XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

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Nifty

Now this was a nifty piece you have here, I like the "EFFECT" you have here, the glowing eyes are notbad but maybe they should be a bit more glowing and such, but other then that this was a pretty nifty art piece, keep up the good work.

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More glow on the eyes just a tad.

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YakovlevArt responds:

thanks for the review. I'd love to know how you think more glow on the eyes would make the piece better.

[Harley and Deadpool crazy love]

This was nice

Would have liked to see more of a joker in there but guess you had your criteria on this one, but the color and design and structure of it all is very well done here, I was pretty impressed, very nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like this how it is but maybe adding the joker would be a fun and nifty idea.

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Neutronboar responds:

Thank you. These two characters together were specific requirement of the competition the illustration was drawn for but yeah I'm with you, Joker would of worked much better here.It's an old drawing. I would do it differently now.

[Christmas Face 2016]

lol funny

This was an amusing piece you have here, it is actually kind of cute, And I just love the "TEXTURE" and patterns you have on this one, You also have some great ideas here it was all pretty nifty if you ask me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmm not sure I like everything maybe one or two more props but thats about it.

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Aope responds:

Hey thanks for the feedback glad you like it :D

[Speedpaint Krita 3.0.1 | Jacksepticeye - Undertale]

Dark and creepy

Now here was something that is a great choice for the month of october, this one actually reminds me of a young joker, you did an outstanding job here, great design, awsome color tone and shades, the "BACKROUNDS" could use something maybe like a "CLOUDY" or smoke backround.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some better backrounds as described just above.

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MartsArt responds:

Thank you so much for your critique;) And yeah I know backgrounds are not my strongest domain :( but in this one I actually didn't have time to do one, I had only 2 hours to paint this and then I had to do things for school (In general I have school from 8am to 10pm so I don't really have much spare time)

[Hunger]

This is nice

you have some good drawing skills and this was just a taste, now I do think if you added some color, not to the whole things but maybe just the apple, that would really set this above the rest.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really like what you have in this black and white style now dont get me wrong they are great but you should try a colored version it would really bring out the whole design more, or ifyou are not into that, try just bit of color here and therem maybe an outter frame, or some focus point in the middle. such as this apple or the eyes.

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AuraVaury01 responds:

Thank you! honestly since it's Inktober I don't add much color, but I've been thinking on buying red ink for future drawings. Perhaps when Inktober is over I can paint some of these and add a little more of color, can't really focus much on drawing these days since i have a lot work to do :)

[Sandra]

Wow

Wow this was awsome not sure what to say with this one you have really made this realistic the skin tones and texture was pure awsome, and really glad I got to see and review this, very nice job here.

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Its perfect as is.

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DaveRooder responds:

Very kind of you, Wayne - thanks! :)

[Death Candy]

Wicked

This one was pretty wicked and very interesting piece you give off a good dark feel as it should be and thats what I liked about this piece, the "FONT" could be better on the wording maybe something more scary-ish, anyways nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
just maybe a change on the font text you have.

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Comick responds:

Hey thanks man! Glad you enjoyed it. Yeah haha I drew this a while ago so I'd probably change a ton of things now..and the font included. :b Thanks for the comment

[technoprist]

Wow very nice

Wow I have to say this was very impressive theres a lot of metal here would love to see some "SHINE" comming off some of it maybe even some "WAR-WOUNDS" and damge from battle not all clean and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Very nice piece needs some shine and even lighting effects on the bulbs, now to be honest its a great piece as is.

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Evgeniy2013 responds:

thenx
I will consider your councils then

[Wii Sunrise]

Notbad

This one is bright and sunny like, and that is a nice sun comming about, almost seems as if you could possible make some glow effects in the white line areas, but other then that this was a pretty good piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more glow in the white break areas of the sun would have a more focus on the brightness of the sun.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Seems like you've been looking around for Wii-related art? ;) Glow effects could be cool, as with the other one there's not much depth here either, so that might add some of that. Will give it a try if I ever remake this, thanks!

[Wii]

Nice

Nice shades of color in the backround, the fonts seem simple and the main colors are alright there was not much depth but maybe this was more of a simple style and those are still pretty good, overall nice stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the color tones but wouldnt mind more "DEPTH" of color with more shades and deeper textures almost.

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Cyberdevil responds:

The 'Wii' was actually made with vectors as well, so no font. Good feedback, thanks!