XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pokemonthly: Jigglypuff]

Cute

I think JigglyPuff is one of the cuter Pokemons so this was a great way to capture the jiggly. His happy face and dancing pose are drawn out well. You have your standard pinks and shades. I wish you used some textures inside the pinks to change it up a bit from the normal colorings. Maybe a few brush strokes for shading instead of full solid shadows? I love the music lettering background, the warping of the lines of sheet music just works well for this character. The microphone is cool too, just so you know jiggly is singing a tune and gives out good context. I really had fun reviewing your work here today its pretty unique and different in its own way, So my Extended review of this review is This was some good progress and I Applaud you on some nice visuals here. Very nice stuff indeed, its pieces of art like this that really draw me to it, and thease show off some good talent you have shown off some nice work here. you have manythings the Desire the Polish and the effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just more textures in your solid colors

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SeeStaar responds:

Thank you! I've never had my art reviewed like this, so this was great to read. I'll keep the textures in mind for the next piece; i tend to color these pretty quickly, so I don't think about things like textures on the main figures. Thank you again for the critique :)

[909090909909090]

Dark

Another dark and wondereful piece of art from you. This is similar to your last with the mouth nd blood red eyes. I think this one seems a bit dark as the hand reaches out and seems wounded and helpless. Instead of just an open mouth and pain, you see suffering as the red and black never end exiting this mouth. You see true horror in their eyes and hope to be set free. I love the black and red, the effects you give the strokes still looks 3D like. The only thing I continue to say is try giving these some kind of background, but the white does work so the blacks and reds pop out. And here we are with some artwork may it be old or new you can never go wrong with imagination and thats what we have off here with. And Finally we come to the end, You have something differant and neat here, it has an interesting look and there was some decent detail to it, there are things that could make it even better but thats for later. So my Overview of this piece is that its a dang good piece of art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just adding that background, nothing crazy.

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shittingpie responds:

Thank you so much ! your feedback is much appreciated. I am working on backgrounds i'm definitely going to take on board what you've said, but these pieces are old I'm just uploading what I haven't uploaded already. I still have heaps to upload that I've done this year. If you would like to stay up to date and see all of my most recent pieces, you can search for me on Instagram as I'm much more active there. @lerson_murman. Thanks again.

[Knife Etiquette]

Cute

This was kind of nifty the characters are cute the comic is nice but wish you had it run longer seems like you could have extended it Abit but the characters were well structured I didn't understand the comic as it was confusing but still nice to see

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the comic longer

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Triple-Stabber responds:

Wowie, a comment on an oldie, you pleasantly surprised me there. Not to make your criticism invalid, but in this short comic, it's more of a funny one-off comic Theodd1sout esque where it's to entertain but with no story.
But if you do want a longer comic, see me recent comic "Girlfriends", definitely longer

[The New Americanna]

Very artistic

And here was a nice and artistic style. I really like the idea you have pushed here it really makes for a good element and thats what you did here. You added meaning with this one, the whole idea with head hunter is crazy but seems to work well, And so thats that you have made something special here with a unique style and the energy comes thru pretty hard, So I really enjoyed this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would love much more color into this but I understand you have a inspiration for this one.

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AdventVoice responds:

You are right about the color. I just improved on this one https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/adventvoice/mary-magdalene cause of the color issue.. Now I am satisfied and feel I can sleep, having done a job well done. LOL. Thank you for your insight and please feel free to look around. My gallery is always open.

[Decayed Guardian]

Beautiful

So this piece right here was pretty awsome live the stand still form and really seems to come alive even though it's stand still the blade he carries could have a shine to it and I think by adding more shadow under him it would look even more better and last but not least maybe some color background or a scenery of some sort it was a pleasure to review your work here today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and shadow additions would be nice

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Borington responds:

Thank yo so much for the reviews!

[Pete]

Cute

And another cute piece this was simplistic but that's what I like about it and I think the only thing it really needs is some background maybe a pattern or design if you wanna keep it simple but does need something back there anyways keep making great stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just a background or design

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Bertn1991 responds:

Wow, so many notifications. Thank you so much for all these reviews. You are the best <3

Yes, Pete's design is very simplistic since he's the main character of my cartoon show, Yonder Ho. He's super simple to draw. Yeah, a background would have looked nice, though :)

Thanks again.

[Marleen-San]

Nice

This was a nice piece like the red flowers and the background was nice just nice and simple and a nice looking charchter and with this one you don't need any suggestions for improvement so keep up the nice work and keep up the energy and style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Pleasure to review this no need for changes

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Bertn1991 responds:

Ooh, no need for changes. Such an honor. I'm happy you like it ^_^

Thanks for reviewing <3

[Moon goddess]

Love the look

You really captured the look as she stares into ones eyes she has that starting motion really deep expression and you captured it all the extras around her really make this as a whole piece this was a very nice work of art love your detail and line work was spectacular so very well done I could see you adding a framed border

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A framed border would be nice

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amandadarko responds:

Thank you so much!!

[Warbled Bubberwing & Sour Jay]

Cute little guys

And here was some cute little charchter work they put a smile on my face lol but anyways adding more shine on there beaks wouldn't hurt and some type of background or back scenery wouldn't hurt either besides that this was a plus anyways nice charchter work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on there beaks and some background detail

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Bertn1991 responds:

I'm happy to hear that this was smile-inducing. Thanks for such a nice review. Some more shiniest would've been a nice touch. Thanks again :-)

[Calm Before the Storm]

Awsome perspective

I love these kinds of perspective views and you did well with this one love the shades and everything fits just right. My only issue here was that for a sidewalk or walk way it should have more cracks more gashes to show time has not been good to it but very nice perspective

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some cracks and gashes in walkway

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Bertn1991 responds:

Thank you much. I rarely ever draw traditional artwork, so this was nice to read. I'm glad you enjoyed my pencil work here. I think you're right, though. Some more cracks and scratches would've been a wonderful touch.

Thank you for the feedback <3