XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Klide 06 (Sun Blast)]

Decent again

~~REVIEW~~
And another cool design you have here i love the gold feel of it all, that was pretty impressive, i think in this one it lacked the lighting effects that you did well with the other past designs, but must say this was still pretty good, and i liked how there was more effort on this, mostly as just said with some more lighting effects and what not, and again i think these types of designs need more of a larger canvas as i have said in a few of them now, but still i enjoyed these and thy are all pretty impressive so keep up the decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was pretty nifty as a design, it did lack in a few areas, such as more lighting effects, and probably a larger canvas sise, but you been hearing that from me.

LadyJava responds:

Thankies

[Klide 05 (Ice Blast)]

This was decent

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this one cameout even better then the last one, as it has more of the effects but with the use of white colors here you really made some nice design here, i wouldnt mind seeing some more of the spiky feel you gave this maybe even adding some more of the redish color on the outer edges, thats just my opinion though, it was pretty neat, so for some slight improvments, some more spiky stuff more redish color around the edges, anyways nice job. keep up the awsome designs they are pretty nifty.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some m,ore spiky stuff more redish color around the edges, also like one of your other designs give it a bigger canvas for more of the design to shine, but with all that, this was pretty nifty.

LadyJava responds:

Thankies.

[Klide 04 (Flames)]

Its notbad

~~REVIEW~~
So this was notbad, i love the colors used in this one, you really pushed the oranges and such on this and the lighting effects are pretty good i thought, really brought out the effects and colors so nice job there, a few things could make it better like making the canvas bigger, allowing more detail for everything else and more of that neat effects you been pushing in these types, anyways nice job all around, i look forward to seeing more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was pretty cool with lighting effects and what not, it could be set on a larger canvas and what not other then that this was neat stuff.

LadyJava responds:

Thankies.

[Seras Victoria]

Nice

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was notbad, i like the in your face kinda theme here, the backround was somewhat bland though and since its vampire related, you could have had some blood dripping in the backround, or just go with some fainted picture of blood but something that was related to the main art piece, the character does have a strong anime feel so you did get in toch there and that was retty neat, so nice job on that and it was actually pretty good drawing, anyways keep up good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So the backround was lacking, and could use something, more, the rest was good anime style and very sharp in design, nice job all around.

linda-mota responds:

Oh gosh I loathe looking at this picture. It's true it needs a background. This is a very dated drawing with dated inking/coloring. I will more than likely redraw this with a lovely background. Honestly I don't know why this piece is popular. It's terrible and the perspective is a wee bit off. But that you for the improvement tips. They're super appreciated.

[red baron]

Love the color theme

~~REVIEW~~
I love the color use on all this, respecially using some color in the name in the backround, so in this cse the "TITTLE" fits very well on this piece, and while its red colored based, theme was pretty awsome you didnt over do it either, now i can see where this could be slightly better even i thought, such as with his big sword you should have it dripping with blood onto the ground that would have been a nice extra use of the red color aswell, but anyways great piece here and again the tittle fits so perfectly with this one, keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested some red blood dripping but other then that this was pretty good stuff.

dommi-fresh responds:

man you sure love that blood don'tcha thanks all the same

[zelda redesigns]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
Wow now as a fan of zelda stuff myself i must say this was pretty impressive, you could even possibly make some "SPRITE" versions of all these i would think, but as for these you have some great stuff, the reprints cameout well, good textures of color, nice color base and awsome drawing detail, so very welldone on these, i liked every bit of your work here, some backrounds would have been nice but i understand these are just the characters. maybe atleast make them animated somehow, anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some small animations in here would be nice, or even some backrounds

lenkalamari responds:

everybody on the floor
betta get your groove on
run and tell the DJ
to play your favourite song

[Tree Of Lies]

TV's everywhere

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad and i like the idea, i could have sworn i seen this someplace, the whole idea of all the tv's piled up on one another with little quates, but anyways as for your piece this was pretty good pretty basic and light on the colortines. it was a very dark shadowed drawing so made it hard to really see the tvs, and what each one sad, also i would have thought there might be abit more glow to them aswell as around your character, the idea is good but some more lighting effects are in order. anyways decent piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
nice work here could use more lighting effects and more sharper visuals on the details.

TheN0mad responds:

thanks much buddeh, not many people give as good a review as you do :)
and yeah i need to work on my lighting and perspectives alot more

["Mercy" The Final Cut.]

Very nice.

~~REVIEW~~
ok so after seeing your other piece i thought i would checkout some more of your work, and this one i must say is pretty awsome if you ask me, now while its mostly in black and white thats an ok option but as you say nothing more can be done but i think a colored version, maybe not all collered but some, just even a tad, and i know her weapon is somewhat coloered but still goes with the black and white style, i would even go as far as have more glow and shine on the bacround so there is more glare comming from it, but other then that this was pretty good i thought.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few ideas above, some lighting effects for the moon, some color options and such.

johngoldenwolf responds:

Thank you very much, and glad to hear your a bit of a follower.
I'll take your advice into consideration if I decide to do a redux of this concept.
In truth this is the forth rendition of this concept over the years.
THe other tghree have either been lost or sold.