XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Knuckles and Tikal]

Notbad

Well I will say this was notbad at all, love the bright colors and well designed characters, even the backround was pretty cool, my thinking is that a burst of light should becoming from behind them and allow for some nice lighting effects to come fourth.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A burst of lighting effects from backround.

~X~

DJaxsNG responds:

I evolved. I appreciate the critique though. Definitely will keep that in mind.

[paz]

Very nice

So first off great art here very beautiful and nice character design I like all the backround and all the lights even in her hand those are the little things that really make a piece like this sore into greatness you have already made this great. Now as some points of suggestion those lights and auras could have more of a neon glow about that and the one in her hand have it really glow and shine beyond normal just to give off the element effect. So just a few ideas you may like and they may or may not work but they are suggestions. That may just enhance this piece but regardless of any of that you have an amazing piece here and I look forward to more of your stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects can go a long way

~X~

immaboreddude responds:

Thanks for sharing your opinion :), I actually tried that but if I add more lights it will distract a lot from the main part of the drawing (the girl).

[Air Elemental Lady]

Nice work

And once again I come onto your beautiful art work here this was a good character design her face seems a little flat maybe there's some emotion that could be put on her face and the blue squrly lines could have more of a glow about them. Besides those improvement points you have impressive ideas here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow suggestion and more emotion in face

~X~

ToxicMaiden responds:

Thank you for your input! More emotion in her face would definitely help.

[Noir]

Love this

Well here was something really nice I love the reds and oranges I wish there was more light effects used especially common from behind that window or curtain it would really make this art piece as a whole standout even more the character was very good too maybe more shadows under the character too I would even put in a candle that lights up room as well but this was a nice piece you have here and really nice use of color that comes out well other then what I have already suggested you have outdone yourself with a beautiful piece of artwork here today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More light coming from behind the window or curtain even adding a candle for more lighting effect could be nice too

~X~

DocLew responds:

Thanks a lot!! I'll certainly think about your tips! I'll do better next time :)

[Robot]

Cool robot

Very cool robot here and just from the dark and light drawing tones here you can see that you really put your time in and each sketch was a work of art lots of energy in this piece. Two things I can see you adding ofcourse some color and even just parts of him colored not the whole thing. Then there's the case of adding a background something of his world and where his story is at like a broken down city landscape or maybe even a beautiful ocean behind him you can even work my two suggestions together by adding a colored backround and leaving him as is but anyways just a few ideas that maybor may not interest you but nice work here and I look forward to much more of your works in the near future

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color. And some background as suggested

~X~

InkRex responds:

Thank you so much! I will definitely consider this for future works.(:

[Neon Glow]

Intense

Now here was a very intense piece I am loving the dark sense here but with the subtle light effects is notbad I think you can make those small areas more light up like the eyes and the light stretching around him from the back side light them up more and even more glow it will reflect off the dark tone and make for a really nice outcome in effects of course. This was a nice drawing you have and I bet your son just loves it it's a beautiful piece actually and shows a smooth feel and detail about it other then that I can't say much more other then that this is pretty good work and you should really show us much more of your works hope you bring out great stuff such as this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Awesome stuff maybe increase the glow effect of the lighted areas

~X~

Skimlet responds:

Ah, thank you so much, and thanks so much for the feedback, it was very detailed witch is so incredibly helpful in showing me the areas I need to work on. I'll be sure to keep that in mind on my future works :D

[My 92 year old grandfathers workshop! Back to work!]

Nice work

So the visual was a tad bit hard to view maybe a bit more close up on this and darker lines on each drawing item and I would even try and use some Photoshop to really enhance this with some effects and or even some color like some stuff can be in color while some can be in black and white. But I will say welcome to newgrounds and hope you stick around cause you have some nice talents here and I look forward to much more from your library of art works but besides all that this was a fantastic piece that I want to see much improved

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color. Some better visual

~X~

griguette responds:

Thanks! :) the tips are appreciated and i will try to take them into account. Check out the rest of my artworks and please give me some tips on those as well! :)

[Chibi Demon Lady]

Nice drawing here

Now this was cool and you have added some sleek and sharp colors and some beautiful line work that makes it even more smooth the backround is cool too that red circle is nice but I'm thinking make a pattern with it then shine a light from it might be a cool little effect off of the main character.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting and a pattern in the background for more effect

~X~

VaporNinja responds:

Thanks! Funny enough I was actually doing a re-draw of this character except she wasn't gonna be in a chibi form.

[Zoom]

Nice

Now this is one of those dark and lighting effects that could come out very well that little lightning alone could be brighter and ad more lightning surrounding him for more effect too but put a glow in there as well it will give more effect with the dark backround and such. But besides that you made a good character

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lightning more light up effect

~X~

DIWAKAR responds:

Thank you Sir.. Will work on it.

[Holy Water]

Brilliant

Now here is a good comic I could really get into you really showed off the great characters also bringing in some nice humor into this as well and the art style was just beautiful so I really got into this and kept me interest up high so nice work on this one and I hope you make more of this because this is some fancy and pretty brilliant stuff so as a sort of improvement idea maybe instead of the white borders have a light redish or a light brown but something different then the plain white. But with all that said this was a good piece of comic and I look forward to even more of the series if there's anymore

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Do something different with the frames

~X~

ZeTrystan responds:

Oh, for the borders, I usually keep it white for the integration on other websites that uses it as their background, to make it looks seemless. :) Since Newgrounds has a black background, I can imagine it's quite visible ahah.

Thanks for the comment!