XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bulky choice]

Nice idea here

Well I like the idea here with spiderman and the colored backround that actually makes a good piece, the "BODY" portions of spiderman seemed off though maybe thats something that can be worked on. anyways keep up the good work. it was an interesting piece of art, could use some touch ups here and there and was overall pleased with the outcome, so nice effort indeed, now just keep it up on the rest of what you, wich you can see is fine so-far.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the body portions of spiderman seemed off though maybe thats something that can be worked on.

afiboy69 responds:

this piece of garbage is from 2012.

[Starcraft Terran Medic]

Nice stuff

Now here you have presented something good here there are some things about this that really standout and some that dont. but its a good start sofar. Now sofar this is a good start and you made it stand out and some areas didnt so much. Very nice visual here, love some of the colors and tints it really brings things out well. Now before I get to the helpfull changes part of the review I will say that you have done well here, and I was impressed with a number of areas.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok and here we are with another helpful idea or two, hope they do help but if not Glad I was able to put a tad bit input on a few things. Maybe adding more of a "SHINE" in places like on the outter helmet areas you had some shine already but wouldnt mind seeing more of a bright type of shine or sparkle shine.

~X~

Vonschlippe responds:

I honestly think this is a rubbish review.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Please provide actual descriptions of what's good and what's bad. You repeated the first sentence twice, partially reworded, to bloat the paragraph. Your only suggestion is vague and does not help in any way whatsoever in improving the "not so good" elements of the piece. Maybe I'm over analyzing but I don't think you put any effort into this review.

~Von~

[Point and Clicks 2014]

Haha these are cute

Ha I must sy these are kind of cute, simple nice solid colors and interesting, while not a lot of detail here they are still amusing and entertaining. I can see them being used for a number of stuff, but anyways nice work here, I like what you have done here.

~X~

TinyStuffz responds:

Thank you! ^.^

[Hotel]

Notbad

And once again this was notbad, good idea behind the comic and I liked what it was saying, overall decent and amusing of a comic.

~X~

ChazDude responds:

Thx Xwayne <:

[More Fishing]

This was cute

Well I must admit this was kinda cute, a nice comic here with some basic colors but that is probably what was intended but I like the concept of this all and made for a fun viewing overall nice job. maybe as improving on things add some detail to the framework nothing too detailed just some small detail like shades and whatnot.

~X~

ChazDude responds:

This is a bit of an old strip, I've improved on shading and other stuff since then.

I never really liked how the water turned out, tbh.

Either way, thanks for reviewing c:

[Pencil ravens]

Not bad

So I found this one to be a lot of things but its a great drawing, the blank back round really focused on the drawing. I believe that's the idea, but regardless some nice lines you have input here and it was pleasing on the eyes. maybe adding something in the back round would be a plus.

~X~

Aachen-erichaj responds:

Thank you,
yes i was amazed by myself how I did it. Generally it was a study only, but I am proud how it looks like.

[Spider Dance]

Notbad at all on this piece here it has an alien-ish feel to it colors are solid and shades came out decent maybe more darkervand more mixed shades in the background webs. But overall not bad work.

gatekid3 responds:

I actually like the webs in the background, but i see what youre saying.

i think i should have used darker shading in general though, because now it looks less creepy becuase its too bright.

thank you.

[Elvira - Mistress of the Dark]

Wow this has some nice shine effects to it. All in the right places some really good shades aswelll I like what you have done here keep up the great work

Time-Breaker responds:

Thank you :D
Sure will, and I'll try to fix those purple colours outside the line-art in the future as well :3

[Agent Carolia]

Nice color and standing out

Now im not too much educated on this style of art but i must say it did catch my eye and i was pleasently pleased how this came up, and as i continue on in this review i hope to enjoy even more on what you have presented. A nice piece you have here you really made the color come alove and you have also showd the emotion in the characters face which made for some good realism, and i also like how the backround was abit bland as to focus more on the character. i do however think there could be some more shine on the armor plate she has on, more shine and maybe even some war marks. And so i am almost at the end here of this review but i have enjoyed your work here, and through out this review i may suggest some positive options that can smooth it out somewhat but if you dont use any, thats cool too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so in this case i do have a few tips of helpful options and hope they could help to improve on some things, and i do hope you will look into some of these. So a few things that could give this some more realisim, would be adding some war dmg like explosion smoke some gashes and dents in the armor, then maybe some shine on some corners would also be a big plus.

Rennis5 responds:

you make some fair points, thank you dude :D