XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[upsideDown Town]

I like it

I do like this one, the purple egg like shaped creature is differant, the backrounds could use some work as its kinda plain but it also works because you dont really want to take away from the alien atleast thats what i think it is. as i explained before you need to give more darker tones and shades to give it the darker fell. anyways good luck in future stuffs

Improve on darker shades and colors aswell as something with the backrounds

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up-a-notch responds:

ok sure

[Not lucy in the sky...]

Needs something

This was an ok alien but it needs abit more for one i think the aliens shape was abit off you should put abit more effort there and give it a more scary look, that would also mean make the backrounds darker and creeoier aswell

Anyways hope thhose tips will help you to improve

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up-a-notch responds:

thanks man

[Killer Teddy]

Notbad

Well this was notbad, the color was an odd choice, the desigm was interesting even cute at times, this is kinda simple but its nifty aswell, it seems like its lacking something i would slap some borders on there somehow

As stated i would put some borders with the darker green tint

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thies responds:

Thanks. With borders you mean like thick outlines? yeah that could be nice :)

[Mini Mischief]

Nice dragon

I love dragons and this was one of my faves on here, love the texture and detail and you put some good focol points like the keys which was a nice touch, anyways keep up the awsome dragon making

This was brilliant hope to see more of your work soon

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EchoRun responds:

Thank you. :)

[Der Apfel]

Artistic

This one is artistic and has some good style to it all, and the color is great with it really love how the color blended into another one in this one, nice style and this piece really came alive with the color

Nice art piece, could have more characters or stuff in the backrop of the two main girls

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everydaycombat responds:

Thanks. I was originally intending to have a third girl in the background but I decided that would lessen the intimacy between the two in front.

[2113]

Nice job here

That was pretty nice work there, i love the red touces here and there it really made this abit more but i also have to commend you on a wicked style and imagination, allthough would love to see much more color

Add some more color and more to see

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everydaycombat responds:

Thanks a lot. I've really been wanting to add some grey-green shading or something!! But like I said, the original's lost and all I have is this crap quality edit. :( Maybe I'll redraw it someday.

[eddy]

WOW

The color on this was pretty amazing, and the backrounds were even better, the unique thing in this one was the, guitar, and axe one on this at that, love the detail you gave this.

If i were to give any advice on this, it would maybe make this whole piece like a poster so that means you would need to add some borders, maybe some anchient style ones

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dommi-fresh responds:

i would have done if the guy that asked me to do it payed money!

[{BT} Captive]

Wow very nice idea here

wow this was neat, you gave it a dark feel and i thought it was nice and well detailed, However i think it could be much better with much more stuff like cities trees and other stuff

Some advice on how to improve on it, is explained just above

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BenTibbetts responds:

Honestly, you might be right. I basically like how this image came out but it'd be great to see more going on around the tree. I tried to sort of hint at that with the square tiles.

[The NES Pad]

Im impressed though

Its nice and is an exact of the classic consol, the controll it self looks great but its the wire that looks abit on the odd side and doesnt look real, but for the rest its awsome and nifty looking

How to improve on this, well my guess would be on the "WIRE" but not sure how.

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Nanakisan responds:

well the only way i can fix the wire is to maybe lengthen it and make it look more dynamic while also giving it weight by havign it droop against the ground.