XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[YARD]

Hmm interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm well this was interesting and i really like the idea of "GRAFFITI" but with the one you have here its really hard to see the word "YARD"?? I think its because of all the extra stuff you have going in out and around, the lettering self is notbad ok color not too much shading but its slightly there, the texture is something you may want to work on though, So my suggestion for improving on this would be have the word yard show up or standout more or what you could do is have the main word "YARD" standout in one color, and have all the extra stuff mend into a differant color something lighter so that the word is the main focus point, i like your idea though maybe you will like mine.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround color besides the bland white would be nice, And have the main word "YARD" standout in one color, and have all the extra stuff mend into a differant color

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GOSTEONER responds:

i could do backgrounds for future drawings, but backgrounds usually take focus off the main piece. i have to disagree with what ur saying about making the letters stand out more than the extra pieces, the extra pieces are what make it look like graffiti and less like a piece of typography. the real image has darker shading but once scanned the brightness of the scanner kind of distorts that.

[Adept]

Wow very awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Wow i was very impressed with this, infact i added it as my faves, but anyways this really reminds me of one of the older jedi from starwars?? but i guess its not. i really like all the effort in color like with your backrounds and even main charcter, the backrounds were pretty neat but i wouldnt mind seeing more visuals back there even, maybe also give the character like a glow effect around him maybe his eyes or whole head would be a nice little effect and such, maybe even have another character in the distance maybe thats the one character he is looking for, so what im saying with that is give the image abit of a story like something is going on, anyways nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add another character in the distance, sharpen up the backround cloudy effects, and possibly give the character some aura or glow for the extra effect

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Seriously responds:

yeah I plan on drawing all of my friends characters from our DnD campaign, eight, maybe even sketch some of the situations we encountered (some where very funny and all were interesting). Thanks for the good review and the fav. :D

[{BT} Under Water]

Its notbad

~~REVIEW~~
This is notbad, it kinda reminds me of a skyline, some mountains then the ocean?? but anyways if thats what it is its all great, but i think you need to change up on some colors, like the ocean is fine with the color you have, but maybe the mountains could be slightly darker and such, then the sky could be maybe even lighter then the ocean itself, now you could add some sorta prop out there like a small boat or something, maybe a fisherman but it does need a "POINT OF FOCUS" something that gives the viewer a focal point, the image you do have is nice and pretty fantastic but it does need more to it, its more or less just a nice backround which can be used, but i hope you do ad more to this in the near future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add a focal point, something other then just the backround you have, and change up the colors abit so its not all blending and such

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BenTibbetts responds:

Thanks for your input.

[Falling apart.]

Interesting

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat i like all the blocks and even the uplifting msg you are sending across and such, now this could be much better i think, first off i think that thoe whole canvas should be larger so you can also show much more blocks and maybe even other people with uplifting mesges and such, just an idea but it should be on a much larger canvas, gives you more room to show off much more, now i also think this could be even better with other colored blocks and such, so i do hope them small tips help, but as this art piece is, its pretty good looking and a pretty good idea i thought. anyways nice art piece , keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a few things would be first make a larger view screen with more blocks and more mesges and such, more mesges and such, maybe even adding some differant colored blocks aswell

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BobtehLog responds:

Thanks for the review, it could of be alot bigger (I do agree) but this result I have no is nothing to what I had first planned so it pretty much just all got recreated on the spot. Thanks for the review :)

[Neytiri]

Wow pretty good

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this is pretty good, the quality is really top notch, this is kinda crazy because i just saw the movielastnight so this is still fresh on my mind and you have a very good likeness here the backround is notbad either, i do wish you made it much larger though. as for hte backround is seemed out of focus allthough that may have been what you were going for, but i think having some other related stuff from the movie like more forrest backround would also work, maybe even some other navi in the backround or even go as far as having one of those flying creatures to go the extra detail there, well just an idea or two there and i think it would give the image much more life and such. anyways nice work here keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More backround characters and or creature could help to liven up the image

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JoshSummana responds:

Yeah the background was supposed to be blurred cos in the reference there isnt a lot of forestry either, its a rock face with a bit of growth and then a waterfall on the right. But I wanted Neytiri to stand out as the focal point, so thats why there are no additional Navi or creatures - and plus thats not a review - thats just you saying what you want in the picture..."having one of those flying creatures to go the extra detail there"...its not in the reference/promotional movie poster so I didnt add it.

