XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dikachu]

Lol

Now how does one catch that? hhahahahaha I think this is great, it gave me a chuckle and smile. I love your use of "BALLS" and the coloring of the balls with the yellow dick shafts lol. I think you are skilled at design by turning something cute into a dick, literally. I love the coloring and all, but you do need a background, maybe a giant vagina or another pokemon that is a body part? Just an idea here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just more stuff in your background, you need a giant vagina

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amandadarko responds:

Thank you so much lmao. Well they are just doodles. Whenever someone commissions something they can choose to have a background. This is an example to get people interested.

[Click Me]

Surreal

Ok this is a bit surreal, but in a way you are making people want more. You used a drawing and art with sexual themes, but hid the goods unless you "CLICK ME" which isn't possible for the art portal, but maybe this is your intention at a later time or for your website? I think omitting things makes for an interesting concept but gives off a surreal image that I am liking very much. Yes you have some good details and use of color here with great body drawing and a good anime style. I would click...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think it is great work, but the shoulders and arms seem a bit off from the head, so maybe try to work on that.

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Jradgex responds:

I plan on making a revamp of this piece and selling it as a poster (or shirt, not sure yet...), so I'll keep this all in mind. THANKS SO MUCH!!

[Sleepy]

Cute

awww what adorable little creatures of bunny and cats you have here. I love the use of pink pixels for their bodies and the squinty eye looks they have on their faces. The overall look is good for pixels and I can see why you are showing all three in one image with a white background, but maybe next time move them around and make a full setting with a background and some interaction between creatures. I love it for the design, but wish it had more going on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above, mainly a background

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clarigaricus responds:

Thanks for all your feedback. I made this very quickly and focusing solely on AA, that's why the final result is so empty.

[Have a drink for charity! The Mustache Glass]

Cool

I found this to be very cool and for a great cause. I love your use of brush strokes with the paint and the painting overall is great. You have covered the entire piece from start to finish and I very much enjoy that work. I think that your colors used are good warm tones and the glass in the middle is still the star of the piece the way you have drawn things around it to make it a focal point. I think going forward, if showing a true painting in a digital forum, perhaps crop and straighten the art to not include the real life background setting, but some people do art this way on purpose to give a unique look and that may be the case here. Now ofecourse there are some things that could be worked on as explained, but anyways i was very pleased with your idea here and it was kinda nifty, pretty awsome infact, anyways untill next time keep up the good work. I will keep an eye out for more of your work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just crop the image to focus on just the image and no background.

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griguette responds:

Hi!
Thanks for helping me again! I took the time to really take good images of most of the paintings and to crop them. i had never really thought of putting the time into doing a proper presentation before so thanks a lot!
Regards,
Grigory

[Successor of the Darkhorn]

SWEET

This is a great detailed piece of art here. I mean, the effort you put into this is amazing. I can see why you'd be comissoned for work. I love the purple effects for the hand, like a magic spell to be cast. The deep purple with the bright lights is just amazing to look at and draws you in first thing when you look at this art. The background has great use of layers and coloring, the blending, the textures, my lord they are all really well done. I love the wind lik effect of the purple mist and magic swirling around the character. I love love the background having something in the distance and corner and not just some straight forward. This is a great piece of art and I hope to see more from you soon. And here was another great find from the art portal, These art pieces keep me enjoying and wanting more especially to review them. So alot of things get me interested but most of all its these detailed and effort pushed forward such as this one you have here. But anyways I wont really drag this one on any further, I Will just say its been a pleasure to review your work, And I look forward to checking out more of your work here soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing, this is perfect as it is.

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themefinland responds:

Wowza! Thanks a dozen for taking the time to write up a comment this big, I appreciate it a lot and hope you will enjoy seeing my future projects :)

[She-Ra - Cartoon PinUp]

Very nice work

So this was very nice work I love the old style look and visual here her attitude is amazing I do think you could ad some shine or sparkle on her crown that would be a nice touch just an idea or suggestion here so go with it and see where it takes off and such it's a nice piece though and hope to see more from you real soon anyways untill next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle on the crown

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HugoTendaz responds:

Thank you. I agree on the shine, it's a good suggestion.

