XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[My 92 year old grandfathers workshop! Back to work!]

Nice work

So the visual was a tad bit hard to view maybe a bit more close up on this and darker lines on each drawing item and I would even try and use some Photoshop to really enhance this with some effects and or even some color like some stuff can be in color while some can be in black and white. But I will say welcome to newgrounds and hope you stick around cause you have some nice talents here and I look forward to much more from your library of art works but besides all that this was a fantastic piece that I want to see much improved

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color. Some better visual

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griguette responds:

Thanks! :) the tips are appreciated and i will try to take them into account. Check out the rest of my artworks and please give me some tips on those as well! :)

[Chibi Demon Lady]

Nice drawing here

Now this was cool and you have added some sleek and sharp colors and some beautiful line work that makes it even more smooth the backround is cool too that red circle is nice but I'm thinking make a pattern with it then shine a light from it might be a cool little effect off of the main character.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting and a pattern in the background for more effect

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VaporNinja responds:

Thanks! Funny enough I was actually doing a re-draw of this character except she wasn't gonna be in a chibi form.

[Zoom]

Nice

Now this is one of those dark and lighting effects that could come out very well that little lightning alone could be brighter and ad more lightning surrounding him for more effect too but put a glow in there as well it will give more effect with the dark backround and such. But besides that you made a good character

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lightning more light up effect

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DIWAKAR responds:

Thank you Sir.. Will work on it.

[Holy Water]

Brilliant

Now here is a good comic I could really get into you really showed off the great characters also bringing in some nice humor into this as well and the art style was just beautiful so I really got into this and kept me interest up high so nice work on this one and I hope you make more of this because this is some fancy and pretty brilliant stuff so as a sort of improvement idea maybe instead of the white borders have a light redish or a light brown but something different then the plain white. But with all that said this was a good piece of comic and I look forward to even more of the series if there's anymore

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Do something different with the frames

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ZeTrystan responds:

Oh, for the borders, I usually keep it white for the integration on other websites that uses it as their background, to make it looks seemless. :) Since Newgrounds has a black background, I can imagine it's quite visible ahah.

Thanks for the comment!

[Mermaid and Piano]

Nice

These under water styles are always hard to do it seems but I have to say you could ad more stuff in this one like on the sand ocean adding more shells and such and some fish in the backround maybe even groups of fish looking at her would be a huge plus but that's my imput for the day more props more ocean creatures

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More ocean stuff including shells and fish

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ToxicMaiden responds:

Couldn't agree more! I actually went and touched it up awhile back. You can see it here: https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/toxicmaiden/mermaid-and-piano-re-worked

I really enjoy that sort of thing.

[Fire Elemental Lady]

Beautiful

A beautiful piece here and I must say the red swirly things above her head could be more brighter they seem like a good focus point and more texture in the red background also but besides all that this was a pretty good piece of art just more texture and you will be good to go anyways untill next time nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More brighter red and texture reds

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ToxicMaiden responds:

Thank you! I really appreciate all the feedback you have been giving me.

[Queen Of The Eyes]

Very artistic

And here was something very artistic the whole blue theme was a great idea and really enjoy what you have done here with the eyes and "GLOBES" I think you need to make those parts really light up even more with a real glow of some sorts or whatnot, it will push more focus on it. And as I come to a close here, you have done well, you have suprised me and have an outstanding piece of art here, you have for sure got me doing a double turn on this one. And Finally something that has Polish rawn all over it so you have some good talents and they are being put to good use. Anyways nice creative style here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more glow on the globes and eyes.

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Urichov responds:

Holy shit it's XwaynecoltX from newgrounds

[2B fan art]

Oh wow

So what you have here for us is one big swoop of eye candy nice detail and a great element of style. so that was a plus for me, the detail really shines. wow I must say this is something for an eye to admire, there is alot of beauty in this like the backround and reflects off the character herself there some nice focus points I do think that the "SWORD" should have much more shine on it though or a sparkle at the end. So you have done something here not a lot of people can do and thats show off the great talents in pieces like this and thats rare.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Put some shine in the sword and a sparkle here or there.

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Neferity responds:

Thanks so much!!!! actually this draw it's a little old hahaha I gonna redraw it ! I'll take your tips for it , thank you <3

[Dishes...]

Very nice

Wow this is beautiful but to answer the question about comic there are lots of comic series on here even one that's about 700 comics long so it's a pretty good place I would think as for your comic yes this is a nice piece love your use of color and theme and your character design is very nice I think the frame work could be more dazzling then just the plain type and style but maybe adding a color or spiky waves or something but regardless of all that this here is a fantastic comic and I look forward to seeing much more of your work come through but anyways untill next time keep up the brilliant work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Frame work could be different just a tad

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Caustic-Imp responds:

Thanks for the kind words!

I’m not really using a good program for panels, bubbles, and lettering so that definitely an area I need to figure out. Thanks for clearing up the comic thing, I haven’t seen any on here but I am not super active here so that’s more on my end.

[The Churn Wurm]

Wow I love it

Wow this is great stuff here the line work and eye for detail is really good I could see you having a really nice colored version of this or even a colored backround to accent off the drawing itself, but anyways very nice detail here. Alrigh you have something good here like the artwork that you have presented here now i wouldnt mind seeing some more efforts but sofar you have done a decent job here and I do look forward to more soon. Yould extend some parts in this art, and ofcourse some more polish is always good, but anyways I have enjoyed this piece very much.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some backround base color, or a colored drawing would be nice.

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ConstipatedNugget responds:

I’m glad that you like it! I definitely agree with you, though, this could use some more polish.