XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Liberty]

Beautiful

Now this is beautiful wow I absolutely love this and love the view shot you did this you are a talented painter and it shows deeply I would like to see that flame on the torch be more flame like and really light up with a sort of glow to it just an idea to improve though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Let the flame have a more flame and glow

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Bertn1991 responds:

Wow, thank you so much for the kind review and for favoriting. A glowing torch would've been nice, but I'm happy you like it overall.

Respect <3

[Sleepycat Dreams of Mars]

Meow

A nice art piece the texture is very rich and we'll detailed so you did hood with this one I like this because it reminds me of my friends cat and she lost it one day but anyways very nice work here I would suggest something but I find this to be just right

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes needed on this beautiful painting

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Bertn1991 responds:

Meow indeed.

Beautiful painting is quite a compliment. Thank you so much as always. I'm happy this one needs no changes :)

[Pringles the Musical]

Nice painting

So here was a nice painting you have here very simplistic style but works well I think you should have some lighted up windows or at least be one or two lighted up windows I would even ho with a sun set in background too just as an extra little detail anyways nice painting

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some little things that spice it up like a lighted window

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Bertn1991 responds:

I suppose the church looks a bit dead since there are no lights in the windows. You're right. Thank you for the feedback as always. I'm surprised no one ever mentioned the title of this one. It has nothing to do with anything lol

[Maudeville - The Last Day]

Nice work for the band

So this was a nice cover photo for the band I like the soft color theme you have on this it really comes out well and looks good I wouldn't mind putting some crazy border or Slash's along the edges just for something to jump out more but anyways nice submission here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs some element along the edges something similar to a frame or border but more like slashes or jagged frame

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Bertn1991 responds:

I very much appreciate that. I like the constructive criticism you give. Very kind and helpful. Thank you.

Also, the link in the description is to the actual album I recorded for them :)

[Anatomy study]

Very nice

This is stuff they teach us in art class and yours is very good shows the muscle tone very well and really shows the detail now as a form of improvement and suggested ideas I could see you framing this in a border or frame on edges just a suggestion though but besides that this was absolutely good detail love the line work just awsome stuff here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frame or border along the edges

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yodaddyo responds:

Thank you for the review my dude

[Poor Frieza]

Very nice

So this was very cool it's always nice to see all style sprites and you seem to bring it out just right love the visual here it's kind of like old memories of old Sprite games so nice job here all I would say would be would be some more sparkle here and there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sparkle

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ScepterDPinoy responds:

Thanks. Dunno if I will add sparkles everything is chaos here.

[Ra from smite with boobers]

Very nice

Wow this was cool I love the Egyptian look here you really did well with the color matching and the character design itself so it was pretty good I think the background could have a more of an Egyptian theme or scene maybe even a design in the same theme and colors

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Background could use an Egyptian theme or design

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Joypad-tea responds:

I appropriate your criticism's but you don't need to do so on every drawing its a little over the top xD

[I Thought I Told You Not To Play Around In Here]

Very nice

I like this I would love to see you put some glow on the eyes just a tad bit of color would be really nice too or even just some glow around the drawing itself would be nice I like the drawing though and if no changes were made it's still one of the best very nice shades too

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow effects and maybe some color added

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ColeBasaraba responds:

This one has a happy home in a different country now.

I used a different medium for each tier of contest prize, This one was strictly pencil.

I may try to use some watercolor for the next Halloween season!

[The Quiet One]

Very cool

As always I always enjoy your work love the skull and horns your shading is very well done and the linework is even better I kind of wish there was some shine on the horns maybe the ends and even adding some sparkle would be nice too but regardless some nice work you have done here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine maybe some color

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ColeBasaraba responds:

More color you say?

As a matter of fact, I'll be doing a new series of DOOM inspired images next year. And I can guarantee, color will be the focus. I am actually hoping to make them all glow under a black light, hopefully it looks as cool as I think it will.

Thanks for the feedback!

[Notebook page front - betrayal 1]

Nice work

I really like these types the black and white is very nice some good detail would love to see the full page filled maybe even some borders and frames to accent it better but it's good stuff and I enjoyed it very much so keep up the good effort very nice drawing here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some black and white borders and or frames even some color ones would suffice

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Doomroar responds:

Thanks man, yeah i have been considering drawing on the frames too, but always get worried of smearing the ink and making a mess out of the page, so i never know if i should do the borders first or last, and i end just avoiding them.