[Thief of Void & The Dream Weaver (page 2)]

Beautiful piece

Wow this was really amazing I really love this and I really love the deep art the deep charchter work and those borders that's what I tell alot of comic people to do and you have the right idea so nice work there the story itself is a beautiful piece of artwork so very good charchter work and it really does bring all the story together I really like this and hope you make more sometime soon cause I can't wait for the next one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Those borders are already great maybe a glow around them

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AdventVoice responds:

Hmm a glow would be nice...Borders are very important and sometimes I think I have this OCD about lines, I get mad about my lines sometimes cause I want them to be oh so perfect. Again I blame my software for the digital lining issues...but there are awesome ways to compensate for poor programming.
I am glad you love this one. This story is very important to me and I hope I can live up to Thief Of Voids review of my works and continue to create pieces that bring Icarus to mind.
Your Head-Hunter is bad-asshat, though. She was so ready to do me in because she felt I did not capture her best side. I told her she will be seen again, but she is not going to be in every panel. She would like to be though.
As the story continues, you will see more of Thief of Void and the Dream Weaver as they discuss further what it feels like to be able to say, "I survived!"

[Pokemonthly: Jigglypuff]

Cute

I think JigglyPuff is one of the cuter Pokemons so this was a great way to capture the jiggly. His happy face and dancing pose are drawn out well. You have your standard pinks and shades. I wish you used some textures inside the pinks to change it up a bit from the normal colorings. Maybe a few brush strokes for shading instead of full solid shadows? I love the music lettering background, the warping of the lines of sheet music just works well for this character. The microphone is cool too, just so you know jiggly is singing a tune and gives out good context. I really had fun reviewing your work here today its pretty unique and different in its own way, So my Extended review of this review is This was some good progress and I Applaud you on some nice visuals here. Very nice stuff indeed, its pieces of art like this that really draw me to it, and thease show off some good talent you have shown off some nice work here. you have manythings the Desire the Polish and the effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just more textures in your solid colors

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SeeStaar responds:

Thank you! I've never had my art reviewed like this, so this was great to read. I'll keep the textures in mind for the next piece; i tend to color these pretty quickly, so I don't think about things like textures on the main figures. Thank you again for the critique :)

[909090909909090]

Dark

Another dark and wondereful piece of art from you. This is similar to your last with the mouth nd blood red eyes. I think this one seems a bit dark as the hand reaches out and seems wounded and helpless. Instead of just an open mouth and pain, you see suffering as the red and black never end exiting this mouth. You see true horror in their eyes and hope to be set free. I love the black and red, the effects you give the strokes still looks 3D like. The only thing I continue to say is try giving these some kind of background, but the white does work so the blacks and reds pop out. And here we are with some artwork may it be old or new you can never go wrong with imagination and thats what we have off here with. And Finally we come to the end, You have something differant and neat here, it has an interesting look and there was some decent detail to it, there are things that could make it even better but thats for later. So my Overview of this piece is that its a dang good piece of art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just adding that background, nothing crazy.

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shittingpie responds:

Thank you so much ! your feedback is much appreciated. I am working on backgrounds i'm definitely going to take on board what you've said, but these pieces are old I'm just uploading what I haven't uploaded already. I still have heaps to upload that I've done this year. If you would like to stay up to date and see all of my most recent pieces, you can search for me on Instagram as I'm much more active there. @lerson_murman. Thanks again.

[Knife Etiquette]

Cute

This was kind of nifty the characters are cute the comic is nice but wish you had it run longer seems like you could have extended it Abit but the characters were well structured I didn't understand the comic as it was confusing but still nice to see

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the comic longer

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Triple-Stabber responds:

Wowie, a comment on an oldie, you pleasantly surprised me there. Not to make your criticism invalid, but in this short comic, it's more of a funny one-off comic Theodd1sout esque where it's to entertain but with no story.
But if you do want a longer comic, see me recent comic "Girlfriends", definitely longer