XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[idontknow2]

This was cute

So it's nice to see you draw about your boyfriend I like the two versions here and I would love to see you do more your line work could be polished and some added color would be a plus but I like it very much just needs some polish

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More polish needed more smoother line work and some color would be nice

~X~

Rgessimai responds:

Thanks for ur comments

[2-D]

Nice

Well this was nice I like the 2-d effect wish there was more shine on his hair and maybe some smoke from the cig but other then that you did a fantastic job here and made it look magnificent so props to you on a beautiful piece you have here it's just great to see the detail put into artwork like this so untill next time keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine in the hair and smoke from the cig

~X~

antichlorine responds:

thank you for the feedback!

[Office Party!]

Probably uour best work

So this here is probably your best work to date because you put alot of energy into this and it comes out with a vibrant touch as well as all the colors and charchters the amount of detail is magnificent and the deep color is even better then that so very nice work I love it so keep doing what you do as you have done here hope to see more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes needed it's a beautiful piece

~X~

ChazDude responds:

Saying nothing in 'THINGS TO IMPROVE ON' while giving four stars out of five reduces the integrity of this review somewhat.

[technoliberation]

Artistic

Well this was pretty artistic I like this and was pretty artistic if you ask me I think there was a lot of stuff here and no real focus point so my suggestion to you is put on some focus points or some lighting effects on a focus point

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some focus point needed

~X~

vinara128 responds:

Hey thank you for the constructive review,will do better next time. :D

[Art Trade with Foxluu]

Very nice structure

Now here you have a very good charchter and show them in good expression love the clothing detail and the use of color also having the detail on her clothing is always great to see only thing here I would love to see improved would be that background it's lacking but overall you have a beautiful piece of artwork here and I'm very pleased with the outcome so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The background is lacking so add something back there even a pattern of some sort could work

~X~

KanesakiHyudou responds:

thank you for the feed back...my recent art works have a lot of background art in them but it takes so long to make them! XD!

[Quote (Cave Story)]

DECENT

I like this overall, just feels it needs a bit more in terms of polishing. I love the “RED” balloon and the addition of the animals. The boy looks confused so if that was the expression you were aiming for, you got it. I love the blending of color to color in your overall digital coloring. I am not too familiar with cavestory, but in my old age maybe I am, but this does look similar. I think you did some decent fan art here. And so we have another art piece here filled with some entertaining value aswell as some interesting art creativity and thats what I really look for so nice effort on bringing the differant elements together with this one. So I Applaud you on a good days efforts and work with this one allthough it probably took longer. You have shown the Desire in this piece, And now as I end this review on this awsome piece of work, great efforts here today, its always nice to see stuff like this come around the portal now and then.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just polish up the main boy with more details in the body, seems a bit too loose in some parts but decent overall.

~X~

ErnieTheMighty responds:

Awwww! Bless you! Thank you so much!

[22 Gashi Gashi]

Love it

I really love this the colors really just jump out on this one I love the Nintendo controller I do think you can ad something to that controller like adding a beam of light raising upwards that would be something really cool so that's an idea just to think about but overall you have a magnificent piece of artwork here and hope you keep making beautiful stuff like this one here today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A beam of light as suggested

~X~

ScepterDPinoy responds:

I forgot about that one too (beams of light). Thank's for your suggestion.

[[C] Anad]

Wow

Now this was a very intense piece of art here and has some nice props in the art piece like the snake and the crown and I think you can ad a sparkle to the crown and some shine on the snake skin just an idea that could really improve on this great art piece very nice colors used and nice smooth line work so I will end this with a thank you for all that you do

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested some shine on the snake skin and some sparkle on the girls crown

~X~

holikrep responds:

I wish I had you around while I was drawing this! Now that you've mentioned it i'm sad I didn't include some sparkles ;u; especially since those are usually my favorite things to add~ anything to make it shine/glow! I really appreciate you taking the time to comment and for being so sweet ;u; )/ <3 I enjoy reading these a lot!

[Sketch Collab T Monster]

Love it

So with this one I love the little animation that came with it and that was pretty smooth in it's own right even though it was black and white I thaught it came out well nice drawings that flowed well with the animation I thaught you could have added some color or at least the background and now that this review is over nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color would have been cool

~X~

Wondermeow responds:

Thanks for the review, but this piece was for the pervious sketch collab. It's suppose to have no colours just black and white, cheers.

[[C] Dennis Sprite]

Very nice

So this was pretty cool love the dress design here I think the lower part of the dress could have more shading but that may just be me i do love your detail on the whole charchter and the whole dress design so nice job the black background I'm not too fond of but it is what it is anyways keep up the good designs

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a backdrop scene maybe more shading on lower end of dress

~X~

holikrep responds:

Thanks for the kind comment ;u; )/ I appreciate hearing your feedback~ As for the background part I would love to eventually get more into those ;-; )/ I need all the practice~ This was just a character sprite commission though so the background is transparent so the commissioner can use it for their VN ;u; )b clothing shading has always been a struggle but I will try and pay close attention to how I go about it!