XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Doggo The Destroyer]

Really good stuff

I really like your work you put in a lot of texture alot of energy and with this particular piece you show some nice expression on his face I think that if you had the eyes glow some how it might make this piece a little bit better because this was a very good piece of charchter art anyways nice art here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glowing eyes would be really nice and give off more of that dark and evil look

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DIWAKAR responds:

Thanks Dude

[Shrek - The Brave]

Awesome

Very nice work here the detail is uncanny all the little tidbits that show off very well and that lighting or electrical beam by the gun I think you should make that brighter more glowing would give off a better effect but nice work and I really would love to see you do the other characters but as this review does end it was a nice art piece to review

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow on the electric beam

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DIWAKAR responds:

Thanks For the review :)

[Chroma Black - Promo art preview]

Very nice work here

I really like the art style on this one love the line work and coloring is nice too and that glare and lighting is nice but I think you should have more glare from the fire it would reflect off her side more but overall this was just a beautiful piece of work you have here very nice indeed and I look forward to even more of your work anyways untill next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glare and lighting effects

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ArtistGamerGal responds:

Thanks for the great feedback!

[a galaxy behind her]

Magical

Ohmy what a great piece here, it just draws you in with all those colors and details and effects...the nebula and mist inside the hair is a original and unique touch on filling in color by giving it a background-fill instead. Those purples and blues with the stars and nebulas really pop out and make you feel galatic and at peace. She seems sad or maybe she is thinking. The top part of the hair, the details lines of the hair needs a bit of a polish, just more textures inside to showcase it is hair rather than that solid look. The background with the bright stars and tiny stars is great. I love space and scifi so this one really made me happy. Good job and keep it up. So you have an interesting piece here, there could be some cleaning up and maybe some changes but thats for later, but from what you do have here its a good start of something pretty interesting, so keep up with that. because we the fans love your work. Alright so nice piece here, and its always nice to find things like this in the art portal, you have shown some decent details that jump out at you so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More hair details in the top part of the hair maybe add some textures but really this doesnt need much changing it is great.

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sylvrn responds:

Thank you!! This was a really nice, well-written review; thanks for taking time out of your day to write it :)

[Slice 'em Up]

Mega-Cool

I love the Zero here and the Meta-Knight. An interesting combination of friends here. I love how much detail you put into this, because pieces like this with battles call for lots of details. The shards and pieces from the use of the weapons are a nice touch. I think the only issue here is some of the lines. I think they need to go and blend into colors more and that one brush you used seems to create an uneven choppy detail the rest of the artwork doesn't have so id try to limit different brushes that are too different from the art. The one I am refering to is used for Zero's sword and the edges. It just seems a bit out of place for me. Other than that this is very well done and great work. I love the glowing of their weapons and the body positions are spot on for battle. Now every once in awhile someone comes along with something good here, and I like how you presented it, its not perfect or anything, but it is pretty good and has some nice visual about it, so nice work here on this one, and I look forward to see what you do come up with. Ok so nice work here on this art piece you bring a certain something to the table and it really shows off well, This Radiates an Expression of creativity and unique-ness, so keep doing what you do.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Do not use too many different brushes when drawing the art as it can take away from the piece if it stands out too much.

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NovayaCM responds:

Thank you so much for this in depth review, I really appreciate it!! I'll definitely take those things into account for my next drawings. I actually used the same brush for Zero's sword that I did for the entire line art, its just when I increase the size it looks more jaggy, but I've been experimenting on smoother brushes to use for the future.

[Bubble Wand]

Original

How very wonderful to see an orginal idea here executed in a great way. The bright lights bubble colors are really interesting and give a great star effect in the choice of that yellow and shines/lighting. The character sitting creating these bubbles seems to be having a delightful time and it gives you a sense of calm when looking at the happy expression the character shows in their eyes. The little fish inside this large bubble seem to also be very happy and having a great time. I think they want to join them in making the bubbles. I love the large bubbles effect, it really gives you a sense of dept in the art and the coloring of the blues go well with all the yellows. The nebula type effect in that background is also visually appealing. Maybe make the stars in the background a bit brighter, they seem a bit dim and lost with the rest of the artwork but it is still beautiful non-the-less, So these types are a good style of art, and I like the effort you have put fourth in this and the whole idea and concept is even nice, I Applaud you and give you Kudo's on the progress of this fine piece, really seems like you have done a welldone piece here, and i was impressed. So with all that said its almost time for me to end this review, but I will say that it was a pleasure checking this piece out it brings alot to the table.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More bright stars in the background, the smaller white ones, just a bit more shine to them.

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berserkbrandee responds:

Thank you for the very in-depth review! I really appreciate it and I'll keep in mind making stars in the background brighter in my future pieces! :)

[Inktober day 19 (cloud)]

A brilliant piece

And here you have a beautiful piece the black and white is nice and the design on all the drawings here is nice I wouldn't mind seeing more of this style but throughout the whole canvus giving off a very artistic view of everything but what you do have is really good and some nice work indeed so nice work on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More fill in. On the canvus

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DrSevenSeizeMD responds:

I enjoy filling a canvas. Maybe that will be my inktober challenge this year!

[Inktober day 21(furious)]

Inktober

So I'm not too familiar with the whole inktober but I am assuming just black and white I'm one that loves color and could see you adding much more but I do like the sketch here with the detail and it has this whole artistic style about it off that sketch as for improvement I'm not sure it being for the inktober but was pretty awesome as is

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No improvments on this fine piece

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DrSevenSeizeMD responds:

Lol thanks, and yes, Inktober is supposed to be a daily pen and ink.

Some people do use colored ink, but most of them are black and white.

Maybe I try to add some color this year!

[Inktober day 20 (deep)]

Very intense

Now this one was very intense with very good detail the scratch marks are perfect I wouldn't mind seeing some red in here for blood and wounds just to give off the realisim of this pain on the back and would look really good in that sense but anyways very nice work here it's been a pleasure to review this untill next time keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some blood scratch marks

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DrSevenSeizeMD responds:

In retrospect, I wish I really had made him bleed. He wasn't worth any of my time.
A solid review. More blood! :-)

[Cave Storys group shot]

Love it

So there's so much variations here of all the different characters and such the Sprite work is very good though and I just love how this was all put together and is artistic in it's own way I would put a big beam of light to shine on all the other characters anyways nice job on this piece of art work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A beam of light would be nice

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ScepterDPinoy responds:

That would be a good idea to have a light source.