XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Linear]

Life

Well its exactly as it says "LIFE" and that describes it clearly, there could be some splash effects thrown into this like some ripped open area with color comming out expressing life can be anything. but just an idea i like the meaning here though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above, break the norm adding some color or splash effect could be that area of effect.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

That would be cool. :) Thanks for the feedback, and sorry I didn't respond earlier, for some reason this didn't show up in my feed back in September.

[Picasso Face]

Hmmm notbad

Well this was notbad, kind of interesting, I like the color tones and shades, even the outline seems to come together all in its own cute way, would have loved some "SHADES" in the backround but other then that this was notbad. will have to check out some of your other stuff soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice work here, nice basic tones but all came together, maybe some extra shades and whatnot.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I wasn't really going for 'cute'. XD Thanks for the comment though! Always fun to read your reviews.

[Arashi]

Nice

Well this one was nice work, there are some nice things here I think there are some things you can jump on more, like the red "EYES" bring that out a tad more more of a glow, the lightning bolts that are around him could also have a glow or thicker lines aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow on the red eyes, and more bold on the lightning lines surrounding him.

~X~

Undeadkitty13 responds:

i see thank you

[Alakazam]

Nice work

The shine and detail on this was really good, I wouldnt mind more "SHINE" like on the spon and maybe some sort of backround something small. just an idea there but its pretty good piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added shine like on the spoon would be nice.

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EliasAdams responds:

Ok, thx for the tips!!

[Alpha and Omega]

Dark

There is a certain darkness to this and I believe that was the intent the expression on the guys face is right on the black and white on this is pretty nifty but a touch of color wouldnt hurt even though the eyes had color maybe a bit more of the color idea.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color would be a nice touch.

~X~

linda-mota responds:

holy shit this pic is 7 years old wow i forgot this exists.

[lion]

Awsome

This one really caught my eye, the deep style of talent really shows off well with this one, there are some bland areas that can be worked on but other then that this was awsome. This was a nice piece you have shown some great detail and great "TEXTURE" I do think you should ad some frame or borders that add to the detail of this, anyways nice work here. Now before I go I do wish to say this was a pleasure to view and review, its stuff like this that keep me interested in reviewing awsome stuff just like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you should ad some frame or borders that add to the detail of this.

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Jon-Fuchsworld responds:

Thank you very much! I know that I am an enemy for textures and the details, I never was a good painter, but I work on it! thanks for the good and the helpful words!

[Final Prophecy: Gliese 581 G]

Really nice work

This was cool, has a very nice ice feel about it now here I would have liked to see one of two things or both maybe some more sunlight comming in from that gap, and maybe some wind blowing to show off more ice feel to it, but anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe some more sunlight comming in from that gap, and maybe some wind blowing to show off more ice feel to it,

~X~

Acrylla responds:

Thanks man! I appreciate the feedback and I agree, the whole painting lacks in a lot of ways.

[Erl]

Dark

Dark and creepy thats what I get from this, and just about love the eyes and the expression on this piece, would have been nice with some added color, maybe a drop of blood, maybe some colored or glowing eyes but regardless this was a pretty awsome piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would have been nice with some added color, maybe a drop of blood, maybe some colored or glowing eyes.

~X~

GGTFIM responds:

xD thank you for your comment! The intention was to ''mask'' his darkness with a psycho smile >:^)

[dont worry u arent gay if it didnt feel good if it was painful ur st8 m8 so dont worry]

Another interesting piece

Well here we have another interesting piece cant figure it all out but seems like you have had a good idea here, anyways nice work here hope to see more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe adding some stylish borders to accent the art itself.

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ZabuJard responds:

i tried to make it look like starry night lol! thank u for your long thoughtful reviews!