XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[In memory of Edd Gould...]

Notbad

So this was notbad it's a good tribute to an old artist among us reminds me of all the ones who have passed but you have presented a nice tribute here very beautiful piece a lovely effect with the animation I would suggest some sparkles dust when the characters are animated

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A nice piece here some added sparkle would be cool

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ScepterDPinoy responds:

I dunno if I can add sparkles since I'm unable to modify adding what you mentioned within the layers and the crt in a frame. I should added the flashing outer line arts around the character when a player is selected.

[Random drawing]

Very nice

This was cool I like the drawing here it was well done and some nice drawing detail the sketch itself with the fine lines was cool I think running this through a Photoshop for some special effects and added colors would have been pretty cool anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added effects and colors

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Rashuko responds:

Running this through photoshop is actually a good idea, I'll write that down.

[First "official" Animation]

Cool

I always like when there is art and animation and it's notbad for your first it flowed well the art of it all could use some polish though this was pretty good and I think some added details and colors in the background would have been pretty cool too so nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background color and detail

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Rashuko responds:

Thank you, I'm actually working on another animation with the same character so it should come out better than this.

[Escape]

Wow intense

Wow that was cool kind of intense actually I like the moon and the darkness surrounding I do think you should ad more lighting from the moon but overall this was pretty good and I like the art style very good detail here and just a beautiful piece of art here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting radias area

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Rashuko responds:

thanks for all the feedback, its something for me to keep in mind for future pieces or if i want to redo these.

[Who You Gonna Call?]

Live it

I have the tin can cartoon on DVD and have enjoyed the movies and the toons so this was a really good art piece of the cartoon characters I especially like the shine but overall this was pretty good a nice rendition of the characters you should make more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Really nothing with this piece

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Delicake responds:

Thank you! Yah I really like this cartoon its fun and has some really funny moments!

[Danny Phantom]

Very nice

This was very nice I like the background it was very detailed and was realistic love the texture and uncanny detail the character work was very welldone nice really nice line work and I have to say this was an impressive piece of art and can't wait to see more so keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes to this beautiful piece

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Delicake responds:

Thank you ^u^

[Batsu]

Nice

This was pretty nice I like the back view here and it was pretty good the red beams or whatever it was. Was kind of nifty very nice work you have done here the character was notbad either think all this needs is some lighting source or something anyways nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting source would be nice

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Delicake responds:

Thanks! I will try to be better with the light source in the future :D

[30 minute speedpaint - Comfortable Seat]

Wow I so love this

Wow now while this one is simple and subtle I really love this piece it's such a beautiful piece I love it for somany reasons it's my fave piece in all of newgrounds now and just love the simplistic style of this wish you had time to color this anyways nice work on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just some colored parts or all of it

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Borington responds:

Haha, thanks! I'm glad you like it.

[Three Little Mothers]

Love the creativity

So i like all the different elements in this one I do think you could ad some type of fancy border though, This piece here speaks volumes and jumps out at me with some nifty creativity, These types of submissions reall bring new insight to the style and craft. anyways keep up the good work. it was an interesting piece of art, could use some touch ups here and there and was overall pleased with the outcome, so nice effort indeed, This was Appropriately done well in a very symbolic way, now just keep it up on the rest of what you, wich you can see is fine so-far. But honestly you have some nice talent here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you could ad some type of fancy border though

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AdventVoice responds:

Borders would be nice. To kind of emphasize each character. It might have helped if I had a back story for them as well.

[The Mewx!]

Nice

This was cool, I like the style here and love the explosive animation going on, that was pretty amazing stuff, I love the "X" anyways nice work here onlything I would suggest would be to ad more versions of the explosion and such, but anyways this was pretty good stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest would be to ad more versions of the explosion and such

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ChutneyGlaze responds:

Thanks XwaynecoltX! I dont know what you mean add more versions of the explosions though. Butt thanks for the reply!