I just had a look at your work, and not being a dick, but I thought you would be totally amazing if you are willing to easily judge other peoples work...?

[Cold Symbol]

This was interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well this was notbad, kinda bland in some points but you are right about "BLUE" working well for this, you may want to try a "RED" version or even have the letters Red and the backround blue or even vice versa, i find red has a great feel to it especially if its the deep reds and such, And as for the lettering, it had some nice detail but i think you need to give it much more shine then what you have there, maybe if it was red you might beable to implement that abit more, so regardless its a pretty neat art piece, but with a few fixes as i suggested here it could be even better, so good luck. and hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some differant colors either for the letters and backrounds i suggested a deeper red, and amore shine effect aswell

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HeavyTank responds:

Hm, okay, and thanks for leaving a review (although you have thousands :D).

[Supernova]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well i must say you really like this "LIGHTING" style of art, and dont get me wrong so do i, this was another good one, i dont know if its your best of works but its still pretty impressive, this one kinda reminds me of what the star ship enterprise goes thru in warp mode, but anyways, i like all the stars all around, but im thinking the "STARS" themself should be somewhat smaller and have more warp to them as this is like a warp and everything should be in super warp speed, just a thought on my end though, I also think the "CENTER" area should be more brighter to reflect something special in the center, give it that super bright feel like some of your other works have, but with all that said i like what you have here, keep up the decent work, i look forward to reviewing more of your work soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested make the stars smaller and with more warp speed feel to them, also make the center more brighter

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Shikhs responds:

thanks

[ABSRACT Crture-Under the Ocean]

Nice

~~REVIEW~~
Now here is another nice bright one from you thanks for making the request, and glad you listened to me, now this one you have here is pretty differant but i still like it, and i do see what you mean about the eyes and mouth, the "EYES" have a really neat look to them, might have been nice if you put a little star in the middle of the eyes or something to give it that more eye look, but overall it does look pretty neat, and as for the mouth maybe give it some stars or shapes that make it look like teeth some sharp ones, heh just an idea anyways, but all and all its another neat pic with the neat brightness and awsome colors i liked from the last one, feel free to request a review anytime and ill be glad to review any of your work, so i look forward to more of your stuff soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well like explained, the eyes could use a more center points, and the mouth could use a teeth type of thing.

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Shikhs responds:

thanks man thanks for the review

[Abstract Creature]

Awsome use of color

wow and awsome on the use of colors here, you really gave it a glowing effect that cameout well, and i like how you gave it some sorta brightness or some glow effect along it, i really wish you had a larger "VIEW" of it, and as for the design itself its abit on the plainside but its notbad, i do however like how it almost looks like you have your signature but its probably not unless im wrong, but still you have a nice design here though and the colors really shine through the brightness so really awsome job.

How to improve well the onlything i could see on this one would be to make a much larger design more waves and shapes and also a much much larger viewing area "CANVAS SIZE"

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Shikhs responds:

thank you :)

[Fractal Freakout]

Amazing

Wow this was pretty amazing, i liked it i reall love all the assortmant of colors and such, you really made this standout with some bright and balanced colors, i have added this one as my fave, just love everything about it, from the twisting stars to the balanced colors, so very welldone on this one, if anything can and could be improved on this i think it would be to add some borders and frames, and if you know me i tend to suggest that alot but for this one i think it fits very well, you could have some sorta coloered border all around the edges or some fanct frame with stars and such, well just a few ideas that may help in your next piece of art, untill then keep up the awsome art work

Improving? well as suggested some colored frame and or borders would be nice, something that accents your main piece.

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Viamede responds:

thaks for the review, however i never use frames.