XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Show Me Your Moves]

Nice view

So this was a nice view I like the color and the heels and her ankles look Abit off but still are ok maybe adding Abit more shine to the legs would be a nice effect addition but really this was pretty good scene of some comic and a nice detailed drawing so nice work all the way around I really like it and hope you keep making more sobuntill the next entry

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on the legs and heels

~X~

BigBoxs responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I could see I could use more shine to help contrast certain parts.
I often feel that my line work is usually better than my coloring. Though recently, I've examined how others done their, so I'll be experimenting.

Thanks for scouting me. Cheers!

[Android 18 naked (DBZ) [Shaded Version]]

Nice

I think you did this one already but anyways nice form on the body nice look on the face and even a nice background that really comes out at you all this needs now is a sun set in the background with a beam of light

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad a sunset in the background with a sun beam

~X~

PurpleTANK responds:

Thank you for all the reviews, i been pretty busy today working on my new God Of War - Flash game so i couldn't reply to all of your comments, this one is different because i added shading to Android 18's body, besides that everything else is the same, I will work on a background for the other ones as well as add some sexy muscle tone to Tornados body and maybe make a nude version too. PT

[Ass Cheeks & Pantsuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu]

Now this was cute

This was really cute the character is really nice great form and love that color tone and you used alot of it Wich made for some nice visuals and some very nice details in the background I honestly don't think you need any changes on this at all I like it very much so no improvement needed on this one but as that's said keep up the fine work that you do

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes this is already a fantastic piece of art

~X~

JaviJavi responds:

DUDE haha thanks for all the love man god damn X^D i just read everyone of you critiques, thanks for even taking the time out to do that. Theres always things that i could improve on thats no doubt, so thanks for pointing those issues out for me ! again thanks so much for doing that, its always good to get an objective view about my art !

[idontknow2]

This was cute

So it's nice to see you draw about your boyfriend I like the two versions here and I would love to see you do more your line work could be polished and some added color would be a plus but I like it very much just needs some polish

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More polish needed more smoother line work and some color would be nice

~X~

Rgessimai responds:

Thanks for ur comments

[2-D]

Nice

Well this was nice I like the 2-d effect wish there was more shine on his hair and maybe some smoke from the cig but other then that you did a fantastic job here and made it look magnificent so props to you on a beautiful piece you have here it's just great to see the detail put into artwork like this so untill next time keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine in the hair and smoke from the cig

~X~

antichlorine responds:

thank you for the feedback!

[Office Party!]

Probably uour best work

So this here is probably your best work to date because you put alot of energy into this and it comes out with a vibrant touch as well as all the colors and charchters the amount of detail is magnificent and the deep color is even better then that so very nice work I love it so keep doing what you do as you have done here hope to see more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes needed it's a beautiful piece

~X~

ChazDude responds:

Saying nothing in 'THINGS TO IMPROVE ON' while giving four stars out of five reduces the integrity of this review somewhat.

[technoliberation]

Artistic

Well this was pretty artistic I like this and was pretty artistic if you ask me I think there was a lot of stuff here and no real focus point so my suggestion to you is put on some focus points or some lighting effects on a focus point

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some focus point needed

~X~

vinara128 responds:

Hey thank you for the constructive review,will do better next time. :D

[Art Trade with Foxluu]

Very nice structure

Now here you have a very good charchter and show them in good expression love the clothing detail and the use of color also having the detail on her clothing is always great to see only thing here I would love to see improved would be that background it's lacking but overall you have a beautiful piece of artwork here and I'm very pleased with the outcome so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The background is lacking so add something back there even a pattern of some sort could work

~X~

KanesakiHyudou responds:

thank you for the feed back...my recent art works have a lot of background art in them but it takes so long to make them! XD!

[Quote (Cave Story)]

DECENT

I like this overall, just feels it needs a bit more in terms of polishing. I love the “RED” balloon and the addition of the animals. The boy looks confused so if that was the expression you were aiming for, you got it. I love the blending of color to color in your overall digital coloring. I am not too familiar with cavestory, but in my old age maybe I am, but this does look similar. I think you did some decent fan art here. And so we have another art piece here filled with some entertaining value aswell as some interesting art creativity and thats what I really look for so nice effort on bringing the differant elements together with this one. So I Applaud you on a good days efforts and work with this one allthough it probably took longer. You have shown the Desire in this piece, And now as I end this review on this awsome piece of work, great efforts here today, its always nice to see stuff like this come around the portal now and then.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just polish up the main boy with more details in the body, seems a bit too loose in some parts but decent overall.

~X~

ErnieTheMighty responds:

Awwww! Bless you! Thank you so much!

[22 Gashi Gashi]

Love it

I really love this the colors really just jump out on this one I love the Nintendo controller I do think you can ad something to that controller like adding a beam of light raising upwards that would be something really cool so that's an idea just to think about but overall you have a magnificent piece of artwork here and hope you keep making beautiful stuff like this one here today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A beam of light as suggested

~X~

ScepterDPinoy responds:

I forgot about that one too (beams of light). Thank's for your suggestion.