XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Floating through space]

Pretty

The background and effects here are very pretty to look at and the color use is very spot on for a space type setting. I think the cat needs a bit of work, just fine detailing and maybe less use of lines in the outline of the image to flow more with that space type background. It was good that you used a bit of color in those lines but maybe try a blending of the colors instead of simply changing the black line to a color that matches the fill colors. Overall a very interesting pretty artwork. I love stars and space so I did enjoy this one. You have shown some decent effort here, and it does spark some interest especialy with me, its the little things that keep me interested like this piece. I got a good feel with this art piece, it was interesting yet it could use a few improvments as stated already, but overall I thought this was actually a pretty good piece, so keep up the decent artwork here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just try to blend your main image with the background more and use less lines to give a better look

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thewolfprime responds:

Thanks so much! Yeah I've been working on improving my line work. :)

[Seliem Bradley (fullmetal alchemist; brotherhood)]

Good meaning

And here with this one we have some good meaning on this one a double meaning infact it was well drawn I think by adding some color would have been a blessing in making that meaning come alive even more like red eyes on the shadow or red shadow all together

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color for more effect

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MaikaMikaela responds:

thak you :) I've been thinking about redrawing this piece so I might do it with more colour next time ^^

[devil-fanart]

Awesome

This was an awesome piece you show a lot of detail and structure and the backround was not the best but you still showed some style that has not been shown here in a long time and that's what I have really come to love and enjoy what you created so if you do decided to upgrade on this one I would suggest some small background detail

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small background polish and detail

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aloksubedi responds:

Wow, thank you very much.

[Memorable Characters and their Creator.]

Wonderful piece

This is very wonderful all the different pieces in here and you bring them all together in one piece it all looks great and very artistic with some nice style too you should have backed the backside with some color of some sort

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Added background color would be a plus

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Oliveblade responds:

Thank you so much!
I will also look into your suggestion. :3

[Soldier in the rain]

Very nice

So this was some really nice work the shine was a nice touch the rain was an even better touch but you should represent the rain hitting the ground better maybe some puddles or something that jumps out more that would be a real plus of things anyways nice character design I really liked it so nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some better rain effects when it drops

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DovahFeyn responds:

Wow, I wasn't expecting to get any more feedback on this. Thanks for your feedback. Weather effects are something I have barely done, so I will definitely try to do some more work on it.

[Oc hot chick in the beach]

Wow this is beautiful

Wow I am in love with this the deep purple hair is really beautiful so very nice work there the rest of the character has really good structure and you really did a good job in her design so very nice work here and I look forward to much more of your work just wish you did more with the background it lacks just a bit

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround detail

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Knightfanghentai responds:

alright ^^ thank you and noted!

[Ruby haired assassin]

Comic Book Level

This is very much comic book level artwork here. Something you'd see in an older 90s comic series. I love the girls red hair and the way she is positioned. The armour and outfit is very unique and visually appealing. I love her expression in her face as well. I would say this needs a full background like a comic, maybe a fight scene or some type of scene to fit in with your character, this almost seems like a waterpainting and I love the flow of colors that it gives off, Classy and Freshness And I am Supportive of this very Majestic and Diverse piece it gives off a nice Groove about this, so nice effort on this fine piece of work here. A Polished blend thats what I really saw here today, And now we are heading to the end of this review but before I do head out I would like to say that I like your work and do hope to see more of it, it was pretty interesting and had fun reviewing it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
JUst needs a back here nothing major in term of the art itself as that is almost perfect as is

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OliverBengtsson responds:

Thank for the review, I most say that is, by far, the longest review I have read in a while :)

[Woodbender 2]

Great

A good background here with a dark setting that you have captured with your use of colors and shadows. The effect on his hand was an interesting touch, like he is controling the trees but it could use a bit more brightness to it to stand out a bit more or a beam of light... the character remains me a bit of an angry mark hamill lol but it is a good drawing, And its always stuff like you have presented here that I really enjoy, there was lots to see in this one and there was some good showen effort on your part, now doesnt say that there cant be some more effort but thats for later, You have a Stellar piece of Blending unique styles here, anyways decent art piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More bright light in the hand effect otherwise it is great

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ArtDeepMind responds:

Hello, thank you for taking the time with the critique! I appreciate it.
I was told that he look like Hammil before though :D Thats funny.
About the brightness, I agree completely, I have a problem with adding more brightness to my work, that it would look overdone or somthn like that.