XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hashiru Miko]

Finished product

Cool this was the finished product and looks good even like the light coloring on it I still think adding some background to this would be pretty cool and make it a better overall piece the character is really good though and look forward to much more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background detail

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CarolinaRei7 responds:

I made this for the character design challenge on facebook :P but you are right i have to add some background thank you so much for your comments!! :D

[Magical Girl Trap]

Haha nice trick

Wow I have to say that this was a nice trick you have here but as for the art work the character was well made a nice balance of color and design very funny joke executed well and overall just a nice full art piece here so nice work indeed on this piece make more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this fine piece

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BigBoxs responds:

Haha, so why the 4 stars?

[Self-Driving Cars]

Funny

So this was pretty funny I like the joke and the joke is executed very well too bad this was a short comic these web comics are pretty cool I could see you adding more color into these they are entertaining enough to have a series about them even just a suggestion though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color on the frames and such

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BigBoxs responds:

Thanks for the reviews, I mostly rush on this comic due to my situation at the time. Hopefully I can find a way to make comics flow more fluidly, and add colours in certain parts to get more of an impact.

[Hashiru Miko in progress]

Nice

This was cool I like the progress work here these are really nice the start to ending is very nice your energy is really good I like the style here only thing I would change would be some fancy or artistic borders but anyways nice work on the progress style here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some fancy borders and or frames

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CarolinaRei7 responds:

Thank you so much for your comments they are really helpful !! :D :D

[Work in progress]

I like it

I like the work in progress each frame shows good progress these types are really nice as they do show the progress but anyways nice work here nice coloring and good shading very well done and tons of energy you really did push some nice ideas here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing because it's a work in progress

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CarolinaRei7 responds:

:D :D hahahahaaah you're funny !! :P thank you for taking the time to comment!

[Earthquake]

Episode 761

Wow I have to say that is very impressive and you just dont see that anymore, I love that the borders are black on this and matches up with newgrounds theme here, but anyways funny comic as always nice story here too pretty funny if you ask me. anyways keep making a great comic series as you do here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really dont think you need improvements not in this one anyways as it runs on its own style and such.

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ChazDude responds:

'Episode'

Interesting terminology there, I see.

[Figure Drawing Practice 1]

Haha cute

Well I have to say is that is pretty cute love that you put the animal in front that was a good idea, and really love your character form here love the smooth linework and old style art style even, that was all a good thing, again I wouldnt mind some backround depth to this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround depth, like a scene or colored design.

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WooleyWorld responds:

bruh. go away.

[A choice...]

Nice

I love seeing the two sides of art pieces like this and this was pretty cool I like the style dark vs light I think as a form of improvment you could ad some cracks in the brick but that's just an idea and an opinion of course anyways nice work here nice ideas here make more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some cracks as a detail on the bricks

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amsyar555 responds:

Thanks! You're right, I should add more cracks to the bricks.

[Tracer Tease (GIF)]

Notbad

So the animation was notbad but seemed Abit choppy I think you could have had more flow and bounce to the animation it was not fluid enough but I did like the drawing here and was really well done and well drawn so nice work on this piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more fluid animation

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PaddleTone responds:

Yep, this was an early animation that I did and it shows. Thanks so much for the critique!