XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Self-Driving Cars]

Funny

So this was pretty funny I like the joke and the joke is executed very well too bad this was a short comic these web comics are pretty cool I could see you adding more color into these they are entertaining enough to have a series about them even just a suggestion though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color on the frames and such

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BigBoxs responds:

Thanks for the reviews, I mostly rush on this comic due to my situation at the time. Hopefully I can find a way to make comics flow more fluidly, and add colours in certain parts to get more of an impact.

[Hashiru Miko in progress]

Nice

This was cool I like the progress work here these are really nice the start to ending is very nice your energy is really good I like the style here only thing I would change would be some fancy or artistic borders but anyways nice work on the progress style here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some fancy borders and or frames

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CarolinaRei7 responds:

Thank you so much for your comments they are really helpful !! :D :D

[Work in progress]

I like it

I like the work in progress each frame shows good progress these types are really nice as they do show the progress but anyways nice work here nice coloring and good shading very well done and tons of energy you really did push some nice ideas here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing because it's a work in progress

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CarolinaRei7 responds:

:D :D hahahahaaah you're funny !! :P thank you for taking the time to comment!

[Earthquake]

Episode 761

Wow I have to say that is very impressive and you just dont see that anymore, I love that the borders are black on this and matches up with newgrounds theme here, but anyways funny comic as always nice story here too pretty funny if you ask me. anyways keep making a great comic series as you do here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really dont think you need improvements not in this one anyways as it runs on its own style and such.

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ChazDude responds:

'Episode'

Interesting terminology there, I see.

[Figure Drawing Practice 1]

Haha cute

Well I have to say is that is pretty cute love that you put the animal in front that was a good idea, and really love your character form here love the smooth linework and old style art style even, that was all a good thing, again I wouldnt mind some backround depth to this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround depth, like a scene or colored design.

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WooleyWorld responds:

bruh. go away.

[A choice...]

Nice

I love seeing the two sides of art pieces like this and this was pretty cool I like the style dark vs light I think as a form of improvment you could ad some cracks in the brick but that's just an idea and an opinion of course anyways nice work here nice ideas here make more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some cracks as a detail on the bricks

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amsyar555 responds:

Thanks! You're right, I should add more cracks to the bricks.

[Tracer Tease (GIF)]

Notbad

So the animation was notbad but seemed Abit choppy I think you could have had more flow and bounce to the animation it was not fluid enough but I did like the drawing here and was really well done and well drawn so nice work on this piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more fluid animation

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PaddleTone responds:

Yep, this was an early animation that I did and it shows. Thanks so much for the critique!

[Gravity Falls Fanwork]

Notbad

I think this one isnt' too bad, I am just not that familiar with this series or cartoon. I do like the vector like background at the top, but I don't understand the background they are standing on, what is going on here? I am not too sure, the lighting here is almost a bit too bright, you lost some colors and lines over brighting them and washing them out in light. I would tone that down next time and try to use more sunburst and less bright beams that ends up washing the characters out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add less brightness to the characters, try different lighting effects as they seem washed out

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JessxJess responds:

That's fair, I appreciate the honesty! There's defiantly things to work on xD The feet always bothered me, but I try not to go back to old works and change them, I just try similar things in new works! I appreciate the feedback! I would recommend watching Gravity Falls, its a great show.

[Cat Rat]

This was interesting

Well I have to say that this was interesting the rat was good and the large cat head was pretty good and well drawn now it's the background that needs some detail maybe some pattern or color theme even but needs something there in the background

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background design or pattern

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WillsRandomArtwork responds:

Yeah, Background are my weakness, Trying to do more so that I feel more comfortable with them.