XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[johnny utah's tankmen!]

Notbad

And so we have another art piece here filled with some entertaining value aswell as some interesting art creativity and thats what i really look for so nice effort on bringing the differant elements together with this one. This actually works so its notbad and the idea of this is even better, kinda fits the whole concept just perfectly so you did do a nice job here and it was pretty good i thought, wouldnt mind some extra color here and there though, but i understand the idea, just wish there was also a way to add some more details and color. And so my ending note with this piece is that it has some good value to it, it has some artistice style to it, and i pretty much enjoyed what you have presented here, hope that you make many more great stuff as this one, it was top notch in my book.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And while my reviews do seem very positive i thought i would take the time to suggest some ideas, tips and some little advice for some sort of improvment and if not then it was all in good pleasure viewing your work. So as mentioned some more ways to add some extra details more shades and linework showing would be nice, and maybe a touch of color aswell.

dommi-fresh responds:

good review wayne

[BioShock]

Nice and unique

Now its pieces like this that make me love looking for new art pieces to review, you have all the right elements allthough some areas could be better and some extra effects could be added, This was a wacky piece of art that you have going here, I love the view shot you gave this, also you gave this art piece some "ACTION" the up close action and the far decent backrounds really worked well here and it gave it that live action scene you have here, onething i would like to see possibly, more glow on the "EYES" anyways nice piece of art here. You have some amazing ideas and that shows here, the effortsof your labor come through and it shows strong with detail, so i for sure am excited for more of your work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Its pieces like this that make me enjoy art even more, so i may have a few ideas that i would hope could help you improve on stuff, Some more glow on the eyes, and maybe more glow on more lighted areas around the art piece.

TaraGraphika responds:

Hmm...yeah...the eyes does look a bit dull, though.....Thank you very much for the honest review. I'm sure to upload more works for your entertainment:)

[decapitation]

Awsome idea

Another fine piece of art in the portal, so today is a good day for finding new creations and thats what i have found today, You have a good creative sense, and it shows here. So for ages i have been telling people to do this style of black and white art with some color, just a touch of color, but i have to say you have done a fantastic job on this, the blood dripping was great while everything else was black and white, youalso gave some good emption with it, i think to bing out the "EMOTION" some more you could have a tear drop from her eye that could also be in color aswell. but other then that you have outdone yourself and this is also a new fave of mine. Your creative styles have comeout for sure today, cant wait to see whatelse you do come up with, and i will be looking forward to seeing more of your efforts in art and creativity.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure i will have much improvment ideas, but i will do my best topinpoint any suggestions and advice of improvments, allthough you are a stand-alone great artist as this piece shows already. Some more emotion improvments could be added like some colored tear drops on the girls face would be a nice touch.

Civilized-Apocalypse responds:

wow sweet jesus this is just a doodle but uh, i can understand the emotion you are trying for with the tear drop but i wanted to emphasize more like, she doesnt give a fuck kind of expression ajfierglerjargjafkojr im not really great with emotions yet though so it probably got misinterpreted a lot

[Feed the Masses!]

Lots of color

So sometimes its kind of hard to judge someones art, but sometimes you have too, i think you have a wonderfull piece here but again could use some more efforts and better details, maybe a few changes but not much, anyways notbad. Alright so there was some nice things about this one, there was some nice things about the color allthough i thought that there could have been some brighter and even more "VIBRANT" areas of color, like the part of the stuff comming out of the mouth, and the "BACKROUND" was too simular as the main drawing so it all was too blended in, so maybe a differant backround would be key. Alrigh you have something good here i like the artwork that you have presented here now i wouldnt mind seeing some more efforts but sofar you have done a decent job here and i do look forward to more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some slight improvments are always a plus especially with artworks, i may not be a pro at art but i do know a few things so hope you may look into some of the ideas and advice i may post up here, but besides that good luck. There was some issues with the backround and color that could be changed and or worked on.

Erbmaster responds:

Thanks for the tips!

[In a Storm]

Something differant

So every once in awhile you do come across something differant on this website and here you have done just that its pretty neat kind of like a pixle portait of some sort it seems, The issue i had with this one though was that it was just too small you should amke it a larger world and bigger view screen for more detail and just overall more to see in the art piece, just an idea anyways.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well with pixle like style its hard to grade on the creative style but one thing that could be better would be to make this pice somewhat larger as it was just kinda small.

Erbmaster responds:

Will do! Thanks for the review!

[To Write Love on Her Arms .]

The eyes

Let me start off this review of this decent art piece with saying that this was a good piece of artwork, this shows some good effort on your part, and you really bring things together very well with this piece, There might be some recomendations later but you seem to have it down for the mostpart. The eyes are like if they are starring right at me so that was something neat and had a mystery to it, The whole piece was pretty good some nice sketching, good tone here, the only real issue i had was that maybe the dogtag was abit off but not by much, other then that this was actually a pretty solid piece, as for improvments maybe some more detail and scratches in the dogtag. And in closing you have some good artwork here some decent detail effort, and it shows, dont know if i can suggest any improvments but if i do you will see it, but other then that this was actually notbad and has some good effort behind it so nice job there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
and once again i come to suggest a few idea that may or may not help but in the end i do hope these tips, ideas and any advice i do offer does helpwith this art piece and or future ones or just upgrades for that matter but for the most of it i enjoy the work you do here. But as for this one and above there is not much improvment i see maybe more detail in the dogtag thing she is holding, but other then that this was alright.

Flashmovieboy responds:

Thank you for such a detailed criticism ! I'm glad you liked the piece and I agree with the mistakes you brought out. . . thank you again !