XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shadowed Toad]

A colored version

Aww nice a colored version and riding a shell very nice, i can see you like mario themed stuff, this colored version was nice, would love to see some backround stuff though

Add some action scenes in the backround it will show more of a story here

~X~

Manuel-Dangelo responds:

in fact this is part of an full art I made for a colab, hold untill march 25 if you want to see the full vertion.

[Hammer Koopa]

Nice work

Well since you responded ill review some of your other work, the turtle was a nice toch, i thought it was abit on the small size but you did well really nice use of color.

Make it larger maybe add more spinning axes somehow

~X~

Manuel-Dangelo responds:

this is a piece of a full art work combined with the Toad Skater on the other submition.

[A tribute to Colour]

Its notbad

This is notbad, i think you could improve on this like with the backround maybe add a snazzy effect of fire works of color jumping out from behind the text, or something with that same idea

As stated above, hope it helps, i am glad to have seen this

~X~

GraphicDude responds:

Wow! Thank you again! Well...not bad your idea with the fireworks! Maybe I will rework on this on some rainy sunday afternoon!

[Good vs Evil]

dragons nice

This was nice the dragon theme, the art was ok, but i thought it could have had a sharper feel, maybe if you redid it with sharper and brighter colors but thats just me, i do really like this

Nice dragon theme

~X~

GustGuy responds:

thanks a lot man ;D
its always nice to hear other's opinions. õ/

[G-Pod Concept Sketch]

Decent

Well this was decent i like the differant progressions from start to completed versions, it really is a work of art that comes together, would love to see an even more detailed version, but for the mostpart its nice stuff

Nice variations

~X~

Galneda responds:

I'm hoping to incorporate this "dome-torso'd" mech design into a potential web-comic. I hope then you'll get your wish :D

[The little Robo-Knight]

Decent

This was decent the colors are abit bland, i think this is a little neat thing you have here, maybe add some glowing eyes or something, make more versions of these aswell

Add some glowing eyes and such

~X~

GraphicDude responds:

Hey! Thanks for your review! As I said before, this is just a little handmade doodle I scanned out of my old sketchbook. I had not the intention to deliver a fully composed bad ass design but to show a little bit of my handmade stuff! So I did not rework on this before uploading! Maybe I will do so in the future and then you will get your glowing eyes! :)

[Desperate Dan (noir)]

This was notbad

This was cool, the black and white style was neat with the bit of red, it would be interesting to have more colors but thats just my opinion, anyways nice job here, i look forward to more of your work

Nice work

~X~

Wajaholic responds:

Most noir comics only realy consist of Black, White and Red so thats why i chose to stick to the those colours. Thanks for the feedback!

[Smoke2]

notbad

Notbad on this one and if you did the coloring its cool, the dark purple is ok but i wouldnt mind seeing this character more like an avatar color, but it does look pretty good, the smoke backround seems like it could be shaded abit better i thought

Nice work here

~X~

Sangasan responds:

ugh, I seem to be plagued with 7/10s... ah well thank you

[Hip Granny]

Differant

This was differant, the colors are not crazy but have a bland feel but seems like most of your art works has it and its kinda neat that way very light but with this particular one you have him in a out there pose hehe anyways nice job

Nice and light style

~X~

Rutger responds:

thanks man, colors are cool.