XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Slicing coconuts colour]

Funny

This seems like something my best friend would do to my coconuts when i piss her off heh. The green color of the girl was nice and kind of reminded me of a female anime Hulk. I think that the background was good choice given the setting and story you are trying to tell here. I think more shadows are needed in the overall piece to show the actions of her swinging the sword and maybe more lines of emotions around her face. I love the motion you have given her body and breasts. Nothing like a nice pair of bouncers. And with all all that said I will not bore you any longer and will wrap this up, but on my ending notes here I do have to say and comment thats this was a decent piece here interesting and even entriging, so keep up the good work and always make things better with as much effort as possible. anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shadows and actions around her swinging

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Rennis5 responds:

Solid advice, thank you :D

[Kasia n Dub]

Nice concept

Interesting ideas here and nice concept. I am okay with the black and white only coloring as there is dept and shadows used with the light. I just think more light is needed in certain areas and her body positioning needs a bit of work. Maybe more turned in her abdomin area and more light coming off this dub friend of hers. Her face is great and her lips are sexy. nd so my ending note with this piece is that it has some good value to it, it has some artistice style to it, and i pretty much enjoyed what you have presented here, hope that you make many more great stuff as this one, it was top notch in my book. So try and get some more Extended efforts in this one. anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More light coming off her friend dub and maybe more background details but the plain grey does work with the color scheme here.

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GhoulKitten responds:

Thanks for the review! And I agree, I could’ve taken a bit more time with this one.

[Into The Deep (Steven Universe Inspired)]

Very good

The show Steve Universe has always been one to enjoy, a relaxing funny cartoon. You captured that relaxed feeling here with the way the female Garnet has her facial expression and hair flow. The colors are spot on for this background and the bubbles around her are pretty neat but id make them a bit more consistent in flow and size as they seem a bit rushed here and there, And so my ending note with this piece is that it has some good value to it, it has some artistice style to it, and i pretty much enjoyed what you have presented here, hope that you make many more great stuff as this one, it was top notch in my book. So try and get some more Extended efforts in this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More details in the purple bubbles to add some consistentcy maybe make them less blurry

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jiasenART responds:

Hi, thanks for your detailed in-depth comment.
The bubbles you mentioned are not rushed. They are intentionally made blurry, scattered and less detailed to create an illusion of depth to make her face more into the focus. You can say it was a bit dramatic on my part. I often mix detailed features with less detailed erratic features to give a contrast of focus in my piece. I hope I explained the reasoning properly.
cheers

[Showtime]

Beautiful

Very hot and nicely done art here. The bodies and blending of colors with details, textures, and shadows all work out very nicely. It looks like a painting from digital art. I think the head to neck aspect is a bit off in their bodies but that may just be the way these girls are designed based on your fanart. Overall pretty nice detailed fanart girls here. And on the ending note here some good visual here with this art piece, some things could be better as stated, but overall this was actually notbad at all, and I do look forward to seeing more of your work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to really change maybe just the way the heads meet the body in positioning, and maybe even more shine from the sparkls in the backround let it really light up.

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TreC101 responds:

Wow! Thanks for the feedback, I'll take the things you said in consideration with my future art. Hopefully they'll get better :D Thanks again!

[Aisling]

Very well done

This here was a well done piece I love the "CIRCLE" visual here and border, I honestly would only suggest one thing to upgrade and change up and that would be to ad some "SHINE" to the hair maybe a streak a long streak of shine on the hair would be great, but anyways nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the hair maybe a streak a long streak of shine on the hair would be great.

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DarqueBasylisk responds:

Thx! :) I will think of it.

[Cym the Imp [Gift]]

Interesting

I think this is a very intereting piece of art, almost like a painting the way you colored it. The background of a simple shape turned was very cool and had a good use of lighting effects for it. The hands and feet seem a bit off in size but that might be intentional. The glow on her nipples doesn't fit well for some reason so I'd work on making that flow better next time. The ab work and body art was great. I think you have a talent here. Not sure what else today you have brought everything here today and made a decent piece for everyone to enjoy, there might be some improvments but not much at all. I love to Critique art and whatnot, but you do have a nice polish of quality on this and thats what I noticed, so keep up the decent arts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fix the glow effect on her nipples to make it more consistent.

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PajamaMcHam responds:

Hey, thanks much. I appreciate critiques like this. The deconstruction of my arts helps out a lot. I'll have to agree with you there on the nips, they were kind of a last minute addition... I didn't put as much work on them as the other glowing bits. I feel I haven't quite nailed glowing in general, I'll do some more studies. Anyway, thanks again for the review, keep it up.

[Lucario for 2Mickennxtre68]

Good Paint

This is a good colored up sketch but iit needs more of a background... the character itself is drawn out well and has a good use of shadows and shines to it. The position of the Lucario is a standard one so it is good you were able to work with that...id use less black lines in the future to give a more blended look..you mentioned this as a speed paint so i am not sure how much you contributed but more details next time is best

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Give this a nice background and maybe limit your use of the black lines to blend things better

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RainbowDogma responds:

Thanks for the critique. The reason there's no BG is cause the person who requested it is planning to have it appear in a game they're making, so i left the bg transparent (this version just has a plain white background so the watermark is visible) to give them an easier time of placing it wherever they like; similar reasoning was why i wanted the lines very deliberate and clear, since i'm unsure how exactly it will fit into the world. If the requester asks me to make it colored lineart or simply more painterly around the edges, that is easily fixed.

[Miss tia pinup]

Very nice

Wow I must say this was very nice work it has a subtle approach to it and such, the colors are light, and theres a lot of shine on her and thats ok, I do think you should ad more of a mesh feel to her lingerie clothing to give it that more real effect and all. A nice piece of work you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you should ad more of a mesh feel to her lingerie clothing to give it that more real effect and all

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HOLIMOUNT2 responds:

I fully agree , im not entirely proud of how this piece came out.

[Taehyung]

Wonderful

Well this guy seems familiar. Is this V, the South Korean singer? The use of blending the skin colors brings out a realistic touch the depth of the eyes and proportions of the lips are realistic. The colors in the bandana are very vibrant and bring a wonderful touch to a common portrait..his expression in the face and facial features are very well drawn almost looks like a photograph..

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a bit of changes around the eyes more shine in them but it is pretty good as is

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fireferreto responds:

Hiii! Yes, this is, indeed, BTS's V!
This is literally the most helpful and descriptive comment I've received in social media so far, so thanks a lot! I will work on this for sure!
xoxo

[VW Golf - Turnaround]

Nice car

This was pretty cool and I love the animation on this aswell almost like if its in a show room of some sorts, but the car was cool the glass on the windows seem like they could have more of a sparkle and shine to it, but besides that its a nice car you have here and nice design. So that was a good art piece, some areas could be more creative but I do understand the direction with this, it was a pretty good presentation and something differant, so nice work here. and I look forward to more of what you may have.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine and sparkle on the window glass of the car.

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devilsgarage responds:

Thanks for the commends and feedback - yeah the show room camera perspective definitely help sell that feeling.
The intended direction was to make it look like it lost all the luster and shine - but still a well-maintained classic veedub . Those sparkles would definitely work on brand spanking new piece like this baby - https://twitter.com/devilsgarage/status/840630668631527424
I would love to expand on this servies - all in due time, check back and thanks for dropping by