XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

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Awsome idea

Another fine piece of art in the portal, so today is a good day for finding new creations and thats what i have found today, You have a good creative sense, and it shows here. So for ages i have been telling people to do this style of black and white art with some color, just a touch of color, but i have to say you have done a fantastic job on this, the blood dripping was great while everything else was black and white, youalso gave some good emption with it, i think to bing out the "EMOTION" some more you could have a tear drop from her eye that could also be in color aswell. but other then that you have outdone yourself and this is also a new fave of mine. Your creative styles have comeout for sure today, cant wait to see whatelse you do come up with, and i will be looking forward to seeing more of your efforts in art and creativity.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure i will have much improvment ideas, but i will do my best topinpoint any suggestions and advice of improvments, allthough you are a stand-alone great artist as this piece shows already. Some more emotion improvments could be added like some colored tear drops on the girls face would be a nice touch.

Civilized-Apocalypse responds:

wow sweet jesus this is just a doodle but uh, i can understand the emotion you are trying for with the tear drop but i wanted to emphasize more like, she doesnt give a fuck kind of expression ajfierglerjargjafkojr im not really great with emotions yet though so it probably got misinterpreted a lot

[Feed the Masses!]

Lots of color

So sometimes its kind of hard to judge someones art, but sometimes you have too, i think you have a wonderfull piece here but again could use some more efforts and better details, maybe a few changes but not much, anyways notbad. Alright so there was some nice things about this one, there was some nice things about the color allthough i thought that there could have been some brighter and even more "VIBRANT" areas of color, like the part of the stuff comming out of the mouth, and the "BACKROUND" was too simular as the main drawing so it all was too blended in, so maybe a differant backround would be key. Alrigh you have something good here i like the artwork that you have presented here now i wouldnt mind seeing some more efforts but sofar you have done a decent job here and i do look forward to more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some slight improvments are always a plus especially with artworks, i may not be a pro at art but i do know a few things so hope you may look into some of the ideas and advice i may post up here, but besides that good luck. There was some issues with the backround and color that could be changed and or worked on.

Erbmaster responds:

Thanks for the tips!

[In a Storm]

Something differant

So every once in awhile you do come across something differant on this website and here you have done just that its pretty neat kind of like a pixle portait of some sort it seems, The issue i had with this one though was that it was just too small you should amke it a larger world and bigger view screen for more detail and just overall more to see in the art piece, just an idea anyways.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well with pixle like style its hard to grade on the creative style but one thing that could be better would be to make this pice somewhat larger as it was just kinda small.

Erbmaster responds:

Will do! Thanks for the review!

[To Write Love on Her Arms .]

The eyes

Let me start off this review of this decent art piece with saying that this was a good piece of artwork, this shows some good effort on your part, and you really bring things together very well with this piece, There might be some recomendations later but you seem to have it down for the mostpart. The eyes are like if they are starring right at me so that was something neat and had a mystery to it, The whole piece was pretty good some nice sketching, good tone here, the only real issue i had was that maybe the dogtag was abit off but not by much, other then that this was actually a pretty solid piece, as for improvments maybe some more detail and scratches in the dogtag. And in closing you have some good artwork here some decent detail effort, and it shows, dont know if i can suggest any improvments but if i do you will see it, but other then that this was actually notbad and has some good effort behind it so nice job there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
and once again i come to suggest a few idea that may or may not help but in the end i do hope these tips, ideas and any advice i do offer does helpwith this art piece and or future ones or just upgrades for that matter but for the most of it i enjoy the work you do here. But as for this one and above there is not much improvment i see maybe more detail in the dogtag thing she is holding, but other then that this was alright.

Flashmovieboy responds:

Thank you for such a detailed criticism ! I'm glad you liked the piece and I agree with the mistakes you brought out. . . thank you again !

[A.T.T. Design Dossier: Artwork]

Differant but notbad

And so i start off this review and i have to say This piece was alot better then i thought, But again this was a pretty good art piece has a somewhat artistic value to it and thats one of the reasons why i was drawn to this, so nice work indeed with this piece you have here. You have a nifty piece here, i am really liking the black and white color here then you have a pinkish character aswell so that was neat, Im not too familuar with all the content and stuff but i must say its still pretty interesting and brings a "UNIQUE" to the boards, It does lack content though as there is not much there other then the characters but i guess it is what it is. And so that is that, Its a decent piece, there was some nice elements thatmade this come together, and a good use of skills to make it all look pretty smooth, nothing more i can say then that but do keep up the good work, effort in detail is always a plus. Anyways good art piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
For improvments theres a number of things you can do, I can think of a few ideas that may make this more vibrant and really bring it out and such, youjust have to be willing to go the extra effort, but anyways if i do post any tips and ideas i hope they do help. Well one idea might beto make the canvus size somewhat larger that way you can add more stuff and most of all more detail of your art, just an idea and its for sure to please. I would like to see more backround detail aswell, the black may be your theme and all but it would be nice to see some more detail then you had.

Celx-Requin responds:

I think it served it's purpose...
Thanks,
- Celx

[Morrigan Aensland]

Decent art piece

Ok well to start off this review, this was not a perfect piece, it was interesting and could be even better then it already is, I think for the mostpart this was a unique and interesting piece of art, so thruout the review i hope you will find some fun and possitive ideas. I think my first idea should be that you should change out the "BACKROUND" color or put some design back there because theres alot of black edges on the character like wings and what not that it blends too much into the backround, so a differant color might change that abit, also the "FONT" could be much better the rainbow one in lower left and the one in the backround, maybe something more fancy next time, and with more depth. The drawing is decent nice lighting and some good color tones the whole character is great, its just the backround that effects and blended in too much with the character. I got a good feel with this art piece, it was interesting yet it could use a few improvments as stated already, but overall i thought this was actually a pretty good piece, so keep up the decent artwork here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And my ending notes are that this was decent but still could use a few changes here and there so here are a few ideas and hope they help if not on this piece then on a future piece, just some good possitive advice for better impovments. So the backround needs change not to blend with actual character, so make the backround a differant color. The fonts or texts could be differant as explained before, Anyways nice effort hope to see some upgrades soon.

DragonPunch responds:

I appreciate your feedback! I look forward to hearing from you again soon! :)