XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Notebook page front - betrayal 1]

Nice work

I really like these types the black and white is very nice some good detail would love to see the full page filled maybe even some borders and frames to accent it better but it's good stuff and I enjoyed it very much so keep up the good effort very nice drawing here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some black and white borders and or frames even some color ones would suffice

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Doomroar responds:

Thanks man, yeah i have been considering drawing on the frames too, but always get worried of smearing the ink and making a mess out of the page, so i never know if i should do the borders first or last, and i end just avoiding them.

[BBQ LEONA]

This was nifty

Not sure what the meaning here is but I found this one to be nice work the old style here really looks good and that smile always refreshing not sure I would change anything about this it's pretty solid work and does not need any changes anyways keep up the quality

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this one

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WooleyWorld responds:

Your reviews are terribly subjective.

[... "Art Nouveau"]

Awsome

This was very nice seems like it has that old style I think the circle around her could be more of a glowing effect and such but not too much just a little glow the character is really well done very good detail love the art style here you have some really good talent and such

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some hlow on some parts of this

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WooleyWorld responds:

A glow effect would have no place in this art nouveau piece.

[Some practice]

Good practice

So your practice is really good it's very cartoon like and love those background elements of shapes and colors are nice I would say ad more design like that it really gives it an art style and very artistic so nice work here nice job and good effort on this classy piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more design on the background

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WooleyWorld responds:

No I want a simple background.

[A Frosty Boi]

Very cute

This one was really cute I like this one it was really cute love the extra big head and the crooked carrot I honestly can't think of anything to change about this if anything it would be to have a sunset or sunlight comming down but nice work here and good snowman

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sun beam or sunlight

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WooleyWorld responds:

No this is past the point of sunset so there would be no beams.

[Bruh.]

Nice

This was nice I like this a really good structure of charchter and it's like a nice card almost the background was not bad I like the squares in the background I think you should have another layer of squares but anyways really good work here I like your art style and look forward to more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra layered square in background

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WooleyWorld responds:

Nah. I want a very simple background. These drawings do not warrant detailed backgrounds.

[Twerk Team Abbi]

This was cute

Well this was cute I like the little animation too it was cute and the fresh colors were pretty good too I think you could ad a window like if it was a bedroom and there could be some on Lookers would be a nice little prop and extra effect anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A small window

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WooleyWorld responds:

That's incredibly subjective.

[Mutt and Chopps]

Awesome

This is awesome I love the background too but seems like the background could have had a sunset with a beam of light hitting there backs but the characters are really nice and we'll structure on them but anyways nice job here I like your work keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A sunlight would be nice

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WooleyWorld responds:

I prefer midday, and there are no sunbeams in this scenario.

[Mario Sunshine AGDQ 2017]

Wow amazing

I have to say this was pretty amazing the splash was awasome the color on that splash you should ad more of a sparkle on that splash kind of like a glistering shine but the characters work is amazing the background is even decent love the texture in this one I love this piece it is a vibrant piece of artistic style anyways keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine or sparkle on the splash

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SandraDRivas responds:

YO, sorry I got this late. But yes I agree! I was so focused on the color values that I ended up restricting myself. It would've been a nice touch for sure

[Sexy Pkachu]

Very nice

I have to say this one was pretty good I have to say you have really gave her an alurring look and that's the best part of it some more shine on her bottom side would be a plus more streaks of shine but other then that this was pretty good form of pika choo

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra shine on her backside

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bxBLAZExd responds:

Thank you for your input, although this is an older piece(I would like to i have improved since this 1 lol well I'd like too) i still take any critique with open ears Thanks.