XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Elegant Parasite Black]

More basic then the rest

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was not your best, more basic and simple then the rest but still has a neat design or character not sure there, but it can be improved on such as adding some backround or some landscape in the distance, also giving the character more detail and ofcourse use of more color all around, as for the "SIGNATURE" i think you can either lose that or give it a more fancy feel as its abit on the sloppy side so could work either way, anyways its notbad for what it is

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Remove or make the signature more fancy maybe blend it with the backround more, also more details needed for the characters face

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Celx-Requin responds:

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[Tyrannical Boss]

nice work here

~~REVIEW~~
Now here is another nice piece of art from you with lots to seem the pink creature being whipped seems like he is suffering so in that aspect of things you might want to show more emotion in that area, now your best work in this art piece is the Tyrannical boss now ofcourse thats your focus of art right there, his "WHIP" atleast i think its a whip seems lacking in design it needs abit of two tone color to it, and maybe a small design in it, as for the "TY" it was your best work here as i said awsome detail, lots of props and great skin texture to make it like it was really there, so nice work all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some design to the whip, and maybe show some emotion from the pink creature like he is in pain

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Celx-Requin responds:

I agree...

Thanks,
- Celx

[Shark: Shattered Guns Poster]

a poster you say

~~REVIEW~~
Now i love posters and this one actually does look like a poster, i love your sense of "COLOR" you use it at the right times which i think really brings out your stuff such as this one with the red and black and have the colors intertwine at times, its a nice style that notmany use so props to you on this style, so as this is a poster i think, in my opinion that posters need, "BORDERS/FRAMES" or if not that like "PINS" in the corners of the poster, just an odea though, so this was pretty neat with the swords and guy but i would like to see more then one guy in there, maybe there was a fight or something, you could have one guy standing and one guy dead well something along them lines, anyways it was a pleasure reviewing this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more characters to the scene, maybe add some borders / frames along the edges or pins as explained above

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Celx-Requin responds:

Yeah a border would have been a good idea, I'll keep it in mind for any other posters I may decide to do!

Thanks,
- Celx

[CoolJaw Comic Preview]

Nice

~~REVIEW~~
ok now this was neat, i really like the "WHITE" over the "BLACK" backing it gives it a unique viewing of the art, and this is also kinda neat because of the touch of blood coming from your characters mouth, makes you wonder what else is in this lil story or behind it anyways, i think this could be better like make some blood drops and or stains in the distance, like if the guy just came from that type of chaos and or madness, and i think it wouldnt hurt to add some color in the eyes it wont take focus away from anything but probably give more detail to this character

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some color into the eyes aswell as some backround history of the maddness he just came from

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Celx-Requin responds:

I read it too tired to respond to it coherently.

Thanks,
- Celx

[CoolJaw Comic Cover]

This was interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well this was interesting and as a logo type of thing its notbad, however i think there needs to be more to it you have a few designs and stuff in there but what i think it needs is more of that maybe even larger images as to see the "DETAIL" of the whole logo, the "FONT" could be changed to something more fancy and stylish maybe something more on the "WAVY" style the red blood spatter is pretty neat i thought but you should add some "TEXTURE" to it, its just kinda there and remember if this is your logo design everyone sees, then you want it to really jump out at them so they can checkout your flash or art, anyways nice entry i look forward to reviewing more of your stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make some images larger and or add more of them, make some fancy font besides the one you have, and add some detail and texture to the blood splatter

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Celx-Requin responds:

I don't know, it was a cover so I didn't want to go overboard you know.

I've always liked "simple" covers to films, like the "red line" in the French "kill bill" dvd cover looks better to me than the picture of "Uma Thurman" on the American dvd cover.

Thanks,
- Celx

[Tuky]

This was interesting

I like your sense of "CREATIVITY" especially with this one and the great mixture of animals and such you listed that sure is alot, and you put it all in this little creature very nice indeed, i would like to see some more creativity on this or others but with less amount of mixtures that way you can add more detail on just the few rather then just a ton of em

make another but with much less creatures

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bloominglove responds:

Thank you for a good critique. :)

[Borderlands]

I like it

Well this is ok i thought, it did have some color but not much, you did have the color in the right spots to focus on, the color itself seemed abit on the light side so maybe a suggestion would be to deepen the colors abit, also some shades could be set up in the distance so the art piece doesnt seem so bland

My suggestion to improve on this one would be to add some deeper colors and also some shades in the distance just behind the character

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magicswordz responds:

Fair review

I don't exactly have many colored pens, so thought to emphasize the key points of the art
scanner didn't exactly do the best job~ but yeah~ darker shading would have been better

And I guess some sort of background, maybe a pattern would be good~ thanks for the idea

thanks for the critique

[I'm Venom, rawr.]

Lol interesting

Heh well this was interesting it was also kinda funny and amusing. i thought you could have made it on a more "LARGER" scale and such, and i wouldnt mind seeing some more color and all, but what you have here, is pretty neat just needs more and maybe more visual clarity

How to improve? well make the canvas larger have a bigger print of what you are presenting, and a touch of color would also be nice

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TheFishyOne responds:

The thing is that I've made in on a smaaall corner on the back of my art block. As you can see the "background" is carton.

And I repeat : it was made on a small corner.

And what colour could I add? Venom's black afterall, right?

[PRIMATES! (7/7)]

This was notbad

Its really good actually you kinda made it how it really is i think, i love the mixture of all the differant poses and such, it was kinda neat and it gave it abit more reality there, and you did well on the element of where they live aswell, all and all a nice piece i thought, keep up the good work

Now this could be improved i suppose, maybe some more plants and flowers to reflect the envirment abit more, anyways nice job

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Lundsfryd responds:

Thanks for your kind words. I will take into account next time around :)