XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Japanese Wolf]

Needs brighter colors

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this one was the most oddest ones of the bunch, while it does remind me of a wolf and is the most clearest of all the other designs, its also seems to have abit lesser quality to it, it might be because the texture is not showing so well or theres less color to this, it might even be that the color is that of a darker one, something to think about, as the Brighter colors "RED" "BLUE" "GREENS" tend to comeout much better, the whole moon above is also kinda odd, and the "LETTERING" seems too think over the other designs, but anyways its not my faveourite by any means but i still like it, and as i have said in the others it has a pattern likeness and needs that extra push to give it its own "UNIQENESS" for this one i think it needs a brighter color, I would suggest using more then one color, like you could have the Wolf one color and the "MOON" another brighter color, it might show off better, and then as said before backrounds would be nice and give it that uniqueness i been talking about, so these are all things to think about when creating these and or new designs.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated, something with more of a personal touch on each one so they are not such the same, in this one some new colors for the wolf even a second color for the moon would sufice, the texture was just not showing up in this one.

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MonoFlauta responds:

yes, the problem is the photo because i dont have scanner yet u.u but thanks for the review!

[Japanese Tiger]

another decent pattern

~~REVIEW~~
and now for the Japanese Tiger, The "BLUE" really looks good here, i wouldnt touch it much if you did bring it out into other art programs to spice it up, the "TEXTURE" really shows up on this one, now i must say this tiger is my favourite of all your work, mainly because the texture does show up more then the red dragon, but i do feel like the red dragon that it could use some effects such as the red dragon again some glowing effects maybe it be the "EYES" or maybe in this case it could be the "TEETH" and eyes, but you get the idea, and i do believe it would improve on thse works, another reason i do say this is because all these Japanese styles all seem the same and only differant is the "SHAPE" so it tends to be repetitive and not much changes except the shape, so you have to give something extra to each one so it doesnt seem the same everytime, an idea like i said on the dragon would be to ad some backrounds, maybe you ad a backround for each one that represent the animal more, and in that sense it would not seem the same everytime you make a new one, because the backround would be differant aswell. anyways good luck on your next entry i did like this one most of all the ones you have.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Backrounds and other effects could be used so these are not all the same style, each one needs more uniqueness then the other.

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MonoFlauta responds:

oks thanks for the review :D (I made the same mistakes in each draw lol)

[Japanese Dragon]

Its Decent.

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so i thought i would start on this one as i like dragons, and you used one of my faveourite colors, so nice job there, i am thinking that these designs you have are pretty impressive but i also think you need a mixture of program use, like say if you used photoshop and or paintshop pro you could really "DAZZLE" it up woth brighter colors, and some other effects that would really bring the dragon out, also i wouldnt mind some backround scene, as it would also bring out the picture more in "FULL" say like you could have some black and white backround then the red dragon, that would really put some focus on the main item at hand, just a few ideas that would really bring this out in focus, The texture is notbad on the dragon but again the color could be sharper and even have more texture with other programs, but also as it is now with the pencils i think its notbad and looks ok, As another idea i wouldnt mind seeing some "EFFECTS" on the eyes, like you could have them "GLOWING" or something, So all in all its a nice design of a dragon i like the style, could use a few things here and there but i did enjoy it, so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained, a few fixes here and there, some glowing of the eyes, some brighter colors in the texture, maybe a black and white backround so theres more focus on the dragon and still giving the image a full effect.

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MonoFlauta responds:

ha yes, a black background would be awesome and a metal color for the dragon i am thinking it would be better with a bit of red... thanks for the very usefull review!

[Planetai]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so here we go, another great piece with the great effect of the sunlight, now to be tottally honest this is some of my fave stuff from you and you should do that more with your newer works of art, and from looking at this older stuff you can see the changes you have gone through with all the differant art pieces, very nice indeed if you ask me, but as for this one the "STARS" again i think are too much here, but that can be easily fixed with making some larger ones and losing a few others, now as for the "SUN-GLARE" the one coming off the planets with the rings thats a neat little trick but i think its one of those old tricks im not so sure that might be the actualy effect in space or maybe it will but, im thinking you do need to come up with some better ideas there, but with all that said, you have presented another great piece, not my fave like the other planets and such, but still ok with me, now this may have been the last piece of art i have left to review, it has been a pleasure reving these and i hope to review more when you have something new, so good luck in future stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Here would be less stars and larger ones at that.

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Shikhs responds:

thanks for the review i will make more for you to review

[The Real Moon]

Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Another impressive one here, this couldnt be more perfect to be honest, you have everything i

always tell you about in other pieces, like the backround stars, allthough there was too much

of the "STARS" i still though it was a great touch in making this look real, and just a not i

have also made this one of my faves to my faves list, but anyways back to the art at hand, The

sunlight is perfect and its brightness and how it reflects off the planet, then you have the

what i think is exploding smaller planet? well that was a nice touch i thought, a few fixes

could make this even more of a perfect piece like the "EXPLODING" or firey planet needs to be

small like showing its more in the distance, and you could lose a few stars as its abit much,

maybe have differant sizes of stars not all the same size, that might give it a more realistic feel to it. So anyways another great piece by you, i cant wait for more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Start off with less stars and differant sizes of stars and such, make the firey planet smaller and seem more in the distant, just a few ideas that maybe will help to improve on this or a later version.

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Shikhs responds:

thanks for the review as for the stars thing you are right and the exploding planet is none other than Earth therefore i made it smaller so as to create an effect of watching the destruction of earth from the moon

[Tingu]

Love the texture.

~~REVIEW~~
Now i didnt see this one, i love this one, i even added it as one of my faves on my faves list, this has its own uniqueness to it, i love the texture like of the large center warp, now not sure what this could be used in but it has some really nice texture, and the four other smaller warps are also perfect in place and also great with its texture aswell, i do think this could be shown larger with a larger canvas view screen, so maybe as an idea you could show off more of the detail and even ad in a few more warps and such, I have seen alot of your stuff now, and this is one of my faves, im pretty sure you can make another version and make it with much more lighting effects, give it that lighting skill you have, that would be very impressive, The center lighting circles in each of the warps could be brighter, it will show off more of the focus and such, so theres another idea or two for you to work with, anyways great job, i loved this piece, and hope to see more like it soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A larger canvas screens, more brightness in the center circles, and maybe even some deeper texture of the warps.

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Shikhs responds:

thank you for the review next time i will make it better with my lighting effect

[Abstraction]

too bland

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this one is differant, this reminds me of maybe some sorta plane crash like at an air show or something and you can see the red explosions, and orange explosions, all just being destroyed, kinda like two planes just coming together, the blue backround gives off that air show feel, i think a few more effects and lighting should be in the backround and if you go with that idea you could actually get a plane of some sort in the backround, well something along them lines, i think it would be pretty neat if you ask me, But it does need more then what you do have in there as its too bland needs more "DETAIL" like props and such, but anyhow i still liked it, so notbad with this one, not your best but not the worst either.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Its too bland and needs more detail and even props.

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Shikhs responds:

Thanks for the constructive advise ill work on it

[Pure Energy]

Radio-Waves of the dead

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so here is something slightly differant but yet still with your own style, its differant in the sense that it has a differant feel, like this reminds me of some radio waves but its like from some scary movie where the dead or ghosts are trying to speak to the people on the other side or something like that, so nice job on getting that part in a differant feel. now as for improving on this one, well, I would like to see more "EYES" and even bodies forming somewhat but yet still keep it like waves of energy that are just waving through, just an idea though, maybe oneday you will make a 2nd version of this, but for what it is, i really like it and it has emotion crawling from it, and thats what i like to see in artwork, such as yours.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have some eyes in there maybe a few like comingout at you.

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Shikhs responds:

Thank you very very much

[Looking upto the Sun]

Its better

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so i got around to reviewing this one, Now compared to the other one this one is less cramped which i mentioned so im glad to see you take some of my advice, and i do get a pleasure in reviewing your work just as much as i enjoy getting them responded too, but anyways this has some better use of colors then the other one, I do however think it needs some "STARS" in the backround though, since this does remind me of outer space and all, I also like the being in the middle it kinda reminds me of those spirit things from avatar, now that might be an idea for you there with your lighting effects you could really make something like avatar beings or something, but anyways i thought this was pretty decent, much more improved since the last one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some stars would really light this up abit

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Shikhs responds:

thank you very much for the review.I now seem to feel the errors

[Ghost]

Ghost hehe

~~REVIEW~~
Wow ok now i didnt even realise this, now that i can see it it is most impressive, infact i like it so much that i have added to my faves list so props to you on this one, and i like how it is some sorta ghost, me liking ghosts and all heh, but other then that props to you on another brilliant idea here, now with all the differant colors you seem to really make this come alive, the eyes are just perfect and they do give off a sad look to them and all, now normally i would suggest some backround but i think its more fitting that its just pitchblack back there, In this the eyes seem to really comeout very well and really showing emotion and that this is a ghost of some sort which i really thoought was neat, so awsome job here on making something that jumps out at you not only in color but it really does look like its a ghost, So props to you for a wonderful piece, here is where i might suggest something to improve on, if anything it would probably be some brighter eyes or something.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the eyes much more brighter, but other then that its pretty impressive if i say so myself.

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Shikhs responds:

thank you for finally reviewing this and maybe you can use this ghost in ghost motel 12 lol