XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario D]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i like this one of mario, he almost looks abit "FRENCH" even hehe, but anyways, this was neat and it had an artistic feel to it, i like that you didnt kill it with overpowering reds, the face was welldone and some good detail, gave him character, now if you ask me this could have had more work done on him like, the "SKIN" you should have gave it a pale or tan color not just the white, and in the backround added something, i noticed you dont do much work on backrounds? well i can understand that but also remember that it may give the art piece a more fuller effect and even tell a story of what you are working on, but anyways nice work and i did find this to be artistic and such, hell one last idea could have been that "LUIGI" is in the distance like a small one, nothing that would take away from the mario itself, something to try out in a future project or something, but once again an enjoyble and artistic mario here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad some work with the backround something that shows more to the main character, i suggested a small luigi or something, and i also suggested some more color effort on marios skin, maybe even giving him a tattoo would be interesting.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Good point with the backgrounds, I draw scenery often but I don't think I've ever really combined them with something else in a vector, should do that, good tip with Luigi too. Thanks for the long review X!

[Hall of Angels]

Holy art

~~REVIEW~~
Ok love the lighting effects on this, and seems like your oldself is back on the whole "LIGHTING" effect style which i have grown fond of, now for this one being called "HALL OF ANGELS" i can agree with that one, but i also see another image on this like a sword of glory or a holy sword of some type, but it is something of holy, and the lighting effects really bring that to view so nice job there and yes you did show good effort and creativity, is this one of your best, i would say its in the top 3 of your works thats how much i like it, very welldone, and the effects are really showing forward once again, now as to improve onto this hmmm, This seems like it could use some more in the distance like with the blander spots or something, nothing crazy just something subtle in the distance some flying agels would be a nice touch actually, or maybe even a few stars in the distance, something that really shows it off, but anyways really nice art piece, let me know when you make more stuff so i can review it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some stars and or an angel in the distance on the left and or right sides, those were the bland spots

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Shikhs responds:

thanx for the review as for the blander spots all my creativity was exhausted LOL.

[Purplex]

Lighting effects needed

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this is another neat entry from you, now "PURPLE" just happens to be my fave color, and you really went with a deep purple like i like here, now here you didnt show much of the lighting effect that i am fond of, but i think it would have been perfect for thei image design, such as the "LIGHTER" center point here, i love the wave design you gave this and all and purple is a good colortone to go with, just that this needed that lighting effect you are so very good at, so work on that maybe in a differant version or just something to remember for the future, as the lighting effects you do is your best stuff based on all your works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As said, the lighting effects are needed in this one as it would have worked so well with the deep purple in the backround and gave more focus to the design itself.

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Shikhs responds:

thanx for the review and actually i tried with the glow effect with this one but i kinda liked the original piece.

[Airavat]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Now this is interesting, i am slowly but surly getting to your other works here, but anyways this one, kinda reminds me of the "OIL" in the gulf of mexico the dark purple being the oil, and the bluish being the water and ocean part of things, and looks like the dark purple thing in the middle bottom is the tube and all the oil is spreading around for destruction, then again it also reminds me of a chainsaw lol, but regardless of all that its pretty neat, i like all the darker colors in this one, so kinda hard to review but still a nice design.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Mix up some more colors in here

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Shikhs responds:

thanx for the review

[True Devil]

Awsome color.

~~REVIEW~~
Wow i guess you did make some new stuff i have not been paying attention, but this one i really like, it has tons of Color, all around, and correct me if i am wrong but there is a little man in there? or that would be the demon lord? if so you did a very good job, cause all the color represents the power and such that he is going to destroy us all with and i think you represented that pretty well, some improving might be that the little guy was raiding his arms and you have light coming from them hands that really just spark what is to be the color and lighting effects, I am really impressed with all the extra color added stuff alot better then some of your earlier stuff, so i was really impressed with this one, and wouldnt mind seeing more stuff like this one, you really outdid yourself once again, ao anyways the only changes i suggested here would have been the raising of the arms with a more light effect coming out, anyways good job all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well i suggested some color fixes with the little demon as he raises his arms something like that but for the most part its pretty neat.

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Shikhs responds:

thanx for the review i didnt expect that youll like it that much :D

[Piconjo's sword]

Nice work

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so another 3d render, which is not bad, i like what you did with it, like with textures and really making it shine, i think you could have still gave it abit more of a shine, more brightness on the shine part, like if it was out in the sun or something and the sun is directly over it especially being out on the sand and all, I thing the handle should be more thicker, something that holds all that blade should have more of a grip and such, and there was a little green "GEM" at the bottom, i thought this could be more brighter maybe with more of a glow and such, maybe even bigger in someway, As for the sand as the backround i thought that was a nice little backround maybe it should be more lighter like in some sorta sandy dunes type of thing, well these are a few ideas that could really help, maybe or maybe not but something to think about if every wanting to improve onto these, nice little sword or knife here i thought it was very impressive even as is, and i look forward to seeing more of your designs and artwork in the near future, so good luck on anything new.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
suggested a number of ideas and improvments above, such as brigter gem, bigger handle, brighter shine and sandier sand.

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Manuel-Dangelo responds:

in fact this is not a little sword, this is a huge masive sword. haven't you ever played NewGrounds Rumbles? try to unlock Piconjo's charapter and you'll know what I'm talking about.