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[Ruby haired assassin]

Comic Book Level

This is very much comic book level artwork here. Something you'd see in an older 90s comic series. I love the girls red hair and the way she is positioned. The armour and outfit is very unique and visually appealing. I love her expression in her face as well. I would say this needs a full background like a comic, maybe a fight scene or some type of scene to fit in with your character, this almost seems like a waterpainting and I love the flow of colors that it gives off, Classy and Freshness And I am Supportive of this very Majestic and Diverse piece it gives off a nice Groove about this, so nice effort on this fine piece of work here. A Polished blend thats what I really saw here today, And now we are heading to the end of this review but before I do head out I would like to say that I like your work and do hope to see more of it, it was pretty interesting and had fun reviewing it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
JUst needs a back here nothing major in term of the art itself as that is almost perfect as is

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OliverBengtsson responds:

Thank for the review, I most say that is, by far, the longest review I have read in a while :)

[Woodbender 2]

Great

A good background here with a dark setting that you have captured with your use of colors and shadows. The effect on his hand was an interesting touch, like he is controling the trees but it could use a bit more brightness to it to stand out a bit more or a beam of light... the character remains me a bit of an angry mark hamill lol but it is a good drawing, And its always stuff like you have presented here that I really enjoy, there was lots to see in this one and there was some good showen effort on your part, now doesnt say that there cant be some more effort but thats for later, You have a Stellar piece of Blending unique styles here, anyways decent art piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More bright light in the hand effect otherwise it is great

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ArtDeepMind responds:

Hello, thank you for taking the time with the critique! I appreciate it.
I was told that he look like Hammil before though :D Thats funny.
About the brightness, I agree completely, I have a problem with adding more brightness to my work, that it would look overdone or somthn like that.

[Yet Another Character Portrait]

Awesome

Well I still think his hair should be a lime green but I'm just happy that you have been using color not too fond of the light color but hey it's color right anyways great piece here and keep being artistic keep making great stuff you have massive talent and hope it takes you places anyways great work keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Green hair. Green hair lol

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mustxng27 responds:

I actually didn't add any color on most of my drawings, including this one. Again, it's probably the way the paper looks. This is meant to be an uncolored picture of the appearance of this character. His hair is naturally white, even in color, actually. Lime Green is too flashy looking. Thank you so much for your suggestions, man. You're so kind!!

[Character Portrait]

Very nice

So now you really getting into some color even as light as the color can be you still are presenting it well I wouldn't mind the background with a deep red or blue color while the main drawing has some light colored shades like you do have here now. So anyways very nice work indeed and I do look forward to even more of your stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color ideas mentioned above

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mustxng27 responds:

Thanks for all your reviews (yes, I read them all.) Actually, this doesn't have any color at all, it's just the paper. I haven't logged into my account in ages, so I never saw your reviews so I could respond but here I am! But I just scan the paper on which I draw the pictures to the computer and sometimes they might seem colored because of the color of the paper itself. Anyways, thank you for all your helpful reviews once again.
Also, I have an Instagram on which I post a shit load more often than on here. Check that out if you feel like it.
Thanks in advance.

[Assault & battery]

Notbad

Well this was kind of cute you made it simple and yet still fun. I like the simplistic style especially in black and white but some added color would be so fun on this and maybe just adding some colored frames it would give off that depth that it's lacking just something to think about but the joke or idea you did pull off well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some colored borders would be a plus

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tonyfamous responds:

Thanks for the review :-)

[Self-Portrait based on an Oni Mask]

Cool

Reminds me of a friend I have the horns are cool and there should be more shine on the horns maybe on the top also I like the idea of whiteness from the eyes but if your gonna do that change up the backround maybe some flames or something but you have a nice piece of art here and good character if you ask me

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Change up the backround so it's not matching with eyes

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Keyboardsmashed responds:

Thank youu~~
Youre right, I didnt even think of making a background! I hate doing backgrounds honestly, but since Im getting into animation, I should start getting used to it.

[Spanking Widowmaker Commission (GIF)]

Nice

The animation on this seems not so fluid I do like all the detail and the graphics and artwork especially the color very deep color it's really just that animation that could be smoothed out more. But besides that this was notbad at all

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The animation could be smoother greaphics are fine

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PaddleTone responds:

Another early animation. Thanks for the critique!

[Savior From Above]

My favorite

And this one is my favorite of all of your work the gold the blue the silver it just is so vibrant with color and shine this is one I wouldn't change at all because it has so much detail in it it's just a beautiful piece very well designed very sleek and well done so nice work here for sure anyways keep up the great work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on such a perfect piece

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Blacklawn responds:

Thanks! I'm really glad that you like my creations

[Goku Super Saiyan 3]

Beautiful piece

This was a very beautiful piece of artwork I love the deep texture in skin and outfit it was the hair I wouldn't mind more of a radiant gold feel to it and in the backround there should be a beam of light giving off that shine and light effect but besides that this was still a great piece of artwork here so nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A beam of light from the backround and more gold texture on the hair

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Lessy responds:

Thanks ☺️ i appreciate the tips and will definitely improve in the next one.

[Disposable People ID Matte]

Different

Well this one was very different and it could have a whole other meaning and maybe it does in it's own way but I do want to see you have more focus on the main text of it all maybe that part could be more light up with some shine and some glow just to have more focus on it the outter part could still be dark so that the light area still has that focus these are just some small ideas that you may want to try out in the end it may get you some better results for your art piece just something to think about and it is all a positive vibe either way you decide to go

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting and darkening effects

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VicariousE responds:

Thanks for the review! Was kinda meant to be darkish, the trash can in the background was an old royalty-free piece of clip art, run thru some filters and effects. The logo was printed and colored by hand, then turned into a gif. I ran a transparency of some clouds, but, as you say, didn't quite fit the bill. If I had continued the show, I would've made something similar again, only higher res and framed as an actual title card... although even then, they were on their way out in favor of all digital 'super-overs'