XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #21 Doodle World]

Busy

Ok this one here, this one was a bit too busy for me. There is a lot going on here which is fine but there is also a lot going on here with everything being the same color, black, which can really make you get lost in the work. I feel like I am looking at Where's Waldo in this type of drawing here where I am trying to find out where what is where and just getting lost. This may also be due to the size of the images and characters as they are very bunched together. Now this is not to say your art itself isn't good. I think you are talented and the things you've drawn here are very good indeed, but it would do to maybe separate them a bit and add color to give some distinction to this piece but good job and good ink.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color and more spacing/separation of characters

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Cyberdevil responds:

Mmm there could be some symbolism in that; getting lost in my world. :) Hidden messages was a bit what I was going for here, apart from just plain doodling, but with a more aesthetic eye I do get your feedback! Thanks for commenting.

[Krrowe]

Very intense

And here was a nice piece the "CHARACTER" is very fresh and sleek looking, love the backround even, I do think you could do some effects with the stars like some dim some brighter just my little tip though, So this is not soft by any means infact this is exactly as it should be, you added your own twist, And with flavor if I say so myself, so nice work here and hope you keep it going.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you could do some effects with the stars like some dim some brighter just my little tip though

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Kaxlene responds:

Actually those are sparks o . o but ill try that next time

[Dexter Project]

wow very nice

The "CHARACTERS" alone are really impressive and looks like you put some time and energy into these I wouldnt mind some shine on them a tad, Well this Concludes my review but there is such Exhilaration and you bring a certain Mythical and even Grand visuals here on this piece and I was pretty impressed with all that you have done here, And I will look for more of your work for sure, But before I go I do wish to say you have some decent talent here and it shows off very well, so keep on doing what you do its pretty awsome stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind some shine on them a tad

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JhonatanLechar responds:

Thank you for taking the time to elaborate on your review. It helps me a lot to understand your point of view. Thanks!

[You took it all, but.....]

Very cool

So I enjoy these types of pieces of paintings glad to see some real paint style on here from time to time, this one was pretty cool would have loved more "LIGHTING" to come in on a more domminant spread somehow but this is your creation and it all seemed to evolve from one end to the next I could see this hanging on my wall, very nice piece you have here, love your work adn the only "TIP" I would have here is keep making beautifull art and let the world see all your talents and insights of the world.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
just make more beautifull stuff such as this one.

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DrSevenSeizeMD responds:

Thanks! I have a lot of trouble with oil paint, but I wanna get better at it!

[The Most Amazing Thing]

Cool

This was a very nice "DESIGN" It reminds me of stuff I did in my spare time as a youngster all the lines and detail and how it all came together I would even ad some color on parts but regardless you can see some good meaning in this like the "EYE" looking on into something maybe the future, dont mind me I just enjoy these types, So its not everyday that you get to see the detail in a black and white theme, and you have done just that with this piece, it has all the makings of a brilliant piece your lines and detail even in its black and white form make it jump out at you with flavor.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Its your own style here with its own meaning so no major changes really needed here.

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DrSevenSeizeMD responds:

Thanks! I have a few older ones I've added color to, I think at least one is on here.
But mostly they're just a form of therapy.:-)

[Array]

Well notbad

This was cool I wouldn't mind more "LIGHT" coming in What you have here is really amazing you make the pixel become its own art style, and you bring out some good quality about this pixel style, and thats what I have really come to enjoy about this, and on that note I will suggest to keep making great pixel style artwork.

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Kldpxl responds:

Thank you!

[Girl With Umbrella]

Bat umbrella

I like the bat umbrella nice touch there love the dark tones in this piece and love the dark feel and vibe you push on your art style color and darkness along with a good idea make this such a beautiful piece of art and I'm very impressed with your style so keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
With this piece no changes needed

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Jomoko responds:

Thank you!

[Squirrely Boots in Soviet Garb]

A cute piece here

the character is simple but there is some nice stuff here, So I was pretty pleased with this you have outdone yourself, on this and this one has all the great elements in the right places, you do good work. maybe adding a Twist here and there would give it a more unique feel and look, but might be nice with some extra changes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Honestly no changes are needed I found it to be just right as is.

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Bertn1991 responds:

I very much appreciate it, sir. Good to hear from you again. I'm glad you enjoyed this commie squirrel. Thanks again.

Have a lovely day :)

[Clever lady]

Nice

This was another great charchter from you you have all the portions right the shadows even look good and I have to say this was just a nice design overall now the background was not bad but I could see you adding more of a scene or something like that

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background detail

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jthiagosena94 responds:

Thanks for your comment!

[Autumn]

Amazing

Wow I have to say that this is some amazing work at big lighting effect can go a long ways I do think you could have some of that lighting reflect off the eyes more would be a cool opinion that may improve on this piece but with that said this was a beautiful drawing painting

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting off the eyes

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StevenX7 responds:

Even though this is an older piece, I greatly appreciate your critique and will take it into consideration on future ones, thank you ^^