Different
Well this one was very different and it could have a whole other meaning and maybe it does in it's own way but I do want to see you have more focus on the main text of it all maybe that part could be more light up with some shine and some glow just to have more focus on it the outter part could still be dark so that the light area still has that focus these are just some small ideas that you may want to try out in the end it may get you some better results for your art piece just something to think about and it is all a positive vibe either way you decide to go
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting and darkening effects
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