XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Idol Hanako]

A beautiful character

Cute and sexy character the pinks in this really jump out maybe have a colored base backround or some sort of meshed backround so the colors jump out even more, So here was a beautiful character very sexy ofcourse and such an aluring look so you really push the nice smooth linework here very smooth and detailed look here a very aluring element and I love how you showcase this, so really nice character design here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the pinks in this really jump out maybe have a colored base backround or some sort of meshed backround so the colors jump out even more

~X~

rtil responds:

thanks for all your comments and reviews, appreciated as always X. i don't always do backgrounds on sketches like this but hope you'll like the bg's in some of my more detailed pieces.

[Inktober #21 Monster City]

Nice

So this one here was really interesting I like the whole inktober I will contribute the next one but you have agood quality design here with the buildings and you even wrote a little story / poem on this one that was a nice touch, it was simple yet unique with again a style of its own and I was glad to review this work and your work once again you have some nice ideas that transcend into something unique.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Really wouldnt know where to change anything as I really like this piece as it is so for me I wouldnt change a thing.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Personally I feel like this one turned out way too simple. XD But it's cool you're embracing these as they are... in a way all artwork is really tied to the context it was created in, if everything's drawn with certain intent maybe there are no flaws, just artistic choices... or something like that.

Thanks for the review!

[Inktober #25 Friesd]

Fries

Well Fries are a killer deep fried anything is probably a killer, you have a nice texture and shading idea on this piece, I also like the small lighting shine on the front of the fries, so as for any improments I dont really think you need any on this as this was a solid piece of art and a good meaning in the way of fries are probably bad for ones health if consumed a lot, anyways nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I dont really think you need any on this as this was a solid piece of art

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hell yeah. :) Thanks

[Inktober #6 P Layers]

Interesting

Well this was an interesting piece you could possbly call this an abstract piece I suppose but I have to say I do love all the diffiernt colors on this and was a nice view here seems like you could have gone deeper with some shades but I gues time was not on your side with the inktober element but overall I did find this to be a delightful piece of art here so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe some added depth but then again it is inktober so the intense is meant to be simple.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks. :) Definitely could've worked a bit more on this, but it is what it is...

[Inktober #17 Still]

Cool

So this one was cool, it was notbad this one looks simular to your other one maybe you had ran out of ideas But I do have to say that this was pretty amazing work, I love the yellow shine over the black, the specs in the backround seemed to hard to see since it was a white backround but the main focus piece here was still pretty nice, I like it though and not sure what I would change here it was fun to review though hope to see more inktober from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
not sure what I would change here it was fun to review though

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Still running out of ideas occasionally yupp. XD Don't recall what I was thinking at the time but it's possible... thanks again man.

[Inktober #18 ANYTHING]

Could be

I guess this could be anything it reminds me of space the backround reminds me of space with stars and such, you have some nice specs out there I do think you should make a nice sparkle effect for some of those specs, but besides all that this was some nice work here really artistic in its own way and in this case kind of a mystery with the idea, but overall this was a fun piece to review.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkly specs in the backround to make them shine more or some of them or none of them as its fine as is too.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

A bit more glistening starshine would've been cool, agree! Thanks

[Inktober #20 Apocalypse Eye]

Nice design and eye

A nice black and whitw theme here there was an eye in there and you look deep enough you can see the fine detail of it, I do enjoy these black and white pieces and this was one of your better detailed ones, so props to you for that this was some really nice work, its a piece I personally woundt suggest anything to change it, because it is a unique piece as you have created it so nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes on this because it has its own unique style about it and I wouldnt want to change it.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Appreciate it :)

[Trevors NG icons]

Cool

So this was pretty cool, I like the different frame boxes to represent each section these are some nice pieces and good icons even as old as this is the art is pretty good, No need for any changes as I dont think you work on this anymore, it was pretty good regardless.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No need for any changes as I dont think you work on this anymore

~X~

Rovertarthead responds:

Oh thank you I appreciate that, But maybe I'll make a newer one soon, Waddya guys think?

[Executive Miss Black General]

Nice

So this was great that fire and flames was nice would have been nice if the flames themself had more of a reflective visual or more brighter even just an idea, doesnt take much to make something decent just some time and patience is all it takes, and thats what you have shown here today so keep up the amazing work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
that fire and flames was nice would have been nice if the flames themself had more of a reflective visual or more brighter even just an idea

~X~

SpruceBeer responds:

Thanks, I'll keep an eye on contrast in the future!

[Pico Day 2020]

Beautiful

Such a beatiful piece of some great ng characters some bland points could be filled in with some added detail maybe a backdrop maybe some added distance points but regardless this was pretty amazing a really nice visual of characters here make more soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
a few backround details

~X~

Kengabr responds:

wahh thankyou for the input ! definitely gonna take notes !