XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[portrait]

Nice drawing

So this was a nice drawing here I really like the hair as for some advice the shoulders seem like they could be more spread out and the facial features. Need more emotion in it's face like a smile a smirk etc those are just a few ideas to really improve on but nice overall job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More emotion in the face and spread out shoulders more

~X~

Drawwithyuna responds:

Ahh I really don't love this one! ^^ I worked a lot on my portrait since this one, hopefully I improved a little! Thank for the feedback!

[Leopard]

Nice

This was a beautiful I really love how you match up the skin tone or in this case the furr with the lighting I could really see uou make that light shine like a beam his fur is very luminating so works well with a beam anyways really nice work here subtle and just pleasent on the eyes

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more light like a light beam off the animal

~X~

Drawwithyuna responds:

Thank you for your help and advice! ^^ It's very cool you took the time to help me so much with this drawing and with the other drawings!

[Rouquine]

Smooth

So this was a smooth piece it's like a portrait so with that style I really could see you adding a border frame on this one maybe a deep border with some wood like textuture but nice charchter here very smooth colors and lines made it very beautiful

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some wood like border or frames

~X~

Drawwithyuna responds:

You're right, I also think it would have been nice to add border or frames because right now this portrait seems unfinished... Thank you for the feedback (and once again thank you for all the other feedback)
:-)

[Onsen]

Smooth

The art on this is pretty good you really showed off that smooth and Myst feel of things the rocks could have more edges on it though maybe even some shine but I get the Myst is a factor but anyways nice work here and nice scene here I liked it alot hope to see more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more edges and gashes in the rocks maybe some shine

~X~

Drawwithyuna responds:

All your feedback is really very much appreciated!

[The diver and the jellyfish]

Very nice

This was a very nice piece I love the glow maybe more shine shining on the helmet that would be nice maybe even a blue reflection be of some type that's just an idea that could make this look even more realistic but it's just an idea anyways keep up the good art style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Put a reflection on the helmet

~X~

Drawwithyuna responds:

One day maybe I'll redraw this and I will definitively add the reflection!

[Wifi Password]

Amusing

This was amusing I like this one it is so colorful and the detail is just so amazing it's vibrant with color and detail I think I liked that more then how funny it was it's an amusing piece though love the ending just classic right there wonder if you will ever ad another charchter might spice things up a tad but anyways nice work once again

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You really have these down if anything I would make them a tad bit longer

~X~

ChazDude responds:

Can only fit so much on a sheet of A4 paper :/

[Lord D-3]

Notbad

Well this was notbad and I like the skull here and it's in some action scene also love the little details like the crown and gem and as for that gem you need to have it glow and shine so that it sparkles it is a gem after all but that's all that this really needs

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the gem from the crown sparkle and shine

~X~

jax360chill responds:

Thanks. I just started digital art so my work isn't going to be a 4/5 or 3/5 stars just testing the waters to see where my art can go.

[Show Me Your Moves]

Nice view

So this was a nice view I like the color and the heels and her ankles look Abit off but still are ok maybe adding Abit more shine to the legs would be a nice effect addition but really this was pretty good scene of some comic and a nice detailed drawing so nice work all the way around I really like it and hope you keep making more sobuntill the next entry

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on the legs and heels

~X~

BigBoxs responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I could see I could use more shine to help contrast certain parts.
I often feel that my line work is usually better than my coloring. Though recently, I've examined how others done their, so I'll be experimenting.

Thanks for scouting me. Cheers!

[Android 18 naked (DBZ) [Shaded Version]]

Nice

I think you did this one already but anyways nice form on the body nice look on the face and even a nice background that really comes out at you all this needs now is a sun set in the background with a beam of light

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad a sunset in the background with a sun beam

~X~

PurpleTANK responds:

Thank you for all the reviews, i been pretty busy today working on my new God Of War - Flash game so i couldn't reply to all of your comments, this one is different because i added shading to Android 18's body, besides that everything else is the same, I will work on a background for the other ones as well as add some sexy muscle tone to Tornados body and maybe make a nude version too. PT

[Ass Cheeks & Pantsuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu]

Now this was cute

This was really cute the character is really nice great form and love that color tone and you used alot of it Wich made for some nice visuals and some very nice details in the background I honestly don't think you need any changes on this at all I like it very much so no improvement needed on this one but as that's said keep up the fine work that you do

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes this is already a fantastic piece of art

~X~

JaviJavi responds:

DUDE haha thanks for all the love man god damn X^D i just read everyone of you critiques, thanks for even taking the time out to do that. Theres always things that i could improve on thats no doubt, so thanks for pointing those issues out for me ! again thanks so much for doing that, its always good to get an objective view about my art !