmant of colors and such, you really made this standout with some bright and balanced colors, i have added this one as my fave, just love everything about it, from the twisting stars to the balanced colors, so very welldone on this one, if anything can and could be improved on this i think it would be to add some borders and frames, and if you know me i tend to suggest that alot but for this one i think it fits very well, you could have some sorta coloered border all around the edges or some fanct frame with stars and such, well just a few ideas that may help in your next piece of art, untill then keep up the awsome art work

Improving? well as suggested some colored frame and or borders would be nice, something that accents your main piece.

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Viamede responds:

thaks for the review, however i never use frames.

[Afrika Bambaataa]

nice and purple

~~REVIEW~~
I really like the msg you had it is and can be true in many ways so really awsome effort in presenting a great msg, ok now onto the art piece, now you have a solid color in purple which i think is such an awsome color to work with, so awsome job, now while i do like purple and it looks good here it would have been nice with another color like a blueish and have them work together somehow, i think this could also use some "FRAMES / BORDERS" maybe if you kept this purple them go with a deep dark purple for the frame and or borders around the edges, makes it feel more like a poster type of thing, just an idea though, aslo you should think about making the canvas larger so you can add more to the msg and or other art images, just gives it more depth, another idea that may help improve on something alreay good. also i like the guys glasses i could see you making them really bright to make a little nice effect for this image, but other then that it was a nice piece, hope to see some more work from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames borders would be nice, also adding anew color along with the purple would be nice, and you could probably add alot more msg and other images if the canvas was larger

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J-qb responds:

Thanks for the thorough critique; Its very much appreciated.
As for the canvas size; the contest required that the entries were 550*400 pixels (this one is double the size) so I couldnt really make it much bigger.
Thanks though!

[Samyu]

Love the red hair

~~REVIEW~~
Wow now this was a really intense drawing here, i am in love with this girls red hair, its an outstanding drawing and sketch as you say, her "NAILS" seem too long if you ask me, that one "THUMB" one especially, it might be the only blemish in this drawing as this was welldone even if you dont think so yourself, but really its an awsome piece of work and ill add this to my faves, now as some extra "DETAIL" like maybe give her a few tatoo's here and there, it will reflect on the dark theme you have going in this one, my fave part of this art piece was the red hair and the fine detail, now i like the "CLOUDS" around the legs but it might look much better if it was, more all around her so like a vampire she is coming out of it somehow, anyways nice art piece here, i really liked this one and i will add it as my fave

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have more clouds around, add some tattoos, and maybe clean up the nails abit as it looks odd

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zigan responds:

Thanks for the review and kind words. I did want to add more tattoos but was running out of time, and for the fact I didn't want her body to look too cluttered. Thanks for the fave as well. ^^

Also thanks to everyone so far for the comments. :)

[Digimon Fans are Really Hot]

It is cute

~~REVIEW~~
WOW this was pretty damn good, you are very "BOLD" you showed lots of "SKIN" in this one but i suppose that was sorta the idea but you did dress here up abit it is a her i think lol, but anyways onto the review, the character design was very welldone almost perfect, there was alot of skin but i like how you dont really show much of what would be "RAUNCHY" but anyways good design good colors also nice job on the shadow just there on the back of the shirt it reflected well, you also presented us with some good backrounds, all and all you have some awsome skills that really brought out a unique character with awsome shades and details, if anything could work even better i would give the "EYE" on the head piece a bit of a "GLOW" it would set it just perfect i think, maybe even have someone peeking an eyefull in the backround hehe, ohwell nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
put a glow effect on the eyeball on the head piece, and maybe have another character in the backround peeking an eyefull or something

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Tootmania responds:

Thanks for the neato review! And that's actually a cool idea, the whole glowing eyeball helmet thing. And thanks for the kind words!