XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[CoolJaw Comic Cover]

This was interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well this was interesting and as a logo type of thing its notbad, however i think there needs to be more to it you have a few designs and stuff in there but what i think it needs is more of that maybe even larger images as to see the "DETAIL" of the whole logo, the "FONT" could be changed to something more fancy and stylish maybe something more on the "WAVY" style the red blood spatter is pretty neat i thought but you should add some "TEXTURE" to it, its just kinda there and remember if this is your logo design everyone sees, then you want it to really jump out at them so they can checkout your flash or art, anyways nice entry i look forward to reviewing more of your stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make some images larger and or add more of them, make some fancy font besides the one you have, and add some detail and texture to the blood splatter

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Celx-Requin responds:

I don't know, it was a cover so I didn't want to go overboard you know.

I've always liked "simple" covers to films, like the "red line" in the French "kill bill" dvd cover looks better to me than the picture of "Uma Thurman" on the American dvd cover.

Thanks,
- Celx

[Tuky]

This was interesting

I like your sense of "CREATIVITY" especially with this one and the great mixture of animals and such you listed that sure is alot, and you put it all in this little creature very nice indeed, i would like to see some more creativity on this or others but with less amount of mixtures that way you can add more detail on just the few rather then just a ton of em

make another but with much less creatures

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bloominglove responds:

Thank you for a good critique. :)

[Borderlands]

I like it

Well this is ok i thought, it did have some color but not much, you did have the color in the right spots to focus on, the color itself seemed abit on the light side so maybe a suggestion would be to deepen the colors abit, also some shades could be set up in the distance so the art piece doesnt seem so bland

My suggestion to improve on this one would be to add some deeper colors and also some shades in the distance just behind the character

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magicswordz responds:

Fair review

I don't exactly have many colored pens, so thought to emphasize the key points of the art
scanner didn't exactly do the best job~ but yeah~ darker shading would have been better

And I guess some sort of background, maybe a pattern would be good~ thanks for the idea

thanks for the critique

[I'm Venom, rawr.]

Lol interesting

Heh well this was interesting it was also kinda funny and amusing. i thought you could have made it on a more "LARGER" scale and such, and i wouldnt mind seeing some more color and all, but what you have here, is pretty neat just needs more and maybe more visual clarity

How to improve? well make the canvas larger have a bigger print of what you are presenting, and a touch of color would also be nice

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TheFishyOne responds:

The thing is that I've made in on a smaaall corner on the back of my art block. As you can see the "background" is carton.

And I repeat : it was made on a small corner.

And what colour could I add? Venom's black afterall, right?

[PRIMATES! (7/7)]

This was notbad

Its really good actually you kinda made it how it really is i think, i love the mixture of all the differant poses and such, it was kinda neat and it gave it abit more reality there, and you did well on the element of where they live aswell, all and all a nice piece i thought, keep up the good work

Now this could be improved i suppose, maybe some more plants and flowers to reflect the envirment abit more, anyways nice job

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Lundsfryd responds:

Thanks for your kind words. I will take into account next time around :)

[Annie Mays]

strange but i like it

Now this was strange but I like it. You have an eye for detail like the enlarged eye. Good detail there. But not just that you gave it some humor with your wacky design so awesome job and good luck on your next stuff

Make more wacky characters in the distance

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Chickenlump responds:

Do you sign all of your posts like a pretentious faggot?

[SpiralCore]

wow

Wow this is so awesome. Not just because my face color is purple and all but because this is awesome in its own right. The design itself is wicked. I think it needs more lighting effects though. Like the lighted points could be brighter.

Improve on this with more lighting effects on the already lighted points

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tdwkiller responds:

Hey, ye i tried to make it that way, but i can't do much about it, if i try to change it the rest of the colours will change to much aswell, and i'm not that good photoshop or gimp.

But thx for ur review ;)

[fart]

hmmm interesting

Hey now that was interesting and did give me a laugh or two. I like how you had it in a sorta comic strip. I would have liked to see it more in a comic book form. But this was still amusing. It was confusing at first. But like I said still funny

To improve you could make it more like comic book style and more dialog text would help

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peixeaquatico responds:

yep :>

[Inxdemia]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well you really do have something to draw about when bored and thats not a bad thing, and with pen theres lots of differant little drawings here, while you only did have a pen it would have been neat if somehow you came across a red pen aswell then you could add a touch of color, but what you do have is some creativeness and it shows, some of the stuff you have here could be touched up and cleaned up to really bringout that artistic feel, but for the most part it was alright

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
why not add a red pen in there somewhere maybe a few details or even outlines on some stuff

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MonoFlauta responds:

haha thanks nice idea of the red pen or i can use green or others colors,
thanks a lot for the idea :p

nice review :p thanks for reviewing!

[Copic Sketch - Francesca]

I think its cute

~~REVIEW~~
Hehe well i think this lil art piece of yours is pretty cute its kinda like some sorta "AD POSTER" and because it does look like that im thinking you should add some "BORDERS/FRAMES" on the edges, its an idea to go with though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
like above add some borders and or frames on the edges to give it that more poster feel

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DeliciousOrange responds:

I'm not exactly sure what you mean by it looking like an "Ad Poster", but I have to say that personally I enjoy the broken, zig-zag background against the full-body character. Utilization and activation of the space is very important though, so I will certainly be careful in positioning my subject in the future.