XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[What a guy]

Decent

Well this was a decent portrait of someone a good outline of someone it could use some backrounds and possbly more shades and such but the backrounds for sure or some base color of the backround would even sufice on this one but overall this was very cool, so nice job all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backrounds and some shades or as some call it shading on the face and hair.

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fluffkomix responds:

I'll keep that in mind for next time yo~

[Karen Carat v2.0]

Pretty amazing work

Wow this one sparkles with some intense sparkle and shine even the backround work was amazing I dont really have anything to suggest this was an awsome piece of art, and hope you do make more like this, you have some really nice talents and you showcase it well.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I dont really have anything to suggest this was an awsome piece of art

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Pollitq responds:

Thank you very much

[Alraune (Disgaea)]

A really nice piece of art here

This was something special with the creative design and nice elements backround was somewhat bland but maybe thats the way you meant other then that this was pretty nifty work some nice artwork here really like the style of your efforts here a fun art piece.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
no changes it was a fine piece.

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Noscium responds:

thx =p

[Commission - TyrantWolf]

Cute

So the pixel style is awsome and you made it even more entertaiing then it already is In my opinion some added hearts and animation in the backdrop would be a plus here, but overall this was some fantastic art style you have here really nice submission.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
In my opinion some added hearts and animation in the backdrop would be a plus here

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YawningFox responds:

Well, it was a commission and they just wanted 3 hearts. A backdrop would have cost more money for them. Haha, though definitely would have been nice! I just wasn't paid for it.

[The Legend Himself]

Love it

Well I do have to say that you have outdone yourself here with this amazing art piece a fantastic character love the green eyes as a suggestion maybe more glow off the green would make it more impact, but anyways you have amazed this reviewer keep up the amazing work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
love the green eyes as a suggestion maybe more glow off the green would make it more impact

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rio-is-ok responds:

Thank you!!

[Kasa]

Very good work

So this was some really good work you have here, maybe as an idea you could have the sunlight or lighting source beam through more, this art work we have here seems to come from some interesting imagination, thats always a plus on what I like to see so please do make more of this stuff here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
as an idea you could have the sunlight or lighting source beam through more

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JessxJess responds:

I tried to keep the light as muted as possible and have the earring and sparks really pop out and draw attention. I'll keep your comments in mind for my pieces going forward though!

[A meeting]

Amazing

I have to say you do some amazing scenes love the lighting effects most of all, dont feel there is any need for any changes, The skills on these types really come out, and thats why I have come to enjoy these types as they speak volumes of success, so nice effort.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
dont feel there is any need for any changes

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Kamikaye responds:

Thanks a lot :)

[FIERCE DEITY]

Nice work

So the character here was nice the blue orms at top seem to distort the wording you have at the top, maybe no blue orb balls would sufice, this was a nice creation here, I would ad more to the backround too, other then that this was really nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
remove the blue orbed balls and maybe ad more detail in the backrounds.

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DARKRYAN responds:

Sorry for the late reply. I haven't been on here in a while, due to life getting in the way. Arigatou for the feedback. This is a very old image, so I definitely see the issues this artwork had. (Not to mention that I see that this design made him look like a younger Sesshomaru instead. XD.) To clarify what I was thinking of with this image back then, I added those blue orbs as a reference to the magic particles that appear from his sword when Z-targeting. But I do agree that they definitely interfere with the name. And yeah, I was horribly lazy with backgrounds back then. XD.


To clarify, in case you or anyone is wondering, I have since made many revisions to this series. The original concept for this series has been completely thrown out as it would've been one of the worst series ever, since it actually didn't have a storyline to begin with. It was originally going to be just a mishmosh of ideas from different games horribly thrown together. (I'm actually glad I never released the animations I had made back then. That would've been painful. XD.)


One thing to note is that the Fierce Deity and anything "Majora's Mask"-related, as well as anything containing material from timelines outside of "The Hero Is Defeated" timeline are no longer relevant to this series. I am still working on developing the events of the storyline further, but have a nice concept for the core of the series so far. It's actually one of the main reasons why I've had to put animating "The Legend Of Zelda: Oracle Of Secrets" on hiatus for a bit. (The main reason being just issues with life getting in the way. But that's about to be taken care of, fortunately.) I refined the story to stick with the original material from both the games/manga much better so the events will make much more sense now, and am continuing to make better material for this series. To clarify, everything that I have animated from episodes 1 - 4 part 1 of 2 is still relevant, and will continue from where I left off. Just that the core of the story and the future events in the series have been refined more, and are still being worked on. So if you happen to see it in the future, I hope you enjoy what I have in store. And again, arigatou for your feedback. :3.

[Vivi]

Awesome

Wow this was a welldone piece of art first off all the black and white was nice and intense the linework is amazing i do think that adding some glowing eyes would have been a nice idea but anyways keep up the brilliant work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some glowing eyes would be good

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ChadReaser responds:

Thanks for checking it out and for the suggestion! I appreciate it.

[Faffing with cover ideas]

Very nice work

So this was some nice work its an amazing art piece here has a very dark element about it you really bring it alive so nice job indeed, I feel like some added sparkles and shines in the backround, but honestly this was some amazing work indeed, I really enjoyed this fine piece of art.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I feel like some added sparkles and shines in the backround

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Ploobul responds:

While your "suggested" ideas have been noted, they have been decreed aesthetically naff and discarded.