XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Landscape]

This is nice

Well I finally got to review this fine piece you have here and you have done some amazing work here, I think its great as is but maybe with some "LIGHTING-EFFECTS" like a sun or moon then you can also have that shine off the river mountains and such. anyways it was a good piece here,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Awsome piece here maybe adding some lighting effects would be great in this piece.

~X~

Ballu-Corsair responds:

Thank you!

[Memories]

Very nice work here

You have an interesting style here and you bring out some nice effects and detail here, you really bring the talent onto the table and thats what I like about this piece. Really awsome piece here especilly with the "SPARKLE" in the eyes that was truly the focus here and the texture and detail to the hair so nice job indeed. Ok well time for me to end this review but must say it was a fun experience reviewing this piece because of the talent and effort that you gave us.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt touch anything here but maybe something in the backround would be nice.

~X~

SpecterWhite responds:

The hair is actually the least thing I worked on :P
The lack of background (and the date on top) is because of this reason:
https://twitter.com/SpecterWhite/status/711317310426972160

[Trashbot - Robot Day Game 2011]

Interesting

Well here are some interesting designs here now with this piece I wouldnt mind more of a "SHINE" on the can and maybe even some "GLOW" on the eyes. but anyways nice design here. kind of unique.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow on the eyes and more shine on the can.

~X~

Luwano responds:

Good points. Thanks for your review.

[Red Black & White]

Nice theme here

Well this was a nice theme of "RED" over black and white, would love to see more effort on the backround somehow, maybe even give the red color some deeper texture and shading.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra added focus on the back round, and more texture on the reds.

~X~

333tiger responds:

Thanks for the review! this picture is ancient though, ive come a long way since then :P

[STARMAN - David Bowie]

Nice piece

Well with his pasing this makes up for some good memories of the legend, I like the star in the middle, this whole piece is pretty impressive maybe adding a border would be a big change for the right direction, nothing flashy just a nice border or frame.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding a border would be a plus.

~X~

GabrielMoon responds:

Thank you for response o/

[HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA]

haha

Ok what can I say here, I do think its pretty nifty though lots of color a nice chracter face and well it was funny and you cant go wrong there, it was a decent piece of artwork, maybe adding some borders with bright colors would be the final touch. other then that this is cool.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe adding some borders with bright colors would be the final touch.

~X~

DoctorGordonLMK responds:

lol i stole that fatty from a 90s cartoon called denver the last dinosaur if yo wanna know

[Bulky choice]

Nice idea here

Well I like the idea here with spiderman and the colored backround that actually makes a good piece, the "BODY" portions of spiderman seemed off though maybe thats something that can be worked on. anyways keep up the good work. it was an interesting piece of art, could use some touch ups here and there and was overall pleased with the outcome, so nice effort indeed, now just keep it up on the rest of what you, wich you can see is fine so-far.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the body portions of spiderman seemed off though maybe thats something that can be worked on.

afiboy69 responds:

this piece of garbage is from 2012.

[Starcraft Terran Medic]

Nice stuff

Now here you have presented something good here there are some things about this that really standout and some that dont. but its a good start sofar. Now sofar this is a good start and you made it stand out and some areas didnt so much. Very nice visual here, love some of the colors and tints it really brings things out well. Now before I get to the helpfull changes part of the review I will say that you have done well here, and I was impressed with a number of areas.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok and here we are with another helpful idea or two, hope they do help but if not Glad I was able to put a tad bit input on a few things. Maybe adding more of a "SHINE" in places like on the outter helmet areas you had some shine already but wouldnt mind seeing more of a bright type of shine or sparkle shine.

~X~

Vonschlippe responds:

I honestly think this is a rubbish review.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Please provide actual descriptions of what's good and what's bad. You repeated the first sentence twice, partially reworded, to bloat the paragraph. Your only suggestion is vague and does not help in any way whatsoever in improving the "not so good" elements of the piece. Maybe I'm over analyzing but I don't think you put any effort into this review.

~Von~

[Point and Clicks 2014]

Haha these are cute

Ha I must sy these are kind of cute, simple nice solid colors and interesting, while not a lot of detail here they are still amusing and entertaining. I can see them being used for a number of stuff, but anyways nice work here, I like what you have done here.

~X~

TinyStuffz responds:

Thank you! ^.^

[Hotel]

Notbad

And once again this was notbad, good idea behind the comic and I liked what it was saying, overall decent and amusing of a comic.

~X~

ChazDude responds:

Thx Xwayne <: