XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[More Fishing]

This was cute

Well I must admit this was kinda cute, a nice comic here with some basic colors but that is probably what was intended but I like the concept of this all and made for a fun viewing overall nice job. maybe as improving on things add some detail to the framework nothing too detailed just some small detail like shades and whatnot.

~X~

ChazDude responds:

This is a bit of an old strip, I've improved on shading and other stuff since then.

I never really liked how the water turned out, tbh.

Either way, thanks for reviewing c:

[Pencil ravens]

Not bad

So I found this one to be a lot of things but its a great drawing, the blank back round really focused on the drawing. I believe that's the idea, but regardless some nice lines you have input here and it was pleasing on the eyes. maybe adding something in the back round would be a plus.

~X~

Aachen-erichaj responds:

Thank you,
yes i was amazed by myself how I did it. Generally it was a study only, but I am proud how it looks like.

[Spider Dance]

Notbad at all on this piece here it has an alien-ish feel to it colors are solid and shades came out decent maybe more darkervand more mixed shades in the background webs. But overall not bad work.

gatekid3 responds:

I actually like the webs in the background, but i see what youre saying.

i think i should have used darker shading in general though, because now it looks less creepy becuase its too bright.

thank you.

[Elvira - Mistress of the Dark]

Wow this has some nice shine effects to it. All in the right places some really good shades aswelll I like what you have done here keep up the great work

Time-Breaker responds:

Thank you :D
Sure will, and I'll try to fix those purple colours outside the line-art in the future as well :3

[Agent Carolia]

Nice color and standing out

Now im not too much educated on this style of art but i must say it did catch my eye and i was pleasently pleased how this came up, and as i continue on in this review i hope to enjoy even more on what you have presented. A nice piece you have here you really made the color come alove and you have also showd the emotion in the characters face which made for some good realism, and i also like how the backround was abit bland as to focus more on the character. i do however think there could be some more shine on the armor plate she has on, more shine and maybe even some war marks. And so i am almost at the end here of this review but i have enjoyed your work here, and through out this review i may suggest some positive options that can smooth it out somewhat but if you dont use any, thats cool too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so in this case i do have a few tips of helpful options and hope they could help to improve on some things, and i do hope you will look into some of these. So a few things that could give this some more realisim, would be adding some war dmg like explosion smoke some gashes and dents in the armor, then maybe some shine on some corners would also be a big plus.

Rennis5 responds:

you make some fair points, thank you dude :D

[Dynamic Duo]

Nice artwork

A nifty piece if you ask me, there was some of this and some of that, and you made it all come alive with your own style and twict, but thats what made it special atleast for me so i was glad to have seen this one. So here we have something interesting and a lil different but you can never go wrong there, you seemed to have thrown in a little 3d element in the mix so that was pretty cool the shades and texture is pretty awsome if you ask me, and all in all this cameout very fine detailed and you showed some good quality. There might be some final touch ups, but other then that you have done a pretty decentjob on this piece so nice work indeed, and hope you continue this up and keep creating some awsome pieces.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A good piece of art you have here, there is always some sort of improvment even on the best pieces, but sometimes not always the easiest to go about but i will do my best here, so try some new things here. I dont think there is much of anything to improve on this but if you want to go that extra mile you can always add some backround stuff going on as to show more of the world these people are comming from.

Izzy-A responds:

Thanks for the crit. This actually has no 3D of any kind, all painted. There's definitely stuff to improve on, but I got tired of all the refining so this is what I thought is as complete for me as possible without losing my sanity.

[johnny utah's tankmen!]

Notbad

And so we have another art piece here filled with some entertaining value aswell as some interesting art creativity and thats what i really look for so nice effort on bringing the differant elements together with this one. This actually works so its notbad and the idea of this is even better, kinda fits the whole concept just perfectly so you did do a nice job here and it was pretty good i thought, wouldnt mind some extra color here and there though, but i understand the idea, just wish there was also a way to add some more details and color. And so my ending note with this piece is that it has some good value to it, it has some artistice style to it, and i pretty much enjoyed what you have presented here, hope that you make many more great stuff as this one, it was top notch in my book.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And while my reviews do seem very positive i thought i would take the time to suggest some ideas, tips and some little advice for some sort of improvment and if not then it was all in good pleasure viewing your work. So as mentioned some more ways to add some extra details more shades and linework showing would be nice, and maybe a touch of color aswell.

dommi-fresh responds:

good review wayne

[BioShock]

Nice and unique

Now its pieces like this that make me love looking for new art pieces to review, you have all the right elements allthough some areas could be better and some extra effects could be added, This was a wacky piece of art that you have going here, I love the view shot you gave this, also you gave this art piece some "ACTION" the up close action and the far decent backrounds really worked well here and it gave it that live action scene you have here, onething i would like to see possibly, more glow on the "EYES" anyways nice piece of art here. You have some amazing ideas and that shows here, the effortsof your labor come through and it shows strong with detail, so i for sure am excited for more of your work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Its pieces like this that make me enjoy art even more, so i may have a few ideas that i would hope could help you improve on stuff, Some more glow on the eyes, and maybe more glow on more lighted areas around the art piece.

TaraGraphika responds:

Hmm...yeah...the eyes does look a bit dull, though.....Thank you very much for the honest review. I'm sure to upload more works for your entertainment